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Silent_Thunder · 02-13-2005, 01:47 PM

Hi, could you look through this text and correct any mistakes you will notice. Grammar ( especially artciles ), logical, spelling, etc... Thank you very much, this is very important for me!

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NOTES OF BOOKING A TICKET FOR A FLIGHT

Step 1
When you get a booking request you have to establish ticket record and to look if there is any vacant seat left.

Step 2
? If there is no vacant seat left, add the request to waiting list and inform enquirer about the request. You are done with this request.
? If there is a vacant seat left, you have to check if the booking request is firm.

Step 3
? If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform enquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.
? If the booking request isn?t firm, add it to the provisional booking requests list and ask enquirer for a confirmation for this request.

Step 4
? If you get the confirmation for the booking request, add it to the firm booking requests list.
? If you don?t get the confirmation for the booking request, cancel this booking and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it is confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list.

Step 5
Inform enquirer about the firm booking request and check if there is enough credit left for the ticket.

Step 6
? If the credit is good, you have to up-date cash record and then print the ticket. You are done with this request.
? If the credit isn?t good, you have to demand for the payment.

Step 7
? If you receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, up-date cash record and then print the ticket. You are done with this request.
? If you don?t receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, cancel this booking request and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it?s confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list. Go to step 5.

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Thanks for any corrections you will make.

alexg · 02-13-2005, 01:53 PM

nah i don't feel like doing it

Silent_Thunder · 02-13-2005, 01:54 PM

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Originally Posted by alexg

nah i don't feel like doing it

Just try, you may find it entertaining

spideriux · 02-13-2005, 01:57 PM

my english language is only normal :/

Manowar · 02-13-2005, 01:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by alexg

nah i don't feel like doing it

Silent_Thunder · 02-13-2005, 01:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by spideriux

my english language is only normal :/

Hi mate, glad to see some people from our motherland

gangbangjoe · 02-13-2005, 01:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by spideriux

my english language is only normal :/

im german and my english sucks

bdld · 02-13-2005, 02:00 PM

i would if i was bored.

Spunky · 02-13-2005, 02:02 PM

I dint gets no edumacations

Silent_Thunder · 02-13-2005, 02:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Manowar

Silent_Thunder · 02-13-2005, 02:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bdld

i would if i was bored.

I give you an opportunity to show how clever you are. Take it!

Homer · 02-13-2005, 02:06 PM

My english is not very good, but I don't see any major mistakes

Silent_Thunder · 02-13-2005, 02:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Homer

My english is not very good, but I don't see any major mistakes

Thanks

thefool · 02-13-2005, 02:11 PM

Step 1
When you get a booking request you have to establish a ticket record and look to see if there are any vacant seats left.

Step 2
? If there are no vacant seats left, add the request to the waiting list and inform the enquirer about the request. Your request is now complete.
? If there is a vacant seat available, you then must check to see if the booking request is firm.

Step 3
? If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.
? If the booking request isn?t firm, add it to the provisional booking requests list and ask the enquirer for a confirmation for this request.

Step 4
? If you get the confirmation for the booking request, add it to the firm booking requests list.
? If you don?t get the confirmation for the booking request, cancel this booking and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it is confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list.

Step 5
Inform the enquirer about the firm booking request and check if there is enough credit available for the ticket.

Step 6
? If the credit is good, you have to update the cash record and then print the ticket. This request is now complete.
? If the credit isn?t available, then you must demand for the payment.

Step 7
? If you receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, update the cash record and then print the ticket. This request is now complete.
? If you don?t receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, cancel this booking request and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it?s confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list. Go to step 5.

Silent_Thunder · 02-13-2005, 02:23 PM

thefool, thank you very very much!

I looked through all of your corrections and I liked this sentence the most:
"Your request is now complete."

Again thanks, now I feel that I will get a nice grade for this stuff

Tala · 02-13-2005, 02:27 PM

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Step 3
If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.

Mind the spaces. A small oversight can lead to a small grade reduction.

Step 3
If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.

Silent_Thunder · 02-13-2005, 02:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tala

Mind the spaces. A small oversight can lead to a small grade reduction.

Step 3
If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5.

Yep, I fixed it. But still thanks!

Actually I didnt expect so much help on this from GFY!

Tala · 02-13-2005, 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silent_Thunder

Yep, I fixed it. But still thanks!

Actually I didnt expect so much help on this from GFY!

To be honest, GFY is one of those places where folks like to help each other, but there's this whole ego thing that likes to get in the way. Sift through the bullshit to find the occasional diamond.

thefool · 02-13-2005, 02:43 PM

I dont mind offering advice... after all when I need it, I hope someone will help me

basically it sounded pretty good, just need to watch your is/are usage

thefool · 02-13-2005, 02:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silent_Thunder

thefool, thank you very very much!

I looked through all of your corrections and I liked this sentence the most:
"Your request is now complete."

Again thanks, now I feel that I will get a nice grade for this stuff

You're very welcome

02-13-2005, 01:47 PM	#1
Silent_Thunder Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Europe Posts: 5,258	If your english language skills are good, please look inside! Hi, could you look through this text and correct any mistakes you will notice. Grammar ( especially artciles ), logical, spelling, etc... Thank you very much, this is very important for me! -------------START COPYING CODE HERE-------------- NOTES OF BOOKING A TICKET FOR A FLIGHT Step 1 When you get a booking request you have to establish ticket record and to look if there is any vacant seat left. Step 2 ? If there is no vacant seat left, add the request to waiting list and inform enquirer about the request. You are done with this request. ? If there is a vacant seat left, you have to check if the booking request is firm. Step 3 ? If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform enquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5. ? If the booking request isn?t firm, add it to the provisional booking requests list and ask enquirer for a confirmation for this request. Step 4 ? If you get the confirmation for the booking request, add it to the firm booking requests list. ? If you don?t get the confirmation for the booking request, cancel this booking and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it is confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list. Step 5 Inform enquirer about the firm booking request and check if there is enough credit left for the ticket. Step 6 ? If the credit is good, you have to up-date cash record and then print the ticket. You are done with this request. ? If the credit isn?t good, you have to demand for the payment. Step 7 ? If you receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, up-date cash record and then print the ticket. You are done with this request. ? If you don?t receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, cancel this booking request and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it?s confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list. Go to step 5. -------------END OF THE CODE-------------- Thanks for any corrections you will make.

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02-13-2005, 02:11 PM	#14
thefool Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: ICQ 341530034 Posts: 1,593	Step 1 When you get a booking request you have to establish a ticket record and look to see if there are any vacant seats left. Step 2 ? If there are no vacant seats left, add the request to the waiting list and inform the enquirer about the request. Your request is now complete. ? If there is a vacant seat available, you then must check to see if the booking request is firm. Step 3 ? If the booking request is firm, add it to the firm booking requests list and inform theenquirer about the request. Skip step 4 and go to step 5. ? If the booking request isn?t firm, add it to the provisional booking requests list and ask the enquirer for a confirmation for this request. Step 4 ? If you get the confirmation for the booking request, add it to the firm booking requests list. ? If you don?t get the confirmation for the booking request, cancel this booking and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it is confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list. Step 5 Inform the enquirer about the firm booking request and check if there is enough credit available for the ticket. Step 6 ? If the credit is good, you have to update the cash record and then print the ticket. This request is now complete. ? If the credit isn?t available, then you must demand for the payment. Step 7 ? If you receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, update the cash record and then print the ticket. This request is now complete. ? If you don?t receive the payment for the ticket until the time limit is reached, cancel this booking request and take the next booking request from the waiting list. Check if it?s confirmed. Repeat this action until you get a confirmed booking request and then add it to the firm booking requests list. Go to step 5. __________________ NF pays $50 for each new join!

02-13-2005, 02:23 PM	#15
Silent_Thunder Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Europe Posts: 5,258	thefool, thank you very very much! I looked through all of your corrections and I liked this sentence the most: "Your request is now complete." Again thanks, now I feel that I will get a nice grade for this stuff

02-13-2005, 02:43 PM	#19
thefool Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: ICQ 341530034 Posts: 1,593	I dont mind offering advice... after all when I need it, I hope someone will help me basically it sounded pretty good, just need to watch your is/are usage __________________ NF pays $50 for each new join!