Sorry......
 

Ok, sorry to ask again... but I have made some revisions based upon some comments before and wanted to see if this was any better...

Sorry, I really an not spamming... I just want to make sure things are ok so I make a few sales :)

http://www.eroticskins.com/estele/estele.html

Thanks again for all you input....

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You don't think that's alot of text though? If I was out on a jacking spree, I def wouldn't stop to read all that:2 cents:

Thanks...

Well, here's the deal...

I SUCK at writing gallery text... so I hired a couple of people to write for me and this is one of the two that I purchased...

They are both about the same in lenght and borh companies are very reputable... so... if it is... I would not know... I left that up o the professionals.

I hope it works... keeping my fingers crossed.....

Thanks again. :thumbsup

looks much better than the one you posted here yesterday.
Sure there may be a bit of text but whoever reads it will prolly make him click and for those who dont, the quick loading design will make em click.
Either way its 100X better then the other one.

Wow... thanks :)

Do you think ALL the text should be a link? I have seen that done before.

i agree with you my friend. There are lots of texts.

I agree too, looks great, too much text.

What company did you buy the text from and how much was it?
Just interested..

ICQ me.. not sure if I can post that....

No, dont link all the text it will cheese out your gallery.
Kind of like having to much of a good thing ya know.
Keep it tight and get their cocks hard then they will click no matter what!

:thumbsup