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NBDesign · 09-11-2003, 01:16 PM

Ok, sorry to ask again... but I have made some revisions based upon some comments before and wanted to see if this was any better...

Sorry, I really an not spamming... I just want to make sure things are ok so I make a few sales

http://www.eroticskins.com/estele/estele.html

Thanks again for all you input....

ryph · 09-11-2003, 01:25 PM

Better=]
You don't think that's alot of text though? If I was out on a jacking spree, I def wouldn't stop to read all that

NBDesign · 09-11-2003, 01:29 PM

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Originally posted by ryph
Better=]
You don't think that's alot of text though? If I was out on a jacking spree, I def wouldn't stop to read all that

Thanks...

Well, here's the deal...

I SUCK at writing gallery text... so I hired a couple of people to write for me and this is one of the two that I purchased...

They are both about the same in lenght and borh companies are very reputable... so... if it is... I would not know... I left that up o the professionals.

I hope it works... keeping my fingers crossed.....

Thanks again.

doober · 09-11-2003, 01:36 PM

looks much better than the one you posted here yesterday.
Sure there may be a bit of text but whoever reads it will prolly make him click and for those who dont, the quick loading design will make em click.
Either way its 100X better then the other one.

NBDesign · 09-11-2003, 01:37 PM

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Originally posted by doober
looks much better than the one you posted here yesterday.
Sure there may be a bit of text but whoever reads it will prolly make him click and for those who dont, the quick loading design will make em click.
Either way its 100X better then the other one.

Wow... thanks

Do you think ALL the text should be a link? I have seen that done before.

MCR · 09-11-2003, 01:47 PM

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Originally posted by ryph
Better=]
You don't think that's alot of text though? If I was out on a jacking spree, I def wouldn't stop to read all that

i agree with you my friend. There are lots of texts.

Nanda · 09-11-2003, 02:01 PM

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Originally posted by MCR

i agree with you my friend. There are lots of texts.

I agree too, looks great, too much text.

dij · 09-11-2003, 02:21 PM

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Originally posted by NBDesign

so I hired a couple of people to write for me and this is one of the two that I purchased...

What company did you buy the text from and how much was it?
Just interested..

NBDesign · 09-11-2003, 02:25 PM

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Originally posted by dij

What company did you buy the text from and how much was it?
Just interested..

ICQ me.. not sure if I can post that....

doober · 09-11-2003, 03:51 PM

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Originally posted by NBDesign

Wow... thanks

Do you think ALL the text should be a link? I have seen that done before.

No, dont link all the text it will cheese out your gallery.
Kind of like having to much of a good thing ya know.
Keep it tight and get their cocks hard then they will click no matter what!

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09-11-2003, 01:36 PM	#4
doober Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: in yoOoo kitchen Posts: 6,984	looks much better than the one you posted here yesterday. Sure there may be a bit of text but whoever reads it will prolly make him click and for those who dont, the quick loading design will make em click. Either way its 100X better then the other one.