Thoughts on this logo? - GoFuckYourself.com

Lace · 10-24-2012, 01:16 PM

I *NEED* to get this damn domain up since I've had it sitting for four years now. First step - logo. Not sure if I like the second one or not. Kind of looks like a speech bubble, which would go along with the "critic" part of it and would look better on a solid background. And yes, I like them simple.

spazlabz · 10-24-2012, 01:19 PM

I like the second one

Grapesoda · 10-24-2012, 01:20 PM

with the color gradient in the logo already why not go for sunset?

Kenny B! · 10-24-2012, 01:20 PM

I vote #2! Wow I sound like currently sober ;-)

Pseudonymous · 10-24-2012, 01:20 PM

The 2nd looks good. I get a feeling that the darker shade of orange comes a little too close to the word "more" though

Lace · 10-24-2012, 01:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Pseudonymous

The 2nd looks good. I get a feeling that the darker shade of orange comes a little too close to the word "more" though

About the same on the top left too though. Hmmm..

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Originally Posted by Kenny B!

I vote #2! Wow I sound like currently sober ;-)

Haha!

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Originally Posted by Grapesoda

with the color gradient in the logo already why not go for sunset?

Do what??

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Originally Posted by spazlabz

I like the second one

Awesome. Thanks, Jim!

2012 · 10-24-2012, 01:22 PM

that's less of a choice than we had for president. it's the same logo, you need a few more examples to choose from

B.Barnato · 10-24-2012, 01:24 PM

I like the first one. The second one would work as you mentioned if it actually looked more like a speech bubble. Looks like a towel or a panty liner at the moment.

Still prefer the first one though. What is the font?

Va2k · 10-24-2012, 01:24 PM

Not bad not bad.. if you need help with a logo let me know bud.

shake · 10-24-2012, 01:26 PM

I would prefer the second one if the bubble was a little more rounded - looks a big strange. Both are good though. Don't waste too much time on it.

Grapesoda · 10-24-2012, 01:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Lace

Do what??

work a sunset into the image

Lace · 10-24-2012, 01:29 PM

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Originally Posted by 2012

that's less of a choice than we had for president. it's the same logo, you need a few more examples to choose from

First one I threw together. Only took 5 minutes, so it's surely nothing special. And as the thread states - "logo"

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Originally Posted by B.Barnato

I like the first one. The second one would work as you mentioned if it actually looked more like a speech bubble. Looks like a towel or a panty liner at the moment.

Still prefer the first one though. What is the font?

Font is Myriad Pro

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Originally Posted by Fungus

Not bad not bad.. if you need help with a logo let me know bud.

Thanks for the offer!

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Originally Posted by shake

I would prefer the second one if the bubble was a little more rounded - looks a big strange. Both are good though. Don't waste too much time on it.

Okay. Just literally played with the pen tool and that came out. So maybe I'll work on that a little more.

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Originally Posted by Grapesoda

work a sunset into the image

A sunset? What does that have to do with a Bar?

Imortyl Pussycat · 10-24-2012, 01:30 PM

i vote the second one

georgeyw · 10-24-2012, 01:37 PM

First one.

Slogan

"Let's get pissed!"

Verbal · 10-24-2012, 01:38 PM

I don't think the slogan will hold up when you shrink it down (on the site and promo material). The name is self-explanatory, so you don't NEED it, but it would be fun to see a representative icon as part of the logo to get a visual cue.

Perhaps make the 't' in critic a table-top and the "i"(s) people ... One happy one sad.

shitty idea perhaps, but you get the idea.

L-Pink · 10-24-2012, 01:42 PM

1st) The bottom one.
2nd) The photo of your mangled toe.
3rd) The top one.

lucas131 · 10-24-2012, 01:44 PM

i like the second one cause of the bubble

V_RocKs · 10-24-2012, 02:35 PM

Perhaps a bottle silhouette shape?

Zoxxa · 10-24-2012, 02:58 PM

Couple more ideas for you if interested.
The first comments graphic can be used commercially.
The second beer graphic one can not, so it's just as an example to give an idea for you.

DamianJ · 10-24-2012, 03:00 PM

Neither of them are logos. They are logotypes. A logo is the Nike swoosh or the apple, um, apple.

Zoxxa · 10-24-2012, 03:03 PM

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Originally Posted by DamianJ

Neither of them are logos. They are logotypes. A logo is the Nike swoosh or the apple, um, apple.

Um... Logotypes or wordmarks are considered logos, but thanks.

fitzmulti · 10-24-2012, 03:05 PM

LOL, Logo OR logotype </sarcasm> I like #2 ;-)

BSleazy · 10-24-2012, 03:15 PM

I like the first one. I like the 2nd one zoxxa did the best though.

Lace · 10-24-2012, 03:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Zoxxa

Couple more ideas for you if interested.
The first comments graphic can be used commercially.
The second beer graphic one can not, so it's just as an example to give an idea for you.

Wow. Really like the one with the beer here. Maybe I'll look for beer graphic I can use.

onwebcam · 10-24-2012, 03:22 PM

Being that I had one of the largest nightclub and bar directories over 10 years ago I'd go with what an earlier poster said and say don't spend a lot of time on it. You'll need all the time you can get updating openings and closings.

Zoxxa · 10-24-2012, 03:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Lace

Wow. Really like the one with the beer here. Maybe I'll look for beer graphic I can use.

Maybe you can contact the owner and get permission:
http://www.iconarchive.com/show/real...beer-icon.html

EDIT: I just realized you can buy the icon set here: http://www.iconshock.com/food-icons/

RevSand · 10-24-2012, 03:29 PM

Both by Zoxxa really make it look complete...

jaYMan · 10-24-2012, 03:30 PM

Love the beer one myself ;)

newB · 10-24-2012, 03:33 PM

I never noticed before, but the word 'critic' look a bit like an elephant's face.

Elephants never forget, hmmm, wonder if there's an angle worthy of exploration there?

Tofu · 10-24-2012, 03:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Kenny B!

I vote #2! Wow I sound like currently sober ;-)

Lace · 10-24-2012, 03:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zoxxa

Maybe you can contact the owner and get permission:
http://www.iconarchive.com/show/real...beer-icon.html

EDIT: I just realized you can buy the icon set here: http://www.iconshock.com/food-icons/

Awesome! Just sent them an email to see if they would sell just one. I don't need all of those other icons.

Rob · 10-24-2012, 03:57 PM

The beer one is the best.

loreen · 10-24-2012, 04:09 PM

But would the beer look good when the logo is 120px, on the site?

Lace · 10-24-2012, 04:10 PM

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Originally Posted by loreen

But would the beer look good when the logo is 120px, on the site?

I don't think I'll have the logo that small. And it looks okay in their cover sheet.

brassmonkey · 10-24-2012, 04:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lace

Wow. Really like the one with the beer here. Maybe I'll look for beer graphic I can use.

yep im having a few right now. home brewed

Zoxxa · 10-24-2012, 04:37 PM

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Originally Posted by loreen

But would the beer look good when the logo is 120px, on the site?

That would be an icon, it would obviously be modified at such a small size.

Lace if you are buying the icon, email me and I'll reply back with the PSD.
Will save you a few minutes recreating it.

Lace · 10-24-2012, 04:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Zoxxa

That would be an icon, it would obviously be modified at such a small size.

Lace if you are buying the icon, email me and I'll reply back with the PSD.
Will save you a few minutes recreating it.

Ok, will do. Waiting to hear back from them now.

tony286 · 10-24-2012, 04:58 PM

i vote #2

Lace · 10-24-2012, 05:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zoxxa

That would be an icon, it would obviously be modified at such a small size.

Lace if you are buying the icon, email me and I'll reply back with the PSD.
Will save you a few minutes recreating it.

Also found this - http://alfoart.com/cold_beer_glass_1.html

That might work, although it would take some time to duplicate unless I just used his 600px icon image.

Zoxxa · 10-24-2012, 05:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Lace

Also found this - http://alfoart.com/cold_beer_glass_1.html

That might work, although it would take some time to duplicate unless I just used his 600px icon image.

Edit: Oops, I used the wrong background, but you get the idea...

Chosen · 10-24-2012, 08:06 PM

Probably second one...

bronco67 · 10-24-2012, 08:10 PM

I like the first one. I actually like simple lookng stuff like this better than any design. Good color choice too.

glowlite · 10-24-2012, 08:10 PM

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Originally Posted by spazlabz

I like the second one

+1, yes, the 2nd one

Spunky · 10-24-2012, 08:21 PM

Any logo with beer in it attracts my attention

Lace · 10-25-2012, 08:47 AM

New revisions.

lucas131 · 10-25-2012, 08:52 AM

last one is nice

Bladewire · 10-25-2012, 08:57 AM

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Originally Posted by Lace

New revisions.

last one

2012 · 10-25-2012, 09:08 AM

^^^^
the Critic stands out tooo much. it kills everything else

move bar reviews,photos.... farther over to the right under the beer

10-24-2012, 01:16 PM	#1
Lace Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 16,116	Thoughts on this logo? I NEED to get this damn domain up since I've had it sitting for four years now. First step - logo. Not sure if I like the second one or not. Kind of looks like a speech bubble, which would go along with the "critic" part of it and would look better on a solid background. And yes, I like them simple. __________________ Your Paysite Partner Strength In Numbers! StickyDollars \| RadicalCash \| KennysPennies \| HomegrownCash

10-24-2012, 01:20 PM	#4
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10-24-2012, 01:20 PM	#5
Pseudonymous Photographer/Owner Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Vancouver, Canada Posts: 2,661	The 2nd looks good. I get a feeling that the darker shade of orange comes a little too close to the word "more" though __________________ Previous owner of SoloRevenue Previous product manager @ Modelcentro.com/MCProfits.com, IsMyGirl.com, SMRevenue.com

10-24-2012, 01:22 PM	#7
2012 So Fucking What Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 17,189	that's less of a choice than we had for president. it's the same logo, you need a few more examples to choose from __________________ best host: Webair \| best sponsor: Kink \| best coder: 688218966 \| Go Fuck Yourself

10-24-2012, 01:24 PM	#9
Va2k I’m still alive barley. Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Va Posts: 10,060	Not bad not bad.. if you need help with a logo let me know bud. __________________

10-24-2012, 01:19 PM	#2
spazlabz Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Kentucky Posts: 6,548	I like the second one

10-24-2012, 01:20 PM	#3
Grapesoda So Fucking Banned Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Montana Posts: 46,238	with the color gradient in the logo already why not go for sunset?

10-24-2012, 01:24 PM	#8
B.Barnato So Fucking Banned Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 3,618	I like the first one. The second one would work as you mentioned if it actually looked more like a speech bubble. Looks like a towel or a panty liner at the moment. Still prefer the first one though. What is the font?

10-24-2012, 01:26 PM	#10
shake frc Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Bitcoin wallet Posts: 4,663	I would prefer the second one if the bubble was a little more rounded - looks a big strange. Both are good though. Don't waste too much time on it. __________________ Crazy fast VPS for $10 a month. Try with $20 free credit

10-24-2012, 01:30 PM	#13
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10-24-2012, 01:37 PM	#14
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10-24-2012, 01:38 PM	#15
Verbal Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 3,420	I don't think the slogan will hold up when you shrink it down (on the site and promo material). The name is self-explanatory, so you don't NEED it, but it would be fun to see a representative icon as part of the logo to get a visual cue. Perhaps make the 't' in critic a table-top and the "i"(s) people ... One happy one sad. shitty idea perhaps, but you get the idea.

10-24-2012, 01:42 PM	#16
L-Pink working on my tan Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Florida/Kentucky Posts: 39,151	1st) The bottom one. 2nd) The photo of your mangled toe. 3rd) The top one.

10-24-2012, 01:44 PM	#17
lucas131 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 11,475	i like the second one cause of the bubble

10-24-2012, 02:35 PM	#18
V_RocKs Damn Right I Kiss Ass! Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Cowtown, USA Posts: 32,409	Perhaps a bottle silhouette shape?

10-24-2012, 02:58 PM	#19
Zoxxa Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 1,026	Couple more ideas for you if interested. The first comments graphic can be used commercially. The second beer graphic one can not, so it's just as an example to give an idea for you. __________________ [email protected] ICQ: 269486444 ZoxEmbedTube - Build unlimited "fake" tubes with this easy 100% unencoded CMS!

10-24-2012, 03:00 PM	#20
DamianJ Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: A magical land Posts: 15,808	Neither of them are logos. They are logotypes. A logo is the Nike swoosh or the apple, um, apple.

10-24-2012, 03:05 PM	#22
fitzmulti I Like Depth Of Field! Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Las Vegas, NV, USA: 36.12318 N, 115.090219 W Posts: 14,861	LOL, Logo OR logotype </sarcasm> I like #2 ;-) __________________ www.SexyGirlsCash.com CONTACT // FITZMULTI AT GMAIL.COM // {Please include a message so I know you are from GFY! I get too many spam "add requests"!}

10-24-2012, 03:15 PM	#23
BSleazy Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: USA Posts: 6,721	I like the first one. I like the 2nd one zoxxa did the best though. __________________ icq 156131086

10-24-2012, 03:22 PM	#25
onwebcam Fake Nick 1.0 Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Rent free, your head Posts: 27,661	Being that I had one of the largest nightclub and bar directories over 10 years ago I'd go with what an earlier poster said and say don't spend a lot of time on it. You'll need all the time you can get updating openings and closings. __________________ PLEASE WAIT WHILE BIDEN ADMIN UNINSTALLS ITSELF..... ██████████████████▒ 99.5% complete.

10-24-2012, 03:29 PM	#27
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10-24-2012, 03:30 PM	#28
jaYMan peace&profit, Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 4,885	Love the beer one myself ;) __________________ peace&profit, jaYMan

10-24-2012, 03:33 PM	#29
newB Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere between reality and total ape-shit bonkers. Posts: 2,870	I never noticed before, but the word 'critic' look a bit like an elephant's face. Elephants never forget, hmmm, wonder if there's an angle worthy of exploration there? __________________ The best Adult Affiliate Programs reviewed and indexed by niche and feature. Easily find the sponsors that suit your needs. Last edited by newB; 10-24-2012 at 03:34 PM..

10-24-2012, 03:57 PM	#32
Rob I'm a great bowler. Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Right Outside of Normal. Posts: 13,309	The beer one is the best. __________________

10-24-2012, 04:09 PM	#33
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10-24-2012, 04:58 PM	#38
tony286 lurker Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: atlanta Posts: 57,021	i vote #2

10-24-2012, 08:06 PM	#41
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10-24-2012, 08:10 PM	#42
bronco67 Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 29,032	I like the first one. I actually like simple lookng stuff like this better than any design. Good color choice too. __________________ Last edited by bronco67; 10-24-2012 at 08:11 PM..

10-24-2012, 08:21 PM	#44
Spunky I need a beer Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: ♠ Toiletville ♠ Posts: 133,939	Any logo with beer in it attracts my attention __________________ *YOUR INFORMATION HERE*

10-25-2012, 08:47 AM	#45
Lace Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 16,116	New revisions. __________________ Your Paysite Partner Strength In Numbers! StickyDollars \| RadicalCash \| KennysPennies \| HomegrownCash

10-25-2012, 08:52 AM	#46
lucas131 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 11,475	last one is nice

10-25-2012, 09:08 AM	#48
2012 So Fucking What Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 17,189	^^^^ the Critic stands out tooo much. it kills everything else move bar reviews,photos.... farther over to the right under the beer __________________ best host: Webair \| best sponsor: Kink \| best coder: 688218966 \| Go Fuck Yourself Last edited by 2012; 10-25-2012 at 09:10 AM..