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  • Dynamix
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    • Jan 2004
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    #1

    Please critique this logo.. it's lacking something

    Going for something plain, as few colors as possible so it can be used in print materials as well. Your thoughts?



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  • MetaMan
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    • Jan 2003
    • 28682

    #2
    small lighter blue gradient coming from the top.

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    • galleryseek
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      • Mar 2002
      • 8234

      #3
      why is it that the girl doesn't have a shadow? is she a ghost? hand it over to me and i'll make it look good for $50

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      • Chris
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        • May 2003
        • 27880

        #4
        the font kills it

        need to do something with that font
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        • Dynamix
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          • Jan 2004
          • 2910

          #5
          Originally posted by galleryseek
          why is it that the girl doesn't have a shadow? is she a ghost? hand it over to me and i'll make it look good for $50
          if I had $50 it'd be in your hands 20 minutes ago

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          • Dynamix
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            • Jan 2004
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            #6
            This is the one I'm currently using, has a drawing of the goddess Calliope..


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            • James White
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              • Apr 2004
              • 1405

              #7
              Different font
              SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60. Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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              • Dynamix
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                • Jan 2004
                • 2910

                #8
                Originally posted by James White
                Different font
                something serif? like Times? or what would you recommend..

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                • buddyjuf

                  #9
                  Originally posted by James White
                  Different font
                  definately the font...

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                  • BlingDaddy
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                    • Apr 2004
                    • 6343

                    #10
                    Originally posted by Dynamix
                    if I had $50 it'd be in your hands 20 minutes ago
                    Let me preface this with "I'm a fucking retard."

                    Are you going for Calliope as in the musical collaboration?
                    Just wondering.
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                    • Dynamix
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                      • Jan 2004
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                      #11
                      Originally posted by BlingDaddy
                      Let me preface this with "I'm a fucking retard."

                      Are you going for Calliope as in the musical collaboration?
                      Just wondering.

                      Haha.. I'm a fucking retard, if I had $50 it'd be in your hands


                      And no, Calliope as in the Greek muse.. http://www.godchecker.com/pantheon/g...deity=CALLIOPE

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                      • chupachups
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                        • Dec 2002
                        • 6576

                        #12
                        Just fooling around a bit

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                        • Dynamix
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                          • Jan 2004
                          • 2910

                          #13
                          Originally posted by Chupachups
                          Just fooling around a bit

                          I definiately like this a lot better so far

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                          • CraveContent
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                            • Apr 2004
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                            #14
                            the girl has a funny shape
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                            • SomeCreep
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                              • Mar 2003
                              • 26118

                              #15
                              Originally posted by Dynamix
                              Your thoughts?
                              The logo lacks contrast. Try using some black.

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                              • reynold
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                                • Oct 2002
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                                #16
                                it will look great if the colors have a darker tone.

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                                • Tipsy
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                                  • Jul 2001
                                  • 6989

                                  #17
                                  I agree with several. The font doesn't quite work, the contrast isn't high enough and I also think the girl looks...'wrong'. She just doesn't seem to fit well on top of the letters.
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                                  • SultryMal
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                                    • Sep 2004
                                    • 80

                                    #18
                                    I like it better than the first, good job, maybe change somethin about the girl

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                                    • Verbal
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                                      • Dec 2001
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                                      #19
                                      The girl looks like she's holding on for dear life

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                                      • XPays
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                                        #20
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                                        • polish_aristocrat
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                                          #21
                                          You really don't have $50?
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                                          • chupachups
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                                            • Dec 2002
                                            • 6576

                                            #22
                                            The girl looks a bit like a mermaid.. hmm..

                                            post her here _without_ the calliope-text and I´ll see what I can do.

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                                            • ShaneRyale
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                                              • Mar 2004
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                                              #23
                                              The new font looks better. Going in the right direction.
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                                                #24
                                                not sure

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                                                • chupachups
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                                                  #25
                                                  just some quickies....

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                                                    • devilspost
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                                                      #27
                                                      The whole problem is the name sucks

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                                                      • neverlearn
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                                                        • Feb 2004
                                                        • 2085

                                                        #28

                                                        y'know what i think...I dont have the vectors so I did that just for posistioning etc...I think it looks great as is ...just might wanna try spinnin the chick 'round?
                                                        DICK TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR.
                                                        Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.
                                                        Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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                                                        • sickkittens
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                                                          • Jul 2002
                                                          • 25100

                                                          #29
                                                          I'm not liking that font at all plus her hand doesn't look right. (It looks like she should be falling off.)

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                                                          • jacked
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                                                            #30
                                                            go with a lighter blue the font isn't bad it looks very clean and professional
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                                                            • Dynamix
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                                                              • Jan 2004
                                                              • 2910

                                                              #31
                                                              I've given up on the logo so far lol. See related contest thread:

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                                                              • sickkittens
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                                                                #32
                                                                And honestly, try out places like designoutpost. They'll comeup w/ a good design most of the time and it's rater cheap.

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                                                                • n3in
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                                                                  • Jan 2004
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                                                                  #33
                                                                  Originally posted by neverlearn

                                                                  y'know what i think...I dont have the vectors so I did that just for posistioning etc...I think it looks great as is ...just might wanna try spinnin the chick 'round?
                                                                  i like the looks of that one
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                                                                  • neverlearn
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                                                                    • Feb 2004
                                                                    • 2085

                                                                    #34
                                                                    the font is poifect...the chick is nicely styled...I think you should stick to your guns...if that was my logo I would be proud.

                                                                    * on a second note for animation... you could have shadow just "appear"
                                                                    DICK TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR.
                                                                    Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.
                                                                    Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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                                                                    • tony299
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                                                                      • Aug 2002
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                                                                      #35
                                                                      I like it just the way it is.

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                                                                      • Doctor Dre
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                                                                        • Jan 2001
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                                                                        #36
                                                                        I hate the font . I dunno it look very 1996
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                                                                        • Dynamix
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                                                                          • Jan 2004
                                                                          • 2910

                                                                          #37
                                                                          somebody please redo it for me lol! see my related thread '$50 logo contest'

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                                                                          • chupachups
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                                                                            #38
                                                                            send me the psd file if you got it and I´ll fix it up

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                                                                            • pornguy
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                                                                              #39
                                                                              I actually like the older one better.
                                                                              The new one looks too typical.
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                                                                              • Dynamix
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                                                                                • 2910

                                                                                #40
                                                                                Originally posted by Chupachups
                                                                                send me the psd file if you got it and I´ll fix it up
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                                                                                • chupachups
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                                                                                  #41
                                                                                  Some more mocks..


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                                                                                  • WWC - Jimmy
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                                                                                    • Sep 2004
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                                                                                    #42
                                                                                    Originally posted by Dynamix
                                                                                    something serif? like Times? or what would you recommend..
                                                                                    The right font will really bring it out. It's too dull right now..
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                                                                                    • neverlearn
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                                                                                      • Feb 2004
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                                                                                      #43
                                                                                      FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ITS A GOOD LOGO JUST SPIN THE CHICK AROUND AND MAKE MINOR ARM CHANGES SO SHE DOENT LOOK LIKE SHES GOT GOOD SIZED PIPES AND YOU CAN SPEND YOUR FIFTY BUCKS ON CANADIAN BEER!

                                                                                      Last edited by neverlearn; 11-08-2004, 09:33 PM.
                                                                                      DICK TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR.
                                                                                      Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.
                                                                                      Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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                                                                                      • Yug
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                                                                                        • Dec 2002
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                                                                                        #44
                                                                                        those last ones look good 'chupachups' ...

                                                                                        what about using a heavier font ... perhaps a bit of frutiger or futura ...

                                                                                        or offset the first part of the word with a bold heavy font, and the second part in a thinnner version of that same font



                                                                                        I might try to mock up something myself later if i get the time
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                                                                                        • Easton
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                                                                                          #45
                                                                                          put the font on slight slant, like it's blowing in the wind
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                                                                                          • neverlearn
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                                                                                            • Feb 2004
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                                                                                            #46
                                                                                            oh for fucks sakes
                                                                                            DICK TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR.
                                                                                            Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.
                                                                                            Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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                                                                                            • SinSational
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                                                                                              • Oct 2004
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                                                                                              #47
                                                                                              the font in the orig seems too plain.

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                                                                                              • ProjectNaked
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                                                                                                #48
                                                                                                Put her on the floor, in front of the logo...

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                                                                                                • Dynamix
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                                                                                                  • Jan 2004
                                                                                                  • 2910

                                                                                                  #49
                                                                                                  Originally posted by Chupachups
                                                                                                  Some more mocks..
                                                                                                  I'm diggin the second one. perhaps somebody could add a camera icon? other than that she looks good

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