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Dynamix · 11-07-2004, 11:36 PM

Going for something plain, as few colors as possible so it can be used in print materials as well. Your thoughts?

MetaMan · 11-07-2004, 11:37 PM

small lighter blue gradient coming from the top.

galleryseek · 11-07-2004, 11:38 PM

why is it that the girl doesn't have a shadow? is she a ghost? hand it over to me and i'll make it look good for $50

Chris · 11-07-2004, 11:39 PM

the font kills it

need to do something with that font

Dynamix · 11-07-2004, 11:39 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by galleryseek
why is it that the girl doesn't have a shadow? is she a ghost? hand it over to me and i'll make it look good for $50

if I had $50 it'd be in your hands 20 minutes ago

Dynamix · 11-07-2004, 11:50 PM

This is the one I'm currently using, has a drawing of the goddess Calliope..

James White · 11-07-2004, 11:52 PM

Different font

Dynamix · 11-07-2004, 11:57 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by James White
Different font

something serif? like Times? or what would you recommend..

11-07-2004, 11:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by James White
Different font

definately the font...

BlingDaddy · 11-08-2004, 12:05 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Dynamix
if I had $50 it'd be in your hands 20 minutes ago

Let me preface this with "I'm a fucking retard."

Are you going for Calliope as in the musical collaboration?
Just wondering.

Dynamix · 11-08-2004, 12:11 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by BlingDaddy
Let me preface this with "I'm a fucking retard."

Are you going for Calliope as in the musical collaboration?
Just wondering.

Haha.. I'm a fucking retard, if I had $50 it'd be in your hands

And no, Calliope as in the Greek muse.. http://www.godchecker.com/pantheon/g...deity=CALLIOPE

chupachups · 11-08-2004, 12:13 AM

Just fooling around a bit

Dynamix · 11-08-2004, 12:14 AM

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Originally posted by Chupachups
Just fooling around a bit

I definiately like this a lot better so far

CraveContent · 11-08-2004, 12:15 AM

the girl has a funny shape

SomeCreep · 11-08-2004, 12:16 AM

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Originally posted by Dynamix
Your thoughts?

The logo lacks contrast. Try using some black.

reynold · 11-08-2004, 03:43 PM

it will look great if the colors have a darker tone.

Tipsy · 11-08-2004, 03:45 PM

I agree with several. The font doesn't quite work, the contrast isn't high enough and I also think the girl looks...'wrong'. She just doesn't seem to fit well on top of the letters.

SultryMal · 11-08-2004, 07:08 PM

I like it better than the first, good job, maybe change somethin about the girl

Verbal · 11-08-2004, 07:13 PM

The girl looks like she's holding on for dear life

XPays · 11-08-2004, 07:16 PM

somebody with some skills, please make the logo in 5 minutes for our peer

they'll thank you publicly for oodles and you can consider it a trade deal.

polish_aristocrat · 11-08-2004, 07:18 PM

You really don't have $50?

chupachups · 11-08-2004, 07:20 PM

The girl looks a bit like a mermaid.. hmm..

post her here _without_ the calliope-text and I´ll see what I can do.

ShaneRyale · 11-08-2004, 07:53 PM

The new font looks better. Going in the right direction.

Fletch XXX · 11-08-2004, 07:53 PM

not sure

chupachups · 11-08-2004, 08:03 PM

just some quickies....

KRL · 11-08-2004, 08:16 PM

devilspost · 11-08-2004, 08:24 PM

The whole problem is the name sucks

neverlearn · 11-08-2004, 08:51 PM

y'know what i think...I dont have the vectors so I did that just for posistioning etc...I think it looks great as is ...just might wanna try spinnin the chick 'round?

sickkittens · 11-08-2004, 08:53 PM

I'm not liking that font at all plus her hand doesn't look right. (It looks like she should be falling off.)

jacked · 11-08-2004, 08:54 PM

go with a lighter blue the font isn't bad it looks very clean and professional

Dynamix · 11-08-2004, 08:55 PM

I've given up on the logo so far lol. See related contest thread:

http://www.gofuckyourself.com/showth...adid=385571&s=

sickkittens · 11-08-2004, 08:56 PM

And honestly, try out places like designoutpost. They'll comeup w/ a good design most of the time and it's rater cheap.

n3in · 11-08-2004, 09:03 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by neverlearn

y'know what i think...I dont have the vectors so I did that just for posistioning etc...I think it looks great as is ...just might wanna try spinnin the chick 'round?

i like the looks of that one

neverlearn · 11-08-2004, 09:06 PM

the font is poifect...the chick is nicely styled...I think you should stick to your guns...if that was my logo I would be proud.

* on a second note for animation... you could have shadow just "appear"

tony286 · 11-08-2004, 10:41 PM

I like it just the way it is.

Doctor Dre · 11-08-2004, 10:44 PM

I hate the font . I dunno it look very 1996

Dynamix · 11-08-2004, 10:46 PM

somebody please redo it for me lol! see my related thread '$50 logo contest'

chupachups · 11-08-2004, 10:49 PM

send me the psd file if you got it and I´ll fix it up

pornguy · 11-08-2004, 10:55 PM

I actually like the older one better.
The new one looks too typical.

Dynamix · 11-08-2004, 10:57 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Chupachups
send me the psd file if you got it and I´ll fix it up

www.calliopegroup.com/calliope.psd

chupachups · 11-08-2004, 11:24 PM

Some more mocks..

WWC - Jimmy · 11-08-2004, 11:28 PM

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Originally posted by Dynamix
something serif? like Times? or what would you recommend..

The right font will really bring it out. It's too dull right now..

neverlearn · 11-08-2004, 11:31 PM

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ITS A GOOD LOGO JUST SPIN THE CHICK AROUND AND MAKE MINOR ARM CHANGES SO SHE DOENT LOOK LIKE SHES GOT GOOD SIZED PIPES AND YOU CAN SPEND YOUR FIFTY BUCKS ON CANADIAN BEER!

Yug · 11-08-2004, 11:32 PM

those last ones look good 'chupachups' ...

what about using a heavier font ... perhaps a bit of frutiger or futura ...

or offset the first part of the word with a bold heavy font, and the second part in a thinnner version of that same font

I might try to mock up something myself later if i get the time

Easton · 11-08-2004, 11:33 PM

put the font on slight slant, like it's blowing in the wind

neverlearn · 11-08-2004, 11:35 PM

oh for fucks sakes

SinSational · 11-08-2004, 11:40 PM

the font in the orig seems too plain.

ProjectNaked · 11-08-2004, 11:54 PM

Put her on the floor, in front of the logo...

Dynamix · 11-09-2004, 12:12 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Chupachups
Some more mocks..

I'm diggin the second one. perhaps somebody could add a camera icon? other than that she looks good

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