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Old 12-12-2003, 07:32 PM  
gornyhuy
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Originally posted by AlienQ
Just cuz I am bored. I am going to butcher this tour and point out where it can do better.

From the very top.
Text reads: "My Official Modeling Site" - Fuck that.
Its her Sex Site where she masterbates for her members or somthing.

Maybe try:
I Am A Bad Girl! I Got 100's Of Original Videos From Home That Prove it Inside! ... [snip]
No man... this is trying to be an innocent "real" girl next door who has an amateur site. The whole point is to be genuine and nervous and unprofessional. All your artificial "fucky sucky" shit is the voice of a jaded pornographer dude and the surfers can smell that from a mile away.
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