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Rob · 02-12-2004, 07:05 PM

Go easy on me guys, this is my first Flash banner. Constructive or abusive criticism is welcome!

My First Flash Banner - LINK

Also, I need help from some of you Flash gurus out there. What is the actionscript code to make it so it plays music on a mouseover? I want to put fart sounds in it.

Sig Whore · 02-12-2004, 07:06 PM

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criticism is welcome

it sucks

xxxplicit · 02-12-2004, 07:06 PM

im a gfx designer.. n i have to say... thats a pretty good flash banner man.... i cant even do some of that flash stuff... lol

snipah7 · 02-12-2004, 07:07 PM

cool.

you have make a button and in the button on the over state put the sound in.

The Truth Hurts · 02-12-2004, 07:12 PM

no reason that should be 207k

Rob · 02-12-2004, 07:15 PM

xxxplicit and snipah7 - Thanks!

The Truth Hurts, how would I optimize it to make it a smaller file size?

The Truth Hurts · 02-12-2004, 07:16 PM

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Originally posted by HighOnAcid
xxxplicit and snipah7 - Thanks!

The Truth Hurts, how would I optimize it to make it a smaller file size?

clean up the dolphins.

Rob · 02-12-2004, 08:15 PM

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Originally posted by The Truth Hurts

clean up the dolphins.

I traced the bitmaps and did everything to try and minimize the file size. Any suggestions would be more than welcome! Thanks!

bhutocracy · 02-12-2004, 09:07 PM

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Originally posted by HighOnAcid

I traced the bitmaps and did everything to try and minimize the file size. Any suggestions would be more than welcome! Thanks!

onion skin select the whole dolphin clip then modify>optimise take it as low as it will go.. other than that don't use crap like swish to do your transitions. also with the transitions it hapenes far too slowly theres always text morphing going on it screws attention and readability.. the text reveals should happen quickly then leave the words long enough to read them aloud then take them off.

Spunky · 02-12-2004, 09:10 PM

Looks good

Speed it up a notch

Tha P Maker · 02-12-2004, 11:50 PM

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Originally posted by HighOnAcid

....Also, I need help from some of you Flash gurus out there. What is the actionscript code to make it so it plays music on a mouseover? I want to put fart sounds in it.

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hi, im not flash guru but i guess i can help.

inside your button, there are 4 frames, Up, Over, Down, and Hit. go to frame "over" and simply just drag your sound from the library to the stage. that's it!

sexsup · 02-13-2004, 12:04 AM

It is not bad at all, but you have still to work on it

eoworm · 02-13-2004, 03:28 AM

hmmm... need to clean up the dolphins and make them 2-3 colors because the "reflection" is strobing, causing me have another seizure. and i bet with less color variation between frames it would reduce the total file size.

dunefield · 02-13-2004, 03:29 AM

i like the dolphins

GiantGnome · 02-13-2004, 03:31 AM

i think it looks good. just moves a little slow

Raf1 · 02-13-2004, 03:42 AM

nice, just speed up the dolphins a bit

flashfire · 02-13-2004, 04:06 AM

not too bad...too wide though, if it were thinner it would load faster

body · 02-13-2004, 04:08 AM

no tits ?

VeriSexy · 02-13-2004, 04:08 AM

I like it

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The Truth Hurts Zph7YXfjMhg Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: In Your Skull Posts: 15,548	no reason that should be 207k

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sexsup Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,004	It is not bad at all, but you have still to work on it

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eoworm Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: St. PeTe, Florida Posts: 32	hmmm... need to clean up the dolphins and make them 2-3 colors because the "reflection" is strobing, causing me have another seizure. and i bet with less color variation between frames it would reduce the total file size.

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