Diary of a teenage pornstar - GoFuckYourself.com

PerfectionGirls · 12-31-2002, 04:36 PM

Hey... please take a quick look at this. None of the Nav is operational yet and it isnt all done, so if you see odvious things then ignore them. We are looking for ways to market our new Jules Jordon signed pornstar and have come up with this approuch. We wanted to stay with are amateur feel, but still use her "statis" as a marketing tool. Let me hear your thoughts.

Cris... Diary of a teenage pornstar

pr0 · 12-31-2002, 04:38 PM

"I have wanted to be a porn star ever since I seen my first porno movie when I was sixteen. "

I dunno if i'd put that in there personally....

12-31-2002, 04:38 PM

it's 'shelves', not 'selves'

PerfectionGirls · 12-31-2002, 04:41 PM

Quote:

"I have wanted to be a porn star ever since I seen my first porno movie when I was sixteen. "

I agree... Good call and thanks for reinforcing my thoughts.. Wheres that damn copy writer.. Opps.. hahaha! My bad

Hey Eq.. yeah cool! I caught that.. thanks man.

pr0 · 12-31-2002, 04:43 PM

other than that man, looks like a solid idea

12-31-2002, 04:44 PM

she's a sexy bitch, what's her number. send her my way.

Simon-interaid · 12-31-2002, 04:58 PM

Yes that girl is very cute.

Hook me up

Kimmykim · 12-31-2002, 05:21 PM

One big thing with that much text is you probably want to use BOLD, italics and different colors to make it stand out a bit more.

You'll want to play up her age, size, and the fact that its exclusive to her site a bit more too.

Nothing wrong with the copy, it could be a tad bit more aggressive I think.

Kimmykim · 12-31-2002, 05:23 PM

You might also want to change the title of the page to use the name Cris instead of Dana...

PerfectionGirls · 12-31-2002, 06:13 PM

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You might also want to change the title of the page to use the name Cris instead of Dana...

Yeah.. its just housed on the server of the guy designing them for me. It picked up the name of one of other sites we are working on. Thanks for noticing

Bama · 12-31-2002, 06:35 PM

Too much text to read

First page should be broken down into 3 pages itself.

Give em' a tease paragraph with a tease picture - taking off a little more each time or a different pose...

Get em' clicking to see what she says or takes off next...
They'll be so used to clicking they'll be on that join page before they know it.

Minte · 12-31-2002, 06:40 PM

The offical website for Cris Taliana

typo... on official

i like the concept..good luck with it

12-31-2002, 04:36 PM	#1
PerfectionGirls Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: MI Posts: 4,484	Diary of a teenage pornstar Hey... please take a quick look at this. None of the Nav is operational yet and it isnt all done, so if you see odvious things then ignore them. We are looking for ways to market our new Jules Jordon signed pornstar and have come up with this approuch. We wanted to stay with are amateur feel, but still use her "statis" as a marketing tool. Let me hear your thoughts. Cris... Diary of a teenage pornstar __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

12-31-2002, 04:38 PM	#2
pr0 rockin tha trailerpark Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: ~Coastal~ Posts: 23,088	"I have wanted to be a porn star ever since I seen my first porno movie when I was sixteen. " I dunno if i'd put that in there personally.... __________________ __________ Loadedca$h - get sum! - Revengebucks - mmm rebills! - webair (gotz sErVrz)

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12-31-2002, 06:40 PM	#12
Minte Babemeister Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Madison Posts: 7,081	The offical website for Cris Taliana typo... on official i like the concept..good luck with it __________________ You might not be as anonymous as you think you are.

12-31-2002, 04:38 PM	#3
X37375787 Guest Posts: n/a	it's 'shelves', not 'selves'

12-31-2002, 04:43 PM	#5
pr0 rockin tha trailerpark Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: ~Coastal~ Posts: 23,088	other than that man, looks like a solid idea

12-31-2002, 04:44 PM	#6
X37375787 Guest Posts: n/a	she's a sexy bitch, what's her number. send her my way.

12-31-2002, 05:21 PM	#8
Kimmykim bitchslapping zebras!!!!! Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: In a shack by the beach Posts: 16,015	One big thing with that much text is you probably want to use BOLD, italics and different colors to make it stand out a bit more. You'll want to play up her age, size, and the fact that its exclusive to her site a bit more too. Nothing wrong with the copy, it could be a tad bit more aggressive I think.

12-31-2002, 05:23 PM	#9
Kimmykim bitchslapping zebras!!!!! Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: In a shack by the beach Posts: 16,015	You might also want to change the title of the page to use the name Cris instead of Dana...

12-31-2002, 06:35 PM	#11
Bama Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Redmond, WA Posts: 2,727	Too much text to read First page should be broken down into 3 pages itself. Give em' a tease paragraph with a tease picture - taking off a little more each time or a different pose... Get em' clicking to see what she says or takes off next... They'll be so used to clicking they'll be on that join page before they know it.