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looks good... i don't know about the wink thing thoughComment
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why not?Originally posted by PlayGirl
looks good... i don't know about the wink thing thoughComment
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I think if you're going to do the red thing, then her whole body should be red. It looks kind of creepy with just her head red. And the wink should be faster. It looks too fake because the eyelid is all one color. If you make the wink animation faster (say, 3 seconds between winks and the wink about .2 seconds) then it will probably look more realistic.
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indeed, it makes her totally unattractiveOriginally posted by PlayGirl
looks good... i don't know about the wink thing thoughComment
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Looks like the spam sites.
Do you plan to update content at all, or just hope they forget to cancel?
PaulComment
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Dude, get rid of it! It's creepy, makes her look like her eye just got gouged out.Originally posted by Mr. Mojo Risin
why not?Comment
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yeah, pretty creepy.Originally posted by fuzebox
Dude, get rid of it! It's creepy, makes her look like her eye just got gouged out.Comment
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Well I don't really know what to say...
Have you asked your moms oppinion?
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Originally posted by Paul Waters
Looks like the spam sites.
Do you plan to update content at all, or just hope they forget to cancel?
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yeah I plan to update it and I have a ton of content for it already from former avs sitesComment
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I personally like the wink, but I think you're right about speeding it up... thanksOriginally posted by tootie
I think if you're going to do the red thing, then her whole body should be red. It looks kind of creepy with just her head red. And the wink should be faster. It looks too fake because the eyelid is all one color. If you make the wink animation faster (say, 3 seconds between winks and the wink about .2 seconds) then it will probably look more realistic.Comment
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if it does well I will probably pay someone to redesign it...Originally posted by broke
Honestly --
It looks like shit. Pay a designer.
P.S. The wink makes it worse.Comment
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The idea behind the design is good though it could use a smooth touch to it.
Cheers,
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looks good to me
different than your classic bullshiti love GWComment
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Hey, that's how Barbi winks
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thanks for the commentsComment
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the wink sux i am probably the worst designer so i cant talk. There is no shame in hiring designers only problem is budget but you will convert better.Comment
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I just like doing it myself so I learnOriginally posted by lock
the wink sux i am probably the worst designer so i cant talk. There is no shame in hiring designers only problem is budget but you will convert better.Comment
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I think the color scheme is very nice, but the wink needs alot of work.. the people aren't lyin. You should redo the cut out of the girl in red though, her arm on the left is all wiggly. It's nice looking so far!Comment
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I timed myself.. I made this in 12 minutes... with some crap I had on my computer already.
http://www.microsoftxxx.com
I can do this all day long, I just need a ton O content to fill it and 3 other sites out... whats new huh?Comment
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The wink is creepy
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Overall it looks weak at best....Not much thought or creativity in it.We are what we repeatedly do.-AristotleComment
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I'd have to agree, I don't like the wink at all, and it needs to be centered.Comment
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simply take that gif file apart and make the closed eye lid darker as it would be with real eyeshadow.. its too light, thats the real problem.. maybe draw some lashes on it to clockwork orange style....
http://www.cierasagexxx.comComment
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well my goal was to turn out something fairly decent fast(and I think I have, but I will polish it a little), so I didn't spend a ton of time on it... I have a bunch of sites I plan on creating as fast as I can using content from my former Adult Check Gold sites and more... I'll pay a pro to redo them if they do good... I don't think any better graphics will affect sales one way or another though...
thanks for the comments though, good or badComment
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thanks.. good ideaOriginally posted by cspdinc
simply take that gif file apart and make the closed eye lid darker as it would be with real eyeshadow.. its too light, thats the real problem.. maybe draw some lashes on it to clockwork orange style....
http://www.cierasagexxx.comComment
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that wink really sucks. i would seriously consider a professional designer, the site doesnt look very pro at allComment
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yes, but what is professional? what elements are in professional sites?Originally posted by asher
that wink really sucks. i would seriously consider a professional designer, the site doesnt look very pro at all
thanksComment
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I mean I see boxy sites with crammed graphics into a small space for a lot of so called pro sites and a lot of them look similar...
they look good, but they have become cliche, so I didn't do that..
I think the wink needs to be tweaked and now that I'm reworking it, the red woman is not as good as the real thing
thanksComment
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also the sites that are almost all a bunch of rectangles with square pic samples in them are overdone tooComment
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I'd start fresh again.Comment
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Looks like a template avs site.Comment
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higher a design might be the smart thing to do.Originally posted by <IMX>
I'd start fresh again.
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yes I could hire a great designer to make it better and probably will if it does well, but I think it's good enough...
I've seen pay sites much worse and simple that do very well
i.e.
http://www.bignaturals.com/main.htm
this is very simple and effective... I could have done something like this, but I don't want to be that plain
if I would have made my design like that, what would you say?Comment
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Looks O.K.Comment
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Too much text in my opinion. Excellent concept though, good luck.
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any better now?
how about the wink?
I think I'm gonna work on it a little more, but not much...
thanksComment
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look
im not a designer at all
and i know i could do something better
you dont need to redesign everything
some stuff are ok imho
but some stuff simply suck
remove the url in his head
and remake all the middle page text
look crappy to me...Comment
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hmm.. I don't know how I could be so wrong.... I personally think it looks good now... maybe a little more work... hmm
thanks for all the comments thoughComment
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Originally posted by Mr. Mojo Risin
hmm.. I don't know how I could be so wrong.... I personally think it looks good now... maybe a little more work... hmm
thanks for all the comments though get rid off all those pictures!
Unless you have a very, very good reason for having no text on your tour, you're automatically pissing off dialup users, and throwing any SE traffic / key works you might have got away.Comment
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yeah I plan on converting what I can to textOriginally posted by quantum-x
get rid off all those pictures!
Unless you have a very, very good reason for having no text on your tour, you're automatically pissing off dialup users, and throwing any SE traffic / key works you might have got away.
but thanksComment
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Originally posted by broke
Honestly --
It looks like shit. Pay a designer.
P.S. The wink makes it worse.
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Man, round wheels are overdone too but..Originally posted by Mr. Mojo Risin
also the sites that are almost all a bunch of rectangles with square pic samples in them are overdone tooComment
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If you really want to have a paysite hire a designer.
That twisted guy has designs for $500.Comment
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Btw you should cut out the lady waaaayyy better than this
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The difference between a good AVS site and a good Paysite in 2004 is now a million miles apart.
Pay a designer.
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