Please review this gallery - GoFuckYourself.com

beemk · 12-30-2002, 06:01 PM

i didnt make this gallery but can you guys review it for me before i submit it? http://www.idthumbs.com/ms/01

thanks

dirtyone · 12-30-2002, 06:06 PM

Tired of site out there ... should be sites

and I dont really care for all that text at the top anyway

looks a little bland color wise

otherwise it looks ok to me

ZoiNk · 12-30-2002, 06:07 PM

The person is marketing that name of the paysite a lot with those pictures... Max Softcore. With softcore, about that hardest you will find is dildo penetration... which is what that gallery is. No incentive to buy, since you are giving them basically what you will get in a paysite. If you are showing pics like that, emphasize movies, not teen softcore pics. Just my

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Libertine · 12-30-2002, 06:18 PM

I think this content is not really suitable for promoting a softcore site. If you target the softcore audience, insertion close-ups might not be the best thing to show.

Niki · 12-30-2002, 06:22 PM

now, that's some softcore gallery

WendyB · 12-30-2002, 06:57 PM

I just for the fun of it ran your gallery URL in one of my tgp's submission checker.

There were some elements that would get you declined.

302 redirect(s) detected from link on your page.
"pop-ups/CJ"
The baned words "enter here" detected
Banned HTML deetected.
There were a couple images that would be considered too graphic for the catigory suggested.

The top and botom banner.

Although your gallery on the surface looks better than most that I spot review, I would have to pass on adding this one, as presented. There's an old saying. Less is sometimes better.

galleriesx · 12-30-2002, 07:12 PM

Design is good.... but the girl is damn ugly

Nikkey · 12-30-2002, 07:29 PM

That chick is nasty, put a bag over here head!

demented · 12-30-2002, 07:36 PM

Yeah I agree... Site is designed well, But that bitch is just gross.

Marcus · 12-30-2002, 07:51 PM

Great design, I dont like the text.

I wouldn't use the words "Ultra Hot Babe", "Luscious body" or "hot" in the same page as this girl.
The surfer is going to think you're lying to them and they won't buy.

I think it's best to just be honest with the surfer or instead use a model who really is hot.

If you insist on using this model then I would talk about how she's truly 18 and how she's an amateur.

I would do a little fake bio like they do on the other girls in the tour.
But unless youre promoting a greasy hair site, I don't think she'll sell many memberships to anything looking like that. No offense to you : )

Saintgames · 12-30-2002, 07:55 PM

Butt Ugly Girl... my 2 cents. Seems others were paying closer attention to the design. =)

Marcus · 12-30-2002, 07:56 PM

And I wouldn't list a gallery that said "High school seniors"
unless it had something on the bottom that says "All models are 18 years old or over"

12-30-2002, 06:01 PM	#1
beemk CLICK HERE Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 20,829	Please review this gallery i didnt make this gallery but can you guys review it for me before i submit it? http://www.idthumbs.com/ms/01 thanks __________________ I host with Vacares

12-30-2002, 06:07 PM	#3
ZoiNk Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Canada Posts: 2,370	The person is marketing that name of the paysite a lot with those pictures... Max Softcore. With softcore, about that hardest you will find is dildo penetration... which is what that gallery is. No incentive to buy, since you are giving them basically what you will get in a paysite. If you are showing pics like that, emphasize movies, not teen softcore pics. Just my ZoiNk __________________ "People can have the Model T in any color - so long as it's black." - Henry Ford

12-30-2002, 06:18 PM	#4
Libertine sex dwarf Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 17,860	I think this content is not really suitable for promoting a softcore site. If you target the softcore audience, insertion close-ups might not be the best thing to show. __________________ /(bb\|[^b]{2})/

12-30-2002, 06:22 PM	#5
Niki Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 1,476	now, that's some softcore gallery __________________ Ivo

12-30-2002, 06:57 PM	#6
WendyB Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Woodinville Posts: 538	I just for the fun of it ran your gallery URL in one of my tgp's submission checker. There were some elements that would get you declined. 302 redirect(s) detected from link on your page. "pop-ups/CJ" The baned words "enter here" detected Banned HTML deetected. There were a couple images that would be considered too graphic for the catigory suggested. The top and botom banner. Although your gallery on the surface looks better than most that I spot review, I would have to pass on adding this one, as presented. There's an old saying. Less is sometimes better. __________________ An act of kindness is a wonderful gift

12-30-2002, 06:06 PM	#2
dirtyone Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: God's Country (Georgia) Posts: 3,706	Tired of site out there ... should be sites and I dont really care for all that text at the top anyway looks a little bland color wise otherwise it looks ok to me

12-30-2002, 07:12 PM	#7
galleriesx Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Switzerland Posts: 108	Design is good.... but the girl is damn ugly

12-30-2002, 07:29 PM	#8
Nikkey Registered User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Canada Posts: 35	That chick is nasty, put a bag over here head!

12-30-2002, 07:36 PM	#9
demented Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Cincinnati Ohio Posts: 2,388	Yeah I agree... Site is designed well, But that bitch is just gross.

12-30-2002, 07:51 PM	#10
Marcus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 3,472	Great design, I dont like the text. I wouldn't use the words "Ultra Hot Babe", "Luscious body" or "hot" in the same page as this girl. The surfer is going to think you're lying to them and they won't buy. I think it's best to just be honest with the surfer or instead use a model who really is hot. If you insist on using this model then I would talk about how she's truly 18 and how she's an amateur. I would do a little fake bio like they do on the other girls in the tour. But unless youre promoting a greasy hair site, I don't think she'll sell many memberships to anything looking like that. No offense to you : )

12-30-2002, 07:55 PM	#11
Saintgames Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 43	Butt Ugly Girl... my 2 cents. Seems others were paying closer attention to the design. =) __________________ I be Kozmo *I"ll show you the stars*

12-30-2002, 07:56 PM	#12
Marcus Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 3,472	And I wouldn't list a gallery that said "High school seniors" unless it had something on the bottom that says "All models are 18 years old or over"