My first tour, will this sell? - GoFuckYourself.com

Marcus · 12-17-2002, 09:21 PM

I heard that amateur looking tours sell, so do you think this will sell?

I did this for practice so be brutal. I want to learn to get better at selling.

http://www.teenvag.com/teenpatch/tour.php

Theres popups on that page

Juicy D. Links · 12-17-2002, 09:24 PM

Those are some hairy pussies

KRL · 12-17-2002, 09:33 PM

I liked that Marcus. It was very well designed and had a real girl kind of feel to it. The colors are good. The layout is good. The pitch is good. I think that will work for you very well.

Good Luck! Nothing as exciting as launching a new site in this biz!
The anticipation is what its all about.

Alky · 12-17-2002, 09:33 PM

i see a deer

EscortBiz · 12-17-2002, 09:37 PM

I see serious bacteria infections GROSS

Marcus · 12-17-2002, 09:44 PM

I dont know what the appeal is with hairy women, but if someone wants to pay for it then I'll take their money.

thanks KRL, btw I'm kicking ass with badpuppy, almost top 10 in sales last month and this month too. Great suggestion : )

Rory · 12-17-2002, 09:45 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Marcus
I heard that amateur looking tours sell, so do you think this will sell?

I did this for practice so be brutal. I want to learn to get better at selling.

http://www.teenvag.com/teenpatch/tour.php

Theres popups on that page

Looks good ..... only thing I could say is that that red seemed pretty in your face. Could see a less agrressive color but other than that it looks great.

Rory

demented · 12-17-2002, 09:49 PM

I can feel the hair stuck in my teeth now....

some_idiot · 12-17-2002, 09:53 PM

Kinda 1998 on the design ...but DAMN if you don't give
what you promise!

I hope a shaving site follows.

Not my niche, but it's clean enough you'll make a couple
sales.

Marcus · 12-17-2002, 09:56 PM

Cool thanks for the feedback! This is good for learning.

If it grosses people out then I think I did good, means I'm getting a strong reaction so that people who are into this niche will go for it.

.....

i think

d0se · 12-17-2002, 10:54 PM

I like it!

High Quality · 12-17-2002, 11:01 PM

KRL · 12-17-2002, 11:47 PM

Marcus, you might want to promote or advertise on this teen / hairy muff site. He's one of the biggest specializing in this niche and has more content than anyone I know of. He gets really good retaintions too.

http://www.atkingdom.com

Doctor Dre · 12-17-2002, 11:53 PM

I didn't wanted to see that point

Mogul · 12-18-2002, 12:00 AM

I think it is too red.

You should do well. We have a hairy site coming out within the week for AdultLogin.com. Not too much content as I just started shooting this month.

The niche makes bundles if you know how to work it and have exclusive or very rare content.

ATK buys up the whole damn market

Mogul
Mogul Networks Inc.

SexyMarie · 12-18-2002, 12:12 AM

Hi Marcus,

Nice tour but (no offence here) it's still not 'amateurish' enough

It's just too tidy and clean...

Plus one thing - I completely missed the texts in those scroll boxes! From my own experience people don't like to read too much (unless they are particularly interested in something).

As far as amateur tours are concerned - I used to have this tour http://www.sexymarie.com/tour_1_mod.htm (please don't laugh - it used to convert very, very well!)

harvey · 12-18-2002, 12:28 AM

It's OK, even in red

Lev · 12-18-2002, 12:32 AM

simple and nice layout

Marcus · 12-18-2002, 07:17 AM

KRL cool, I was just thinking about where I could buy hairy traffic.
Thanks for the critique all, appreciate your suggestions.

SIG357 · 12-18-2002, 07:31 AM

Looks good Marcus - people always want something new and hairy seems to be it right now (for some). Nice layout but I agree about the scroll boxes.

12-17-2002, 09:21 PM	#1
Marcus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 3,472	My first tour, will this sell? I heard that amateur looking tours sell, so do you think this will sell? I did this for practice so be brutal. I want to learn to get better at selling. http://www.teenvag.com/teenpatch/tour.php Theres popups on that page

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12-17-2002, 09:44 PM	#6
Marcus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 3,472	I dont know what the appeal is with hairy women, but if someone wants to pay for it then I'll take their money. thanks KRL, btw I'm kicking ass with badpuppy, almost top 10 in sales last month and this month too. Great suggestion : )

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demented Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Cincinnati Ohio Posts: 2,388	I can feel the hair stuck in my teeth now....

12-17-2002, 09:56 PM	#10
Marcus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 3,472	Cool thanks for the feedback! This is good for learning. If it grosses people out then I think I did good, means I'm getting a strong reaction so that people who are into this niche will go for it. ..... i think

12-17-2002, 10:54 PM	#11
d0se Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Western Australia Posts: 1,225	I like it!

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12-17-2002, 11:47 PM	#13
KRL Entrepreneur Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 31,429	Marcus, you might want to promote or advertise on this teen / hairy muff site. He's one of the biggest specializing in this niche and has more content than anyone I know of. He gets really good retaintions too. http://www.atkingdom.com

12-17-2002, 11:53 PM	#14
Doctor Dre Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 51,692	I didn't wanted to see that point

12-18-2002, 12:12 AM	#16
SexyMarie Registered User Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Europe Posts: 52	Hi Marcus, Nice tour but (no offence here) it's still not 'amateurish' enough It's just too tidy and clean... Plus one thing - I completely missed the texts in those scroll boxes! From my own experience people don't like to read too much (unless they are particularly interested in something). As far as amateur tours are concerned - I used to have this tour http://www.sexymarie.com/tour_1_mod.htm (please don't laugh - it used to convert very, very well!) __________________ Try me - real amateur program, real girl = real money

12-18-2002, 12:28 AM	#17
harvey Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: 127.0.0.1 Posts: 9,266	It's OK, even in red __________________ This post is endorsed by CIA, KGB, MI6, the Mafia, Illuminati, Kim Jong Il, Worldwide Ninjas Association, Klingon Empire and lolcats. Don't mess around with it, just accept it and embrace the truth

12-18-2002, 12:32 AM	#18
Lev Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,545	simple and nice layout

12-18-2002, 07:17 AM	#19
Marcus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 3,472	KRL cool, I was just thinking about where I could buy hairy traffic. Thanks for the critique all, appreciate your suggestions.

12-18-2002, 07:31 AM	#20
SIG357 Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 175	Looks good Marcus - people always want something new and hairy seems to be it right now (for some). Nice layout but I agree about the scroll boxes.