Hi Marcus,
Nice tour but (no offence here) it's still not 'amateurish' enough
It's just too tidy and clean...
Plus one thing - I completely missed the texts in those scroll boxes! From my own experience people don't like to read too much (unless they are particularly interested in something).
As far as amateur tours are concerned - I used to have this tour
http://www.sexymarie.com/tour_1_mod.htm (please don't laugh - it used to convert very, very well!)