How does this design for my next paysite look so far?
 

comments please

http://www.nymphomoms.com/

thanks

the million dollar design.

looks good... i don't know about the wink thing though

why not?

I think if you're going to do the red thing, then her whole body should be red. It looks kind of creepy with just her head red. And the wink should be faster. It looks too fake because the eyelid is all one color. If you make the wink animation faster (say, 3 seconds between winks and the wink about .2 seconds) then it will probably look more realistic.

Honestly --

It looks like shit. Pay a designer.

:2 cents:

P.S. The wink makes it worse.

indeed, it makes her totally unattractive

Looks like the spam sites.

Do you plan to update content at all, or just hope they forget to cancel?

Dude, get rid of it! It's creepy, makes her look like her eye just got gouged out.

yeah, pretty creepy.

Well I don't really know what to say...
Have you asked your moms oppinion?

Too much red...

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yeah I plan to update it and I have a ton of content for it already from former avs sites

I personally like the wink, but I think you're right about speeding it up... thanks

if it does well I will probably pay someone to redesign it...

The idea behind the design is good though it could use a smooth touch to it.

Cheers,
Matt

Honestly? I think it needs some work. The wink absolutely must go.

looks good to me

different than your classic bullshit

Hey, that's how Barbi winks:)

thanks for the comments

the wink sux i am probably the worst designer so i cant talk. There is no shame in hiring designers only problem is budget but you will convert better.

I just like doing it myself so I learn

I think the color scheme is very nice, but the wink needs alot of work.. the people aren't lyin. You should redo the cut out of the girl in red though, her arm on the left is all wiggly. It's nice looking so far!

Can't imagine what your tour page is gonna look like.

I timed myself.. I made this in 12 minutes... with some crap I had on my computer already.
http://www.microsoftxxx.com

I can do this all day long, I just need a ton O content to fill it and 3 other sites out... whats new huh?

The wink is creepy :uhoh

Overall it looks weak at best....Not much thought or creativity in it.

I'd have to agree, I don't like the wink at all, and it needs to be centered.

simply take that gif file apart and make the closed eye lid darker as it would be with real eyeshadow.. its too light, thats the real problem.. maybe draw some lashes on it to clockwork orange style....


http://www.cierasagexxx.com

well my goal was to turn out something fairly decent fast(and I think I have, but I will polish it a little), so I didn't spend a ton of time on it... I have a bunch of sites I plan on creating as fast as I can using content from my former Adult Check Gold sites and more... I'll pay a pro to redo them if they do good... I don't think any better graphics will affect sales one way or another though...

thanks for the comments though, good or bad

thanks.. good idea

that wink really sucks. i would seriously consider a professional designer, the site doesnt look very pro at all

yes, but what is professional? what elements are in professional sites?

thanks

I mean I see boxy sites with crammed graphics into a small space for a lot of so called pro sites and a lot of them look similar...

they look good, but they have become cliche, so I didn't do that..

I think the wink needs to be tweaked and now that I'm reworking it, the red woman is not as good as the real thing

thanks

also the sites that are almost all a bunch of rectangles with square pic samples in them are overdone too

I'd start fresh again.

Looks like a template avs site.

higher a design might be the smart thing to do.

yes I could hire a great designer to make it better and probably will if it does well, but I think it's good enough...

I've seen pay sites much worse and simple that do very well

i.e.

http://www.bignaturals.com/main.htm

this is very simple and effective... I could have done something like this, but I don't want to be that plain

if I would have made my design like that, what would you say?

Looks O.K.

Too much text in my opinion. Excellent concept though, good luck. :thumbsup

any better now?

how about the wink?


I think I'm gonna work on it a little more, but not much...

thanks

look
im not a designer at all
and i know i could do something better
you dont need to redesign everything
some stuff are ok imho
but some stuff simply suck
remove the url in his head
and remake all the middle page text
look crappy to me...

hmm.. I don't know how I could be so wrong.... I personally think it looks good now... maybe a little more work... hmm

thanks for all the comments though

:2 cents: get rid off all those pictures!

Unless you have a very, very good reason for having no text on your tour, you're automatically pissing off dialup users, and throwing any SE traffic / key works you might have got away.

yeah I plan on converting what I can to text

but thanks

Man, round wheels are overdone too but..

If you really want to have a paysite hire a designer.
That twisted guy has designs for $500.

Btw you should cut out the lady waaaayyy better than this :2 cents:

The difference between a good AVS site and a good Paysite in 2004 is now a million miles apart.

Pay a designer. :2 cents: