How does this design for my next paysite look so far? - GoFuckYourself.com

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 06:05 PM

comments please

http://www.nymphomoms.com/

thanks

Alky · 01-31-2004, 06:07 PM

the million dollar design.

PlayGirl · 01-31-2004, 06:07 PM

looks good... i don't know about the wink thing though

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 06:08 PM

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Originally posted by PlayGirl
looks good... i don't know about the wink thing though

why not?

tootie · 01-31-2004, 06:13 PM

I think if you're going to do the red thing, then her whole body should be red. It looks kind of creepy with just her head red. And the wink should be faster. It looks too fake because the eyelid is all one color. If you make the wink animation faster (say, 3 seconds between winks and the wink about .2 seconds) then it will probably look more realistic.

broke · 01-31-2004, 06:14 PM

Honestly --

It looks like shit. Pay a designer.

P.S. The wink makes it worse.

bluff · 01-31-2004, 06:14 PM

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Originally posted by PlayGirl
looks good... i don't know about the wink thing though

indeed, it makes her totally unattractive

Paul Waters · 01-31-2004, 06:16 PM

Looks like the spam sites.

Do you plan to update content at all, or just hope they forget to cancel?

fuzebox · 01-31-2004, 06:18 PM

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Originally posted by Mr. Mojo Risin

why not?

Dude, get rid of it! It's creepy, makes her look like her eye just got gouged out.

421Fill · 01-31-2004, 06:20 PM

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Originally posted by fuzebox

Dude, get rid of it! It's creepy, makes her look like her eye just got gouged out.

yeah, pretty creepy.

gazool · 01-31-2004, 06:20 PM

Well I don't really know what to say...
Have you asked your moms oppinion?

Too much red...

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 06:21 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Paul Waters
Looks like the spam sites.

Do you plan to update content at all, or just hope they forget to cancel?

?

yeah I plan to update it and I have a ton of content for it already from former avs sites

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 06:25 PM

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Originally posted by tootie
I think if you're going to do the red thing, then her whole body should be red. It looks kind of creepy with just her head red. And the wink should be faster. It looks too fake because the eyelid is all one color. If you make the wink animation faster (say, 3 seconds between winks and the wink about .2 seconds) then it will probably look more realistic.

I personally like the wink, but I think you're right about speeding it up... thanks

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 06:26 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by broke
Honestly --

It looks like shit. Pay a designer.

P.S. The wink makes it worse.

if it does well I will probably pay someone to redesign it...

Nysus · 01-31-2004, 06:28 PM

The idea behind the design is good though it could use a smooth touch to it.

Cheers,
Matt

Pete · 01-31-2004, 06:31 PM

Honestly? I think it needs some work. The wink absolutely must go.

joshuawk · 01-31-2004, 06:33 PM

looks good to me

different than your classic bullshit

mardigras · 01-31-2004, 06:37 PM

Hey, that's how Barbi winks

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 06:42 PM

thanks for the comments

lock · 01-31-2004, 06:47 PM

the wink sux i am probably the worst designer so i cant talk. There is no shame in hiring designers only problem is budget but you will convert better.

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 06:49 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lock
the wink sux i am probably the worst designer so i cant talk. There is no shame in hiring designers only problem is budget but you will convert better.

I just like doing it myself so I learn

Catalinas · 01-31-2004, 06:54 PM

I think the color scheme is very nice, but the wink needs alot of work.. the people aren't lyin. You should redo the cut out of the girl in red though, her arm on the left is all wiggly. It's nice looking so far!

Nonical · 01-31-2004, 06:54 PM

Can't imagine what your tour page is gonna look like.

cspdinc · 01-31-2004, 07:05 PM

I timed myself.. I made this in 12 minutes... with some crap I had on my computer already.
http://www.microsoftxxx.com

I can do this all day long, I just need a ton O content to fill it and 3 other sites out... whats new huh?

tyler86ed · 01-31-2004, 07:14 PM

The wink is creepy

Alex From San Diego · 01-31-2004, 07:17 PM

Overall it looks weak at best....Not much thought or creativity in it.

bdld · 01-31-2004, 07:17 PM

I'd have to agree, I don't like the wink at all, and it needs to be centered.

cspdinc · 01-31-2004, 07:27 PM

simply take that gif file apart and make the closed eye lid darker as it would be with real eyeshadow.. its too light, thats the real problem.. maybe draw some lashes on it to clockwork orange style....

http://www.cierasagexxx.com

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 07:29 PM

well my goal was to turn out something fairly decent fast(and I think I have, but I will polish it a little), so I didn't spend a ton of time on it... I have a bunch of sites I plan on creating as fast as I can using content from my former Adult Check Gold sites and more... I'll pay a pro to redo them if they do good... I don't think any better graphics will affect sales one way or another though...

thanks for the comments though, good or bad

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 07:30 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by cspdinc
simply take that gif file apart and make the closed eye lid darker as it would be with real eyeshadow.. its too light, thats the real problem.. maybe draw some lashes on it to clockwork orange style....

http://www.cierasagexxx.com

thanks.. good idea

Ash@phpFX · 01-31-2004, 08:56 PM

that wink really sucks. i would seriously consider a professional designer, the site doesnt look very pro at all

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 09:04 PM

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Originally posted by asher
that wink really sucks. i would seriously consider a professional designer, the site doesnt look very pro at all

yes, but what is professional? what elements are in professional sites?

thanks

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 09:12 PM

I mean I see boxy sites with crammed graphics into a small space for a lot of so called pro sites and a lot of them look similar...

they look good, but they have become cliche, so I didn't do that..

I think the wink needs to be tweaked and now that I'm reworking it, the red woman is not as good as the real thing

thanks

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 09:15 PM

also the sites that are almost all a bunch of rectangles with square pic samples in them are overdone too

<IMX> · 01-31-2004, 09:18 PM

I'd start fresh again.

Rorschach · 01-31-2004, 09:36 PM

Looks like a template avs site.

Oracle Porn · 01-31-2004, 09:38 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by <IMX>
I'd start fresh again.

higher a design might be the smart thing to do.

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 09:46 PM

yes I could hire a great designer to make it better and probably will if it does well, but I think it's good enough...

I've seen pay sites much worse and simple that do very well

i.e.

http://www.bignaturals.com/main.htm

this is very simple and effective... I could have done something like this, but I don't want to be that plain

if I would have made my design like that, what would you say?

SLAiN787 · 01-31-2004, 10:12 PM

Looks O.K.

Shoehorn! · 01-31-2004, 10:32 PM

Too much text in my opinion. Excellent concept though, good luck.

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 10:54 PM

any better now?

how about the wink?

I think I'm gonna work on it a little more, but not much...

thanks

skillfull · 01-31-2004, 11:01 PM

look
im not a designer at all
and i know i could do something better
you dont need to redesign everything
some stuff are ok imho
but some stuff simply suck
remove the url in his head
and remake all the middle page text
look crappy to me...

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 11:09 PM

hmm.. I don't know how I could be so wrong.... I personally think it looks good now... maybe a little more work... hmm

thanks for all the comments though

quantum-x · 01-31-2004, 11:28 PM

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Originally posted by Mr. Mojo Risin
hmm.. I don't know how I could be so wrong.... I personally think it looks good now... maybe a little more work... hmm

thanks for all the comments though

get rid off all those pictures!

Unless you have a very, very good reason for having no text on your tour, you're automatically pissing off dialup users, and throwing any SE traffic / key works you might have got away.

Mr. Mojo Risin · 01-31-2004, 11:31 PM

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Originally posted by quantum-x

get rid off all those pictures!

Unless you have a very, very good reason for having no text on your tour, you're automatically pissing off dialup users, and throwing any SE traffic / key works you might have got away.

yeah I plan on converting what I can to text

but thanks

Roald · 02-01-2004, 01:49 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by broke
Honestly --

It looks like shit. Pay a designer.

P.S. The wink makes it worse.

Ironhorse · 02-01-2004, 01:54 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mr. Mojo Risin
also the sites that are almost all a bunch of rectangles with square pic samples in them are overdone too

Man, round wheels are overdone too but..

JulianSosa · 02-01-2004, 01:55 AM

If you really want to have a paysite hire a designer.
That twisted guy has designs for $500.

Roald · 02-01-2004, 02:11 AM

Btw you should cut out the lady waaaayyy better than this

SGS · 02-01-2004, 02:13 AM

The difference between a good AVS site and a good Paysite in 2004 is now a million miles apart.

Pay a designer.

01-31-2004, 06:05 PM	#1
Mr. Mojo Risin Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 1,886	How does this design for my next paysite look so far? comments please http://www.nymphomoms.com/ thanks

01-31-2004, 06:13 PM	#5
tootie Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Planet Earp Posts: 6,041	I think if you're going to do the red thing, then her whole body should be red. It looks kind of creepy with just her head red. And the wink should be faster. It looks too fake because the eyelid is all one color. If you make the wink animation faster (say, 3 seconds between winks and the wink about .2 seconds) then it will probably look more realistic. __________________

01-31-2004, 06:14 PM	#6
broke Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Someplace Windy Posts: 4,501	Honestly -- It looks like shit. Pay a designer. P.S. The wink makes it worse. __________________ Perfect Gonzo

01-31-2004, 06:16 PM	#8
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Alky Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Houston Posts: 5,651	the million dollar design.

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01-31-2004, 06:42 PM	#19
Mr. Mojo Risin Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 1,886	thanks for the comments

01-31-2004, 06:47 PM	#20
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01-31-2004, 06:54 PM	#22
Catalinas Registered User Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Las Vegas, Nevada Posts: 346	I think the color scheme is very nice, but the wink needs alot of work.. the people aren't lyin. You should redo the cut out of the girl in red though, her arm on the left is all wiggly. It's nice looking so far!

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cspdinc Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: USA land of the oppressed Posts: 724	I timed myself.. I made this in 12 minutes... with some crap I had on my computer already. http://www.microsoftxxx.com I can do this all day long, I just need a ton O content to fill it and 3 other sites out... whats new huh?

01-31-2004, 07:14 PM	#25
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01-31-2004, 07:17 PM	#26
Alex From San Diego Confirmed User Join Date: May 2001 Location: San Diego Posts: 1,642	Overall it looks weak at best....Not much thought or creativity in it. __________________ We are what we repeatedly do.-Aristotle

01-31-2004, 07:17 PM	#27
bdld $100,000 Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 11,452	I'd have to agree, I don't like the wink at all, and it needs to be centered.

01-31-2004, 07:27 PM	#28
cspdinc Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: USA land of the oppressed Posts: 724	simply take that gif file apart and make the closed eye lid darker as it would be with real eyeshadow.. its too light, thats the real problem.. maybe draw some lashes on it to clockwork orange style.... http://www.cierasagexxx.com

01-31-2004, 07:29 PM	#29
Mr. Mojo Risin Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 1,886	well my goal was to turn out something fairly decent fast(and I think I have, but I will polish it a little), so I didn't spend a ton of time on it... I have a bunch of sites I plan on creating as fast as I can using content from my former Adult Check Gold sites and more... I'll pay a pro to redo them if they do good... I don't think any better graphics will affect sales one way or another though... thanks for the comments though, good or bad

01-31-2004, 08:56 PM	#31
Ash@phpFX Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 4,292	that wink really sucks. i would seriously consider a professional designer, the site doesnt look very pro at all

01-31-2004, 09:12 PM	#33
Mr. Mojo Risin Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 1,886	I mean I see boxy sites with crammed graphics into a small space for a lot of so called pro sites and a lot of them look similar... they look good, but they have become cliche, so I didn't do that.. I think the wink needs to be tweaked and now that I'm reworking it, the red woman is not as good as the real thing thanks

01-31-2004, 09:15 PM	#34
Mr. Mojo Risin Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 1,886	also the sites that are almost all a bunch of rectangles with square pic samples in them are overdone too

01-31-2004, 09:18 PM	#35
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01-31-2004, 09:36 PM	#36
Rorschach So Fucking Banned Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 5,579	Looks like a template avs site.

01-31-2004, 09:46 PM	#38
Mr. Mojo Risin Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 1,886	yes I could hire a great designer to make it better and probably will if it does well, but I think it's good enough... I've seen pay sites much worse and simple that do very well i.e. http://www.bignaturals.com/main.htm this is very simple and effective... I could have done something like this, but I don't want to be that plain if I would have made my design like that, what would you say?

01-31-2004, 10:12 PM	#39
SLAiN787 Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 693	Looks O.K.

01-31-2004, 10:32 PM	#40
Shoehorn! Die With Your Boots On Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Hawaii Posts: 22,872	Too much text in my opinion. Excellent concept though, good luck. __________________

01-31-2004, 10:54 PM	#41
Mr. Mojo Risin Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 1,886	any better now? how about the wink? I think I'm gonna work on it a little more, but not much... thanks

01-31-2004, 11:01 PM	#42
skillfull Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Quebec Calisse Posts: 4,716	look im not a designer at all and i know i could do something better you dont need to redesign everything some stuff are ok imho but some stuff simply suck remove the url in his head and remake all the middle page text look crappy to me... __________________ mind at underdark dot cc SEO Analyst Thunder-Ball.net - Member

01-31-2004, 11:09 PM	#43
Mr. Mojo Risin Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In the middle of nowhere Posts: 1,886	hmm.. I don't know how I could be so wrong.... I personally think it looks good now... maybe a little more work... hmm thanks for all the comments though

02-01-2004, 01:55 AM	#48
JulianSosa Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,042	If you really want to have a paysite hire a designer. That twisted guy has designs for $500.

02-01-2004, 02:11 AM	#49
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