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Persius · 04-10-2004, 09:52 AM

lol every1 is using that skyline effect :|

thediablo · 04-10-2004, 09:56 AM

i think the skyline distracts u somehow,

but thats just me

mind · 04-11-2004, 01:03 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot
Mind -

As regards your latest two submissions, I personally like the first of the two with the ring around it and but would have liked to see some skyline within the confines of that ring. Also since youre including skyline, the fact that you made it much more faint is a vast improvement though I would suggest that "london bridge" and "big ben" should be shown as much as the "london eye" rather than hidden behind the girl.

Also, I dont think he wants any change to the existing home/faq/booking/etc tabs as they are okay and are separate to the logo image sections which can be changed easily enough.

I cant say for sure until ive shown my client but as far i am concerned these two are the best we've seen from you so far.

Good work (or to translate into less conversative US language: "they rock!")

Thanks for the comments i'm sure i can make those changes fairly easy - however my next couple of entries i'll save for a few days since apparently a lot of people are joining the contest this weekend. But i'm glad you liked it

mind · 04-11-2004, 01:09 AM

And btw...thanks to all others who commented on my designs

samsam · 04-11-2004, 12:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by thediablo
and here it is...
still trying to make a shape...
Since you liked my first entry i modified it a little so now it has the rules and stuff....

okay but first attempt was much better IMHO

still nice compared to others though

samsam · 04-12-2004, 03:16 PM

well it looks like you guys are all logo'd out

so wait for mine on friday

Doctor Dre · 04-12-2004, 03:18 PM

I can't wait to see wich ones will be choose :P

mind · 04-13-2004, 03:11 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot
Mind -

As regards your latest two submissions, I personally like the first of the two with the ring around it and but would have liked to see some skyline within the confines of that ring.

done :D

Quote:

Also, I dont think he wants any change to the existing home/faq/booking/etc tabs as they are okay and are separate to the logo image sections which can be changed easily enough.

I'm just fooling around on that part - so basically its not part of the logo - just me giving some extra "free of charge" options

Here it is:

and some logos to go with it

ideasign · 04-13-2004, 07:20 AM

here i am

Danil,
www.ideasign.biz
265443530

mind · 04-13-2004, 07:31 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by mind

I'm just fooling around on that part - so basically its not part of the logo - just me giving some extra "free of charge" options

Here it is:

and some logos to go with it

lol just realised i spelled premium wrong on all the logo's - lesson to be learned dont finalize logos just before bedtime.

chupachups · 04-13-2004, 07:58 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by ideasign
here i am

Danil,
www.ideasign.biz
265443530

mind · 04-13-2004, 08:24 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by ideasign
here i am

Danil,
www.ideasign.biz
265443530

Nice - it reminds me of something i can't quite put my finger on..

DR_PHIL · 04-13-2004, 08:32 AM

nice jobs guys

mind · 04-13-2004, 08:53 AM

Not entirely the same but i got me thinking of this :D

Monogram of HRH. Queen of Denmark

and we seem to have a thing for crowns in denmark :D

and still it reminds me of something else too...dunno what lol..man im bored today

Vendot · 04-13-2004, 02:22 PM

Mind -

With regards to your latest submission, following feedback from my client:

(1) The font and style of the "PremiumGirls.co.uk" isnt all that strong and there should probably be some better font and spacing for the .co.uk bit aswell.

(2) The address itself should be easy to read (even away from screen) and remember. Having a totally filled in "Premium" and "Girls" part might work better. You might want to try some different color combos that have been tried before like strong red (for "Premium") with light red (for "Girls") or strong green (for "Premium") and strong red for "Girls". One of TheDiablo's entries is very strong on lettering.

(3) The london eye is incomplete if you look closely - a whole section of the wheel is just missing (terrorist attack?).

(4) The shading in the top right of the ring around the logo is slightly too strong - it should be more subtle. Its like a bit too much blusher there.

(5) The font used for "CREME DE LA CREME" and "INTERNATIONAL CALLS" (including the international number) is just not a UK style. It would be better if it was closer to whats on the existing site.

(6) You should try applying what you have to frame of the existing site to see how it looks and ensure that it fits well - this is the most crucial aspect.

Apart from that, everything else is fine and it is a vast improvement on how it looked before. More importantly, my client likes this latest submission *a lot*

With some strong adjustments, this could be the front runner.

FuckFind · 04-13-2004, 03:01 PM

I keep wanting to get in on this but so many ideas have been taken!

Great job designers, good to see this contest...

1) Great contest founder, I like your style and feedback Vendot.
2) Great designs and volume from the designers!

FF!

Vendot · 04-13-2004, 04:36 PM

GUYS -

Thanks for the great feedback FuckFind. I am very encouraged by the amount of positive comments I have received.

As regards taken ideas.... dont despair as same ideas can always be presented in a different way. Remember, my client doesnt seem to know exactly what he wants, just that he will know what he wants when he sees it and of course the guidelines and feedback we have given is there to give direction.

ADVICE TO ASPIRING WINNERS:

The strongest work will be submitted by those who have carefully read the rules in the intial post, studied the existing site design, follow up posts and the feedback I have posted along the way.

DEADLINE WARNING:

As previously stated, the winners *will* be chosen on April 20th and there is now less than one week left. Time is running out sweet people, so get your entries in quickly (ie much before 20th).

Once again, the winners will be chosen on April 20th.

mind · 04-14-2004, 08:19 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot

(1) The font and style of the "PremiumGirls.co.uk" isnt all that strong and there should probably be some better font and spacing for the .co.uk bit aswell.

-done

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot

(2) The address itself should be easy to read (even away from screen) and remember. Having a totally filled in "Premium" and "Girls" part might work better. You might want to try some different color combos that have been tried before like strong red (for "Premium") with light red (for "Girls") or strong green (for "Premium") and strong red for "Girls". One of TheDiablo's entries is very strong on lettering.

-done

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot

(3) The london eye is incomplete if you look closely - a whole section of the wheel is just missing (terrorist attack?).

-done (one of the carts was down for maintainence) :D

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot
(4) The shading in the top right of the ring around the logo is slightly too strong - it should be more subtle. Its like a bit too much blusher there.

- agreed, done

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot
(5) The font used for "CREME DE LA CREME" and "INTERNATIONAL CALLS" (including the international number) is just not a UK style. It would be better if it was closer to whats on the existing site.

- done

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot
(6) You should try applying what you have to frame of the existing site to see how it looks and ensure that it fits well - this is the most crucial aspect.

- done

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot

Apart from that, everything else is fine and it is a vast improvement on how it looked before. More importantly, my client likes this latest submission *a lot*

- good :D

Quote:

Originally posted by vendot
With some strong adjustments, this could be the front runner. [/B]

- lol yeah thanks for the very descriptive comments :D

mind · 04-14-2004, 08:24 AM

Here are a few shots:

Entry #New | 1

Entry #New | 2

Entry #New | 3

Entry #New | 4

samsam · 04-14-2004, 09:51 AM

nice work ideasign

look like mind has a new strategy of trying to discredit the competition

mind · 04-14-2004, 10:00 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by samsam
nice work ideasign

look like mind has a new strategy of trying to discredit the competition

? What? when? because i said the logo reminded me of something?? logos that remind a person of something aint usually a bad thing? i said it was a nice design - so i really dunno what your on about there samsam

thediablo · 04-14-2004, 10:49 AM

Damn this new entries are hot

lemme think lemme think.....

samsam · 04-14-2004, 12:30 PM

dont worry ideasign, the regal look works well in england

you can never please all the people all the time, especially those who like to use dubious tactics

mind · 04-15-2004, 12:04 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by samsam
dont worry ideasign, the regal look works well in england

you can never please all the people all the time, especially those who like to use dubious tactics

Apparently you cant expect all people to have half a brain either...again, if you actually bothered to read my reply to ideasign you would notice that i wrote "Nice - it reminds me of something i can't quite put my finger on.."

I don't know what that means on your planet - but here that means "Nice design - reminds me of something.."

So if ideasign lives on your planet too i will send my deepest apologies to him because i'm not trying to put any f****** designs down.

zvik · 04-15-2004, 01:34 AM

Hi there... it's been a month since i been near a computer... anyway i am back with my version

btw, it's all full vector driven

tootie · 04-15-2004, 01:54 AM

Kicker · 04-15-2004, 02:46 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by mind
Here are a few shots:

Entry #New | 1

Nice

mind · 04-15-2004, 03:33 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by zvik
Hi there... it's been a month since i been near a computer... anyway i am back with my version

btw, it's all full vector driven

Nice entry there Zvik ;)

Note: dunno if its intentional but ya spelled premium wrong in the top of the rounded logo thingy

zvik · 04-15-2004, 07:24 AM

oops :O
well i'll fix it right away... i was working on it late at night i was kinda crushed

Asraifae · 04-15-2004, 07:35 AM

Hi all, I'm brand new on GFY. But this looked like a good opportunity to test my skills, so here's my first go:

llabtaem · 04-15-2004, 07:53 AM

Acouple more entries:

mind · 04-15-2004, 08:55 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by zvik
oops :O
well i'll fix it right away... i was working on it late at night i was kinda crushed

lol i know how that is - i did the very same thing earlier in this very contest lol

mind · 04-15-2004, 08:56 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Kicker

Nice

thanx ;)

juanito · 04-15-2004, 09:28 AM

my humble entry:

Lykos · 04-15-2004, 10:20 AM

Nice

samsam · 04-15-2004, 10:28 AM

I think i like Zvik's entry best out of this batch

it gotta be hard to decide winners from these

samsam · 04-15-2004, 11:57 AM

zvik ya got icq?

I might have a job for u

zvik · 04-15-2004, 11:59 AM

yup, also it is listed in my profile

anyway... 10197845

hentaibee · 04-15-2004, 12:57 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by zvik
Hi there... it's been a month since i been near a computer... anyway i am back with my version

btw, it's all full vector driven

very fancy, yet looks much like a beer company logo(does it ?)... good nevertheless !!

hentaibee · 04-15-2004, 01:16 PM

subtility is not what I'm good at, so I'll refrain from taking part this time :-)

(And Zviks great entry frightens me (^_^) )

samsam · 04-15-2004, 01:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by hentaibee
subtility is not what I'm good at, so I'll refrain from taking part this time :-)

(And Zviks great entry frightens me (^_^) )

doesnt matter, you should still take part. if anything it gets people knowing about your skills

samsam · 04-15-2004, 01:57 PM

on second thought i might agree there, it does look a lot like a beer mat.

they may not be looking for that kind of image

champagne maybe but not beer

zvik · 04-15-2004, 02:00 PM

i'll be working on another entry if it looks like beer

....i went for a classic look

samsam · 04-15-2004, 03:08 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by zvik
i'll be working on another entry if it looks like beer ....i went for a classic look

you probably made it while on the drink

j/k

i still like it though

zvik · 04-15-2004, 04:19 PM

well then i've made another one

And here's the first one again:

zvik · 04-15-2004, 05:42 PM

Something is happening to my server, it seems to gone crazy so i am just adding the links of my entries... it's a mirror server of mine:

Sorry for the multiple reply posting. :/

mind · 04-16-2004, 12:10 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by samsam
on second thought i might agree there, it does look a lot like a beer mat.

they may not be looking for that kind of image

champagne maybe but not beer

Lol... the first time i saw the logo i thought exactly the same thing - however i didn't dare say anything because you might be on my back again - lol

I have a german beer label in my head, but cant quite remember which one :D

Still a great entry though :D

Mr. Marks · 04-16-2004, 12:46 AM

Thanks dude. Will try to work on it.

samsam · 04-16-2004, 02:37 AM

nice one zvik but ya got the spelling wrong again

i think i prefer the beer mat though

samsam · 04-16-2004, 03:10 AM

look like mind has gone back to his old tactics

j/k

04-10-2004, 09:56 AM	#152
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04-13-2004, 08:53 AM	#164
mind Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Aarhus, Denmark Posts: 1,199	Not entirely the same but i got me thinking of this :D Monogram of HRH. Queen of Denmark and we seem to have a thing for crowns in denmark :D and still it reminds me of something else too...dunno what lol..man im bored today __________________ MiND \| ProDesignLab.com

04-14-2004, 08:24 AM	#169
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04-10-2004, 09:52 AM	#151
Persius Tap into MOBILE! Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Hollywood Posts: 11,779	lol every1 is using that skyline effect :\|

04-12-2004, 03:16 PM	#156
samsam So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Fla Posts: 682	well it looks like you guys are all logo'd out so wait for mine on friday

04-13-2004, 07:20 AM	#159
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04-13-2004, 08:32 AM	#163
DR_PHIL Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Never visits the same thread twice Posts: 4,099	nice jobs guys

04-13-2004, 02:22 PM	#165
Vendot Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2002 Location: Malaysia Posts: 3,376	Mind - With regards to your latest submission, following feedback from my client: (1) The font and style of the "PremiumGirls.co.uk" isnt all that strong and there should probably be some better font and spacing for the .co.uk bit aswell. (2) The address itself should be easy to read (even away from screen) and remember. Having a totally filled in "Premium" and "Girls" part might work better. You might want to try some different color combos that have been tried before like strong red (for "Premium") with light red (for "Girls") or strong green (for "Premium") and strong red for "Girls". One of TheDiablo's entries is very strong on lettering. (3) The london eye is incomplete if you look closely - a whole section of the wheel is just missing (terrorist attack?). (4) The shading in the top right of the ring around the logo is slightly too strong - it should be more subtle. Its like a bit too much blusher there. (5) The font used for "CREME DE LA CREME" and "INTERNATIONAL CALLS" (including the international number) is just not a UK style. It would be better if it was closer to whats on the existing site. (6) You should try applying what you have to frame of the existing site to see how it looks and ensure that it fits well - this is the most crucial aspect. Apart from that, everything else is fine and it is a vast improvement on how it looked before. More importantly, my client likes this latest submission a lot With some strong adjustments, this could be the front runner.

04-13-2004, 03:01 PM	#166
FuckFind Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 1,188	I keep wanting to get in on this but so many ideas have been taken! Great job designers, good to see this contest... 1) Great contest founder, I like your style and feedback Vendot. 2) Great designs and volume from the designers! FF!

04-13-2004, 04:36 PM	#167
Vendot Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2002 Location: Malaysia Posts: 3,376	GUYS - Thanks for the great feedback FuckFind. I am very encouraged by the amount of positive comments I have received. As regards taken ideas.... dont despair as same ideas can always be presented in a different way. Remember, my client doesnt seem to know exactly what he wants, just that he will know what he wants when he sees it and of course the guidelines and feedback we have given is there to give direction. ADVICE TO ASPIRING WINNERS: The strongest work will be submitted by those who have carefully read the rules in the intial post, studied the existing site design, follow up posts and the feedback I have posted along the way. DEADLINE WARNING: As previously stated, the winners will be chosen on April 20th and there is now less than one week left. Time is running out sweet people, so get your entries in quickly (ie much before 20th). Once again, the winners will be chosen on April 20th.

04-14-2004, 09:51 AM	#170
samsam So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Fla Posts: 682	nice work ideasign look like mind has a new strategy of trying to discredit the competition

04-14-2004, 12:30 PM	#173
samsam So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Fla Posts: 682	dont worry ideasign, the regal look works well in england you can never please all the people all the time, especially those who like to use dubious tactics

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04-15-2004, 07:35 AM	#180
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04-15-2004, 07:53 AM	#181
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04-15-2004, 09:28 AM	#184
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04-15-2004, 10:28 AM	#186
samsam So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Fla Posts: 682	I think i like Zvik's entry best out of this batch it gotta be hard to decide winners from these

04-15-2004, 11:57 AM	#187
samsam So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Fla Posts: 682	zvik ya got icq? I might have a job for u

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04-15-2004, 01:57 PM	#192
samsam So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Fla Posts: 682	on second thought i might agree there, it does look a lot like a beer mat. they may not be looking for that kind of image champagne maybe but not beer

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04-15-2004, 04:19 PM	#195
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04-15-2004, 05:42 PM	#196
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04-16-2004, 12:46 AM	#198
Mr. Marks Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Wherever I want Posts: 7,517	Thanks dude. Will try to work on it.

04-16-2004, 02:37 AM	#199
samsam So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Fla Posts: 682	nice one zvik but ya got the spelling wrong again i think i prefer the beer mat though

04-16-2004, 03:10 AM	#200
samsam So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Fla Posts: 682	look like mind has gone back to his old tactics j/k