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Great design, I dont like the text.
I wouldn't use the words "Ultra Hot Babe", "Luscious body" or "hot" in the same page as this girl.
The surfer is going to think you're lying to them and they won't buy.
I think it's best to just be honest with the surfer or instead use a model who really is hot.
If you insist on using this model then I would talk about how she's truly 18 and how she's an amateur.
I would do a little fake bio like they do on the other girls in the tour.
But unless youre promoting a greasy hair site, I don't think she'll sell many memberships to anything looking like that. No offense to you : )
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