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liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 12:47 PM

This is a song my girlfriend wrote and sang this weekend at my brothers studio in L.A. What do you guys think??

http://www.cdvinteractive.com/shea/m...0-%20Story.mp3

EscortBiz · 05-19-2003, 12:51 PM

she has potential but if she does not look hot she wont move up anywhere in the the music industry in these days (she also needs to flirt)

sad but true

galleryseek · 05-19-2003, 12:52 PM

is she a jewel fan?? lol

pretty cool. but i think the 2nd time the verse comes in, it'd be badass with an additional insturment like some violins.

but anyhow, good singer if that is her!

oh, and pics???

xenigo · 05-19-2003, 12:53 PM

Liquidkid,
It sounds pretty damn good.... has kind of a Fiona Apple type sound to it, with the piano, and being that it's kind of dark.

Hey, hit me up on ICQ... I'm from Rocklin.

liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 01:01 PM

EscortBiz · 05-19-2003, 01:02 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by liquidkid

this is 100% business related, please post a pic of her ass.

Thanks In Advance

Music Director, Inc.

liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 01:04 PM

Ohh and does she have an ass or what....

EscortBiz · 05-19-2003, 01:06 PM

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Originally posted by liquidkid
Ohh and does she has an ass or what....

lets see more ASAP i might be able to get her on VH1 after I meet her in private

Rochard · 05-19-2003, 01:22 PM

This rocks........

Jamdin · 05-19-2003, 01:54 PM

Not bad voice

revbuddylove · 05-19-2003, 02:02 PM

Yeah, that's your, um, girlfriend. Yep, she sure is.
Isn't she from canada? Did you meet at Niagra Falls?

phogirl69 · 05-19-2003, 02:04 PM

Does she write her own songs? Who wrote the melody and lyrics?

liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 02:09 PM

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Originally posted by revbuddylove
Yeah, that's your, um, girlfriend. Yep, she sure is.
Isn't she from canada? Did you meet at Niagra Falls?

ahh....what?? lol

liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 02:10 PM

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Originally posted by phogirl69
Does she write her own songs? Who wrote the melody and lyrics?

She came up with the whole song in the studio in about 45 min and is her favorite of her songs. She wrote the lyrics.

The Truth Hurts · 05-19-2003, 02:18 PM

nice tune and singing, but the piano work doesn't always quite fit in too well... particularly in the "touch me..." kiss me..." parts..
the chorus on the vocals at 1:30-1:45 is awesome.

TheMob · 05-19-2003, 02:18 PM

does she sing like that when she cums?

revbuddylove · 05-19-2003, 02:34 PM

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Originally posted by TheMob?
does she sing like that when she cums?

He wouldn't know

apscripts · 05-19-2003, 02:35 PM

I like the piano during the chorus...it is spicy...and that sharp note at the end of the measure really adds a detailed dark feel. At first listen it comes out of nowhere, but by the second chorus you are anticipating it, and it is magical! Yeah those harmonies at 1:30 are straight genius pop!

Brad Mitchell · 05-19-2003, 02:40 PM

Killer song man!

Brad

AC Tracey · 05-19-2003, 02:40 PM

Kinda Tori, kinda jewel, kinda Fiona. She is hot. I think that she will do well.

-AC Tracey

phogirl69 · 05-19-2003, 02:49 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by liquidkid

She came up with the whole song in the studio in about 45 min and is her favorite of her songs. She wrote the lyrics.

Who wrote the melody? I can write lyrics, but I can't write melodies at all, I always wondered how a song gets written, melodies + lyrics. Did she ever have professional vocal training?
I sorta want to be a singer, but I don't have the slightest clue where to start.

liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 03:08 PM

She came up with everything.. just started playin the piano and went with it.

beemk · 05-19-2003, 03:12 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by EscortBiz

this is 100% business related, please post a pic of her ass.

Thanks In Advance

Music Director, Inc.

hibbidiji · 05-19-2003, 03:13 PM

As an opera major... I would say that the arrangement is a little to much on her low end.. she has more confidence in the higher notes... dropping that low is nice for effect especially in an emotional song, but it lingers there a little too long. transpose it up a few keys and you're jammin. Shes got a fine voice, just needs to tune it a little higher.
D

hibbidiji · 05-19-2003, 03:17 PM

ok on further review I might be SLIGHTLY wrong.. its also possible that in addition to a shaky lower range it was also mixed badly... that sounds like either a steinway 6 or a good yamaha, and the piano is kicking her ass a little.. mix it down and her up and you're closer to magic.
D

Jer · 05-19-2003, 03:22 PM

nice music! good luck to your girlfriend

apscripts · 05-19-2003, 03:29 PM

I agree with everything hibbidiji says

liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 05:42 PM

the piano was actually played on a kurzweil k2500xs

Gutterboy · 05-19-2003, 05:45 PM

Piano is out of balance on that track, way too loud. How much vocal training has she had?

liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 05:51 PM

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Originally posted by Gutterboy
Piano is out of balance on that track, way too loud. How much vocal training has she had?

Recently took 2 sessions at a local vocal coach.... other than that, none.

AngelAllgood · 05-19-2003, 05:52 PM

Gutterboy · 05-19-2003, 06:01 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by liquidkid
Recently took 2 sessions at a local vocal coach.... other than that, none.

She has a tendency to go flat whenever she has to sustain a note, and she doesn't sound as confident as she could be pitchwise when she hits some of her notes.. you can almost hear the "am I really doing this right" thoughts in her voice a few times.

A good vocal coach could help alot with those things. She's definitely got some good raw material to work with.

I spent alot of my childhood listening to singers.. unwillingly in the beginning. My dad was a classical conductor and pianist, and he used to coach opera singers for the Nottingham School of Music 4 nights a week in our house.

liquidkid · 05-19-2003, 06:03 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Gutterboy

She has a tendency to go flat whenever she has to sustain a note, and she doesn't sound as confident as she could be when she hits some of her notes.. you can almost hear the "am I really doing this right" thoughts in her voice a few times.

A good vocal coach could help alot with those things. She's definitely got some good raw material to work with.

I spent alot of my childhood listening to singers.. unwillingly in the beginning. My dad was a classical conductor and pianist, and he used to coach opera singers for the Nottingham School of Music 4 nights a week in our house.

Thanks man, I'll pass on the info.

webair · 05-19-2003, 08:04 PM

I hear a few spots where she lost her pitch, but other than that i think she mad talented...very unique voice, cross between played out jewel and fiona apple

overall? big

tell her to keep at it

webair · 05-19-2003, 08:08 PM

webair · 05-19-2003, 08:09 PM

liquid did she write that?

chodadog · 05-19-2003, 08:22 PM

5 years down the line, when she's famous, i'm selling the story of how her music career was launched on a pornography forum.

Lensman · 05-19-2003, 08:40 PM

Wow, I didn't know she wuz that good. I've got some songs I've written that I would like her to take a stab at.

They're a little more primal, but catchy!

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galleryseek Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 8,234	is she a jewel fan?? lol pretty cool. but i think the 2nd time the verse comes in, it'd be badass with an additional insturment like some violins. but anyhow, good singer if that is her! oh, and pics???

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xenigo Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Oakland, CA Posts: 8,067	Liquidkid, It sounds pretty damn good.... has kind of a Fiona Apple type sound to it, with the piano, and being that it's kind of dark. Hey, hit me up on ICQ... I'm from Rocklin.

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The Truth Hurts Zph7YXfjMhg Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: In Your Skull Posts: 15,308	nice tune and singing, but the piano work doesn't always quite fit in too well... particularly in the "touch me..." kiss me..." parts.. the chorus on the vocals at 1:30-1:45 is awesome.

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apscripts Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Los Angeles, CA USA Posts: 204	I like the piano during the chorus...it is spicy...and that sharp note at the end of the measure really adds a detailed dark feel. At first listen it comes out of nowhere, but by the second chorus you are anticipating it, and it is magical! Yeah those harmonies at 1:30 are straight genius pop! __________________ icq5708193 aptgp III -- Build a Blog, an RSS feed, a text TGP, and a thumb TGP all from one installation. Own Comus or AutoGallery? Have APTGP III Installed free for 30 days; no obligations.

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liquidkid Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sacramento Posts: 219	She came up with everything.. just started playin the piano and went with it.

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hibbidiji Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 208	As an opera major... I would say that the arrangement is a little to much on her low end.. she has more confidence in the higher notes... dropping that low is nice for effect especially in an emotional song, but it lingers there a little too long. transpose it up a few keys and you're jammin. Shes got a fine voice, just needs to tune it a little higher. D __________________ ---------------

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hibbidiji Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 208	ok on further review I might be SLIGHTLY wrong.. its also possible that in addition to a shaky lower range it was also mixed badly... that sounds like either a steinway 6 or a good yamaha, and the piano is kicking her ass a little.. mix it down and her up and you're closer to magic. D __________________ ---------------

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