My first tour, will this sell?
 

I heard that amateur looking tours sell, so do you think this will sell?

I did this for practice so be brutal. I want to learn to get better at selling.

http://www.teenvag.com/teenpatch/tour.php

Theres popups on that page

Those are some hairy pussies

I liked that Marcus. It was very well designed and had a real girl kind of feel to it. The colors are good. The layout is good. The pitch is good. I think that will work for you very well.

Good Luck! Nothing as exciting as launching a new site in this biz!
The anticipation is what its all about.

i see a deer

I see serious bacteria infections GROSS

I dont know what the appeal is with hairy women, but if someone wants to pay for it then I'll take their money. :glugglug

thanks KRL, btw I'm kicking ass with badpuppy, almost top 10 in sales last month and this month too. Great suggestion : )

Looks good ..... only thing I could say is that that red seemed pretty in your face. Could see a less agrressive color but other than that it looks great.

Rory

I can feel the hair stuck in my teeth now....

Kinda 1998 on the design ...but DAMN if you don't give
what you promise!

I hope a shaving site follows.

Not my niche, but it's clean enough you'll make a couple
sales.:1orglaugh

Cool thanks for the feedback! This is good for learning.

If it grosses people out then I think I did good, means I'm getting a strong reaction so that people who are into this niche will go for it.

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i think

I like it!

:throwup

Marcus, you might want to promote or advertise on this teen / hairy muff site. He's one of the biggest specializing in this niche and has more content than anyone I know of. He gets really good retaintions too.

http://www.atkingdom.com

I didn't wanted to see that point

I think it is too red.

You should do well. We have a hairy site coming out within the week for AdultLogin.com. Not too much content as I just started shooting this month.

The niche makes bundles if you know how to work it and have exclusive or very rare content.

ATK buys up the whole damn market :)

Mogul
Mogul Networks Inc.

Hi Marcus,

Nice tour but (no offence here) it's still not 'amateurish' enough :)
It's just too tidy and clean...

Plus one thing - I completely missed the texts in those scroll boxes! From my own experience people don't like to read too much (unless they are particularly interested in something).

As far as amateur tours are concerned - I used to have this tour http://www.sexymarie.com/tour_1_mod.htm (please don't laugh - it used to convert very, very well!)

It's OK, even in red :)

simple and nice layout :thumbsup

KRL cool, I was just thinking about where I could buy hairy traffic.
Thanks for the critique all, appreciate your suggestions.

Looks good Marcus - people always want something new and hairy seems to be it right now (for some). Nice layout but I agree about the scroll boxes.