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Old 12-12-2003, 05:58 PM   #1
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Fletch XXX Outdoes Himself - Look at THIS!! Affiliates are going to LOVE it!!

I'm sure you've seen the link to TeenChloe.com in my sig. I want to offer affiliates alternate tours to send traffic to... so where do I go for such a thing? To FletchXXX of course!

Take a look at THIS! I absolutely LOVE it:

http://www.kinkychloe.com


Fletch, YOU ROCK!!!
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:02 PM   #2
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Very nice.

Fletch is da man.

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Old 12-12-2003, 06:31 PM   #3
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What's so special about it?

Looks like it took 20 mins IMO

Although I know that's the point, being a personal site n all.
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:40 PM   #4
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:51 PM   #5
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Looks good to me - it lets the girl sell herself and that's exactly the way it should be with a site like that
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:52 PM   #6
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fucking fletch great work

u have the personal touch

as you would say: cheers
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At the VERY far bottom right corner the line has a hiccup.

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Old 12-12-2003, 06:59 PM   #8
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Just cuz I am bored. I am going to butcher this tour and point out where it can do better.

From the very top.
Text reads: "My Official Modeling Site" - Fuck that.
Its her Sex Site where she masterbates for her members or somthing.

Maybe try:
I Am A Bad Girl! I Got 100's Of Original Videos From Home That Prove it Inside!

Next. Portion that reads:
"ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A CUTE AMATEUR GIRL WHO HAS HER OWN PERSONAL SITE?"

Fuck that. We know they want an amateur girl by the point they come to this page. Give em what they want.

Maybe Try: My Kink Is Getting Wet And Showing It All Off For My Exclusive Members!

Now the photo block portions... Sigh.
text reading: "Looking for a cute amateur girl that loves to show off her naked body?"

Fuck that you have asked that question 3 times now... Get to business.

The photo blocks goto contain info about the episode of photos the viewer is seeing.

For example.
"These photos of me are in Tahoe on a weekend get away! I booked a little secluded cabin and got video clips of all kinds of things I did! I got to say I was very horny and had quite an episode with my favorite portable Vibrator!"

Proceed with that sorta theme with each photo block of images. Always elude that what the visitor see's is merely a small portion of hundreds of personal sex experiences.

Next.
Very bottom... There ya go asking them the same question again. Bleh... Fucking aim for the close damnit!

TRY:
"Your are just a couple clicks away from all my newest and archived videos and Photos 100% uncensored! Try my Site Tonight!"

LINKS at bottom:
Read "MEMBERS ENTRANCE | GET FULL ACCESS | NEXT PAGE"

Try:
" MEMEBERS CLICK HERE | ACCESS THE VIP SITE NOW! | WANT TO SEE MORE?"

I guess basically it is merely my opinion and I oughtah just keep my mouth shut about what REALLY works versus what hundreds of designers do everyday without a thought of what the efect is for clients.
I can tell Fletch definatly attempted to think through this a little but it still falls short of feeling personnal for the visitor. Try not to make visitors feel like sheep by reading the same things they have already read at over 100,000 other sites in a format that appearant now at prolly over 20,000 other sites on the net.

My phat

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Old 12-12-2003, 07:17 PM   #10
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I use to like Fletch's work, but this is not exactly his best, very unappealing, long blocks of little text that makes you use glasses, nothing that screams "click me!". All in all, is decent, but he can do way better than that Just my
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Old 12-12-2003, 07:23 PM   #11
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Old 12-12-2003, 07:28 PM   #12
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Old 12-12-2003, 07:32 PM   #13
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Just cuz I am bored. I am going to butcher this tour and point out where it can do better.

From the very top.
Text reads: "My Official Modeling Site" - Fuck that.
Its her Sex Site where she masterbates for her members or somthing.

Maybe try:
I Am A Bad Girl! I Got 100's Of Original Videos From Home That Prove it Inside! ... [snip]
No man... this is trying to be an innocent "real" girl next door who has an amateur site. The whole point is to be genuine and nervous and unprofessional. All your artificial "fucky sucky" shit is the voice of a jaded pornographer dude and the surfers can smell that from a mile away.
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Look who's talkin Mr. 3500+ post no life sig whore...

I cleared up that issue with:

"Try not to make visitors feel like sheep by reading the same things they have already read at over 100,000 other sites in a format that appearant now at prolly over 20,000 other sites on the net."

I do not like it. Its just my thoughts and my input. My fucking man... They asked and I was bored. Ya do not like it? Eat shit. I do not care. However, I am relatively certain it makes sense and all in all is a merely a generous pointer to sharpen the blade for that tour.

Its Fletches client and an opinion that it sucks or needs somthing more is by the god the fuck best thing anyone can offer to someone in my niche of the industry. Even if my opinion is negative it has weight to be considered whether you, Fletch or anyone else has somthing to say.

Infact... I should have just done what everyone else does...

Yay.. Great Job. Fletch. Keep it up...

Its just not my style to go with somthing when I think it could be better.

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Quality work Fletch as always... That Chloe is a sexy babe
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Old 12-12-2003, 08:07 PM   #17
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I love Fletch's designs. Very simple stuff, but in just the right way.
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Look who's talkin Mr. 3500+ post no life sig whore...

I cleared up that issue with:

"Try not to make visitors feel like sheep by reading the same things they have already read at over 100,000 other sites in a format that appearant now at prolly over 20,000 other sites on the net."

I do not like it. Its just my thoughts and my input. My fucking man... They asked and I was bored. Ya do not like it? Eat shit. I do not care. However, I am relatively certain it makes sense and all in all is a merely a generous pointer to sharpen the blade for that tour.

Its Fletches client and an opinion that it sucks or needs somthing more is by the god the fuck best thing anyone can offer to someone in my niche of the industry. Even if my opinion is negative it has weight to be considered whether you, Fletch or anyone else has somthing to say.

Infact... I should have just done what everyone else does...

Yay.. Great Job. Fletch. Keep it up...

Its just not my style to go with somthing when I think it could be better.
Your dog fuck you in the ass this morning or something? From your first and last post pretty much everyone has deduced that you are an idiot. This isn't a gallery for Worldsex it's an AMATEUR site. So the more shit on it that looks AMATEUR the better.


Nice job Fletch, this is the first design I've seen from you other than galleries. It screams "amateur girl" so much that you don't even notice all the pretty graphics.
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Old 12-12-2003, 08:32 PM   #19
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The design looks great. Clean and simple.
However I think you should change most of the pictures to softcore and don't show any muff shots. Tease the surfers so they pull out their credit cards But the design is very nice.
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It will sell, but it's far from a tight tour. Probably ok for an amateur site though.
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"Your dog fuck you in the ass this morning or something? From your first and last post pretty much everyone has deduced that you are an idiot."

Okies EVERYONE!
I am really sorry..
ALL of you.
I should have said nothing at all!

By fuck! Have my own opinion?? Remarkable and yet slappable for speaking it from the world renowned STOCKTRADER and His Side Kick SigWhore friend Gorny Guy whose undispubuted genious has brought us here today!!

EVERYONE in Porn land here me? EVERYONE? You are out there right?

OK Listen...

Its good to speak your mind. Especially if you think it might help! But wait it gets better! It helpes everyone else to! Imagine that! You have a right to think! Wow!

Now just because you might be afraid to speak your mind does not mean ya should not say nothing! Infact Information and opinions is what makes the world go around! Infact it is what makes us smarter!
Thats right! Smarter!

So next time someone tells you to go Go Fuck Yourself say...
Thank you! I really needed that and I am glad you had the balls to say it to me bro!

Now Fletch if you read this. I do Hope ya appreciate my feed back. I gave it to you here. Maybe next time I will Email ya my thoughts and maybe the effectiveness of design can be evolved even more in a discussion.
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Dumbass,
its not the fact that you are voicing your opinion that is a problem, it is the blatantly incorrect and hackneyed advice you are offering.

Furthermore, my response to your opinion was constructive and conversational and was not even remotely an attack.

Congratulations on your exposure as a complete moron and as a defensive child.
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Good lets blow this fucken thread up then bitches...
Lets have it!

You calling me a "Jaded Pornographer" is like saying "Paris Hilten is the finest bitch ever on the net!"

Sorry, I am far from that and I got a bottle of Jack Daniel's that say's so.
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Good lets blow this fucken thread up then bitches...
Lets have it!

You calling me a "Jaded Pornographer" is like saying "Paris Hilten is the finest bitch ever on the net!"

Sorry, I am far from that and I got a bottle of Jack Daniel's that say's so.
I didn't call you a jaded pornographer, I said the text you were suggesting sounds artificial, innapropriate for an amateur site, and sounds like the typical descriptions of a jaded pornographer. There is a difference.
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Good lets blow this fucken thread up then bitches...
Lets have it!

You calling me a "Jaded Pornographer" is like saying "Paris Hilten is the finest bitch ever on the net!"

Sorry, I am far from that and I got a bottle of Jack Daniel's that say's so.
What the hell does this have to do with your Jack Daniels anyway, Cletus?
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Oh ok then...

So you got it all down pat? Ya understand how the shit works??
You know what people want and what others have to say is merely conjecture or sounding like an imbecillic opinion...

Awright.
You got the answers! What have you done that makes a difference in the Adult Industry? What makes you able to say whether or not someones work sucks or is awesome?

I will take a shot just for you on this one.
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Oh ok then...

So you got it all down pat? Ya understand how the shit works??
You know what people want and what others have to say is merely conjecture or sounding like an imbecillic opinion...

Awright.
You got the answers! What have you done that makes a difference in the Adult Industry? What makes you able to say whether or not someones work sucks or is awesome?

I will take a shot just for you on this one.


Make it a double!
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No.

I have to still be able to type through this shit!
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donovan you should show more of that chantelle girl on your main site..or sites
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From Other Post:

"No kidding... My wife is going into labor right now! 2nd (and final) baby should be on the way tonight! Wish us luck!

Oh and can somebody finish my gallery submissions for me?
Thanks...."

Damn Gorny I didnt know that! Congrat's
I am just trying to have fun here some, ICQ me anytime 78943384.

Sorry I do not do Submissions but congratulations on being a new Father
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From Other Post:

"No kidding... My wife is going into labor right now! 2nd (and final) baby should be on the way tonight! Wish us luck!

Oh and can somebody finish my gallery submissions for me?
Thanks...."

Damn Gorny I didnt know that! Congrat's
I am just trying to have fun here some, ICQ me anytime 78943384.

Sorry I do not do Submissions but congratulations on being a new Father
Thanks man! No hard feelings, just having a fun flame war and jacking this thread for no reason!!!

Now I REALLY need a double shot of jack.

I'm going out the door....NOW.
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"Thanks man! No hard feelings, just having a fun flame war and jacking this thread for no reason!!!"

No no its worth Jacking. Fletch does good work I didnt say it all sucks!
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Fletch has his own, unique design style and this will guarantee him work as designer forever
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killer work, as usual. fletch knows exactly what the fuck is up.

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hopefully Fletch doesn't stop short reading the replies...
you'll all get shit on your faces.

bottom line.. it's a boring layout that if any 'outsider' put it up for critique it would've been slammed repeatedly by the same people here now singing it's praises.
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Just cuz I am bored. I am going to butcher this tour and point out where it can do better.

From the very top.
Text reads: "My Official Modeling Site" - Fuck that.
Its her Sex Site where she masterbates for her members or somthing.

Maybe try:
I Am A Bad Girl! I Got 100's Of Original Videos From Home That Prove it Inside!

Next. Portion that reads:
"ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A CUTE AMATEUR GIRL WHO HAS HER OWN PERSONAL SITE?"

Fuck that. We know they want an amateur girl by the point they come to this page. Give em what they want.

Maybe Try: My Kink Is Getting Wet And Showing It All Off For My Exclusive Members!

Now the photo block portions... Sigh.
text reading: "Looking for a cute amateur girl that loves to show off her naked body?"

Fuck that you have asked that question 3 times now... Get to business.

The photo blocks goto contain info about the episode of photos the viewer is seeing.

For example.
"These photos of me are in Tahoe on a weekend get away! I booked a little secluded cabin and got video clips of all kinds of things I did! I got to say I was very horny and had quite an episode with my favorite portable Vibrator!"

Proceed with that sorta theme with each photo block of images. Always elude that what the visitor see's is merely a small portion of hundreds of personal sex experiences.

Next.
Very bottom... There ya go asking them the same question again. Bleh... Fucking aim for the close damnit!

TRY:
"Your are just a couple clicks away from all my newest and archived videos and Photos 100% uncensored! Try my Site Tonight!"

LINKS at bottom:
Read "MEMBERS ENTRANCE | GET FULL ACCESS | NEXT PAGE"

Try:
" MEMEBERS CLICK HERE | ACCESS THE VIP SITE NOW! | WANT TO SEE MORE?"

I guess basically it is merely my opinion and I oughtah just keep my mouth shut about what REALLY works versus what hundreds of designers do everyday without a thought of what the efect is for clients.
I can tell Fletch definatly attempted to think through this a little but it still falls short of feeling personnal for the visitor. Try not to make visitors feel like sheep by reading the same things they have already read at over 100,000 other sites in a format that appearant now at prolly over 20,000 other sites on the net.

My phat

Thanks.

Hey, that's some good stuff. Unlike sheep, you were honest and took the time to provide a thoughtful response that might actually help someone improve their wording. Testing, testing, and testing it some more is the only real way to see if it sells or not. Sometimes just one or two word changes can make a big difference in conversions.

I don't think Fletch is thin-skinned and won't mind the comments, he's pretty cool.
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You should drink more often!

That "opinion" was right on point, dude!

The design is nice ... the pics are good, but YOU ARE RIGHT my Jack swilling friend!

These surfers maybe looking for "girl next door types" but ultimately they're there to jack the fuck off!!!

Get them hot, move them along - and CLOSE THE FUCKIN' DEAL!!!

Don't repeat the same inane crap over and over again!!!

These sites SHOULD BE in the BUSINESS of SELLING!!!

SELLING A FANTASY!!!

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Old 12-14-2003, 01:30 PM   #40
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Ultimately, it's MY opinion that counts most, since I'm Fletch's client.

And MY opinion is: I FUCKING LOVE IT!! I couldn't be happier. And CHLOE loves it as well.

I'd join this site in a second.

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Old 12-14-2003, 01:42 PM   #41
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And CHLOE loves it as well.



Well thats all that matters really. You got to have the model lover her site.
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Old 12-14-2003, 02:49 PM   #42
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Ultimately, it's MY opinion that counts most, since I'm Fletch's client.

And MY opinion is: I FUCKING LOVE IT!! I couldn't be happier. And CHLOE loves it as well.

I'd join this site in a second.

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