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Mind -
With regards to your latest submission, following feedback from my client:
(1) The font and style of the "PremiumGirls.co.uk" isnt all that strong and there should probably be some better font and spacing for the .co.uk bit aswell.
(2) The address itself should be easy to read (even away from screen) and remember. Having a totally filled in "Premium" and "Girls" part might work better. You might want to try some different color combos that have been tried before like strong red (for "Premium") with light red (for "Girls") or strong green (for "Premium") and strong red for "Girls". One of TheDiablo's entries is very strong on lettering.
(3) The london eye is incomplete if you look closely - a whole section of the wheel is just missing (terrorist attack?).
(4) The shading in the top right of the ring around the logo is slightly too strong - it should be more subtle. Its like a bit too much blusher there.
(5) The font used for "CREME DE LA CREME" and "INTERNATIONAL CALLS" (including the international number) is just not a UK style. It would be better if it was closer to whats on the existing site.
(6) You should try applying what you have to frame of the existing site to see how it looks and ensure that it fits well - this is the most crucial aspect.
Apart from that, everything else is fine and it is a vast improvement on how it looked before. More importantly, my client likes this latest submission *a lot*
With some strong adjustments, this could be the front runner.
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