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  • Rob
    I'm a great bowler.
    • Nov 2003
    • 13310
    #1

    My First Flash Banner - Criticism Welcome

    Go easy on me guys, this is my first Flash banner. Constructive or abusive criticism is welcome!

    My First Flash Banner - LINK

    Also, I need help from some of you Flash gurus out there. What is the actionscript code to make it so it plays music on a mouseover? I want to put fart sounds in it.
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    • Sig Whore
      So Fucking Banned
      • Jan 2004
      • 789
      #2
      criticism is welcome
      it sucks

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        • xxxplicit
          Confirmed User
          • Feb 2004
          • 153
          #3
          im a gfx designer.. n i have to say... thats a pretty good flash banner man.... i cant even do some of that flash stuff... lol
          SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

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            • snipah7
              Confirmed User
              • May 2003
              • 781
              #4
              cool.

              you have make a button and in the button on the over state put the sound in.


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                • The Truth Hurts
                  Zph7YXfjMhg
                  • Nov 2002
                  • 15741
                  #5
                  no reason that should be 207k

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                    • Rob
                      I'm a great bowler.
                      • Nov 2003
                      • 13310
                      #6
                      xxxplicit and snipah7 - Thanks!

                      The Truth Hurts, how would I optimize it to make it a smaller file size?

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                        • The Truth Hurts
                          Zph7YXfjMhg
                          • Nov 2002
                          • 15741
                          #7
                          Originally posted by HighOnAcid
                          xxxplicit and snipah7 - Thanks!

                          The Truth Hurts, how would I optimize it to make it a smaller file size?
                          clean up the dolphins.

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                            • Rob
                              I'm a great bowler.
                              • Nov 2003
                              • 13310
                              #8
                              Originally posted by The Truth Hurts


                              clean up the dolphins.
                              I traced the bitmaps and did everything to try and minimize the file size. Any suggestions would be more than welcome! Thanks!

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                                • bhutocracy
                                  Not making A Comeback
                                  • Dec 2001
                                  • 10218
                                  #9
                                  Originally posted by HighOnAcid

                                  I traced the bitmaps and did everything to try and minimize the file size. Any suggestions would be more than welcome! Thanks!
                                  onion skin select the whole dolphin clip then modify>optimise take it as low as it will go.. other than that don't use crap like swish to do your transitions. also with the transitions it hapenes far too slowly theres always text morphing going on it screws attention and readability.. the text reveals should happen quickly then leave the words long enough to read them aloud then take them off.

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                                    • Spunky
                                      I need a beer
                                      • Jun 2002
                                      • 133978
                                      #10
                                      Looks good Speed it up a notch

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                                        • Tha P Maker
                                          Registered User
                                          • Jan 2004
                                          • 18
                                          #11
                                          Originally posted by HighOnAcid

                                          ....Also, I need help from some of you Flash gurus out there. What is the actionscript code to make it so it plays music on a mouseover? I want to put fart sounds in it. [/B]
                                          hi, im not flash guru but i guess i can help.

                                          inside your button, there are 4 frames, Up, Over, Down, and Hit. go to frame "over" and simply just drag your sound from the library to the stage. that's it!
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                                            • sexsup
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Feb 2004
                                              • 3004
                                              #12
                                              It is not bad at all, but you have still to work on it

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                                                • eoworm
                                                  Registered User
                                                  • Feb 2004
                                                  • 32
                                                  #13
                                                  hmmm... need to clean up the dolphins and make them 2-3 colors because the "reflection" is strobing, causing me have another seizure. and i bet with less color variation between frames it would reduce the total file size.

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                                                    • dunefield
                                                      www.barely18movies.com
                                                      • Feb 2003
                                                      • 10920
                                                      #14
                                                      i like the dolphins

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                                                        • GiantGnome
                                                          Confirmed User
                                                          • Jan 2004
                                                          • 4344
                                                          #15
                                                          i think it looks good. just moves a little slow
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                                                            • Raf1
                                                              Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                              • Oct 2003
                                                              • 12117
                                                              #16
                                                              nice, just speed up the dolphins a bit
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                                                                • flashfire
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                                                                  • Feb 2003
                                                                  • 13098
                                                                  #17
                                                                  not too bad...too wide though, if it were thinner it would load faster

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                                                                    • body
                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                      • Oct 2002
                                                                      • 5017
                                                                      #18
                                                                      no tits ?
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                                                                        • VeriSexy
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                                                                          • Apr 2002
                                                                          • 25463
                                                                          #19
                                                                          I like it
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