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JayAllan · 02-04-2009, 01:32 AM

I am thinking about developing this site. What do you think about the first page design?

http://www.hdglamourgirls.com

And here is one of my pics for the surfers.

Let me know what you think

mikesinner · 02-04-2009, 01:34 AM

Looks pretty good

JD · 02-04-2009, 01:38 AM

not a fan honestly. Looks like something out of the 90's... and what's with the one big image for the tour? Should definitely be sliced

JayAllan · 02-04-2009, 01:39 AM

I started it last year and I kinda left it. I am thinking of getting back on it though.

JayAllan · 02-04-2009, 01:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JD

not a fan honestly. Looks like something out of the 90's... and what's with the one big image for the tour? Should definitely be sliced

JD

Thanks for the comment! I suck at html

And maybe I am stuck in the 90s? That's why I ask.

HOWEVER I think almost all the adult websites I look at totally suck design wise.

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-04-2009, 01:46 AM

Why dont ya hit me up Jay

I would love to make a tour for you or improve on that one.

I'll give ya a good deal!

JayAllan · 02-04-2009, 01:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AlienQ

Why dont ya hit me up Jay

I would love to make a tour for you or improve on that one.

I'll give ya a good deal!

The LEGENDARY AlienQ !

I like your work man. I will definitely do a major overhaul of any site design that I do. I just want to get them up and making money first. Magazine sales are way down and I am not making the coin that I used to. So I want to get in with a simple design, and let my images and video speak for themselves to start with.

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-04-2009, 02:20 AM

Awright well I can help ya with that to and give ya some tips if ya want any

Just throwing it out to ya

I got mad Respect for yer work!

Deej · 02-04-2009, 05:39 AM

yea, totally... if youre rocking the hd glamour niche then you need a more schnazzy design

some cool examples

http://www.jessecapelli.com
http://www.glamourmodelsgonebad.com

I'm not saying yours cant pull the sales... but id suggest it as a better fit for your niche

pornguy · 02-04-2009, 05:50 AM

Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.

tranza · 02-04-2009, 06:07 AM

Looks very nice...you should try it!

JayAllan · 02-04-2009, 02:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Deej

yea, totally... if youre rocking the hd glamour niche then you need a more schnazzy design

some cool examples

http://www.jessecapelli.com
http://www.glamourmodelsgonebad.com

I'm not saying yours cant pull the sales... but id suggest it as a better fit for your niche

Thanks Deej. Those sites are "too porny" for me. They look good, but my style is way more unique. My content stands out as different (good or bad) so I want my website to do the same.

Quote:

Originally Posted by pornguy

Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.

There is definitely something to be said about it looking different. I want it to not look at all like any of the other sites out there.

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Originally Posted by tranza

Looks very nice...you should try it!

Right on man thanks

Deej · 02-04-2009, 02:46 PM

Well Ive always liked your work... you know what youre doing with the lens

Try it out as is... if you feel you want a different approach... just make an alternate tour or site... keep all sources open

alexchechs · 02-04-2009, 02:46 PM

It does seem a little dated with the "cyber font" you are using. I think it needs to be updated a bit and i think there might be just a little too much "empty" space

spideriux · 02-04-2009, 02:49 PM

looks really good for me

JayAllan · 02-04-2009, 03:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by alexchechs

It does seem a little dated with the "cyber font" you are using. I think it needs to be updated a bit and i think there might be just a little too much "empty" space

Yeah, I am pretty attached to that font

. Maybe I am a little dated too. Is TRON still cool?

Thanks for the input. I have learned long ago that what I like is not usually (ever?) what the customer likes.

_Richard_ · 02-04-2009, 04:05 PM

first pic is a great one

JamesK · 02-04-2009, 04:09 PM

Looks old-skool.

DVTimes · 02-04-2009, 04:11 PM

hot babes

JamesK · 02-04-2009, 04:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JayAllan

Thanks Deej. Those sites are "too porny" for me. They look good, but my style is way more unique. My content stands out as different (good or bad) so I want my website to do the same.

You can always hire a designer and tell him to make it different. Most designers have portfolios full of sites looking like that because that's what their clients want.

Your content looks great, wish I could say the same about that design

Khulan · 02-04-2009, 04:31 PM

Looks fucking hot!

Verbal · 02-04-2009, 06:04 PM

Hi JayAllen,

Here's my 2 cents

Try to lay off the numerous types of fonts on the same page. I wouldn't go with more than 3 types of font. Also, just because you CAN use the text styles, doesn't mean you have to. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but an inner shadow along with a drop shadow and a hint of bevel just is a bit overkill imho and takes away from what the text is saying.

I can appreciate simple and it's a good start, but with all due respect, your content deserves better ... it (the content) and the sales pitch get lost in the inconsistencies of the design.

Good luck man!

Elli · 02-04-2009, 06:14 PM

I actually like the use of white space.

JayAllan · 02-04-2009, 07:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Verbal

Hi JayAllan,

Here's my 2 cents

Try to lay off the numerous types of fonts on the same page. I wouldn't go with more than 3 types of font. Also, just because you CAN use the text styles, doesn't mean you have to. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but an inner shadow along with a drop shadow and a hint of bevel just is a bit overkill imho and takes away from what the text is saying.

I can appreciate simple and it's a good start, but with all due respect, your content deserves better ... it (the content) and the sales pitch get lost in the inconsistencies of the design.

Good luck man!

Thank you for the very informative criticism. I have heard that more than 3 fonts is bad in design. I tend to overbuild things. I think I will simplify it for sure.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elli

I actually like the use of white space.

I do too and will maintain that

Thank You.

devine · 02-04-2009, 08:31 PM

Don't take this the wrong way, but it just looks like you put a Pinto engine on a Ferrari. Your content is amazing, but the tour transmit a message like if you didn't care much about it. Not saying you don't care, just the feel it gives. When you say HD you expect HD, not bad quality. You expect crisp, clear images instead of blurred stuff. I understand you're looking for a simple look, just don't confuse simple with ugly, which is a common mistake in adult biz. And btw, not a single link works.

Again, don't take it the bad way, I'm saying this in a constructive way.

digifan · 02-04-2009, 08:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pornguy

Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.

.. and it can be a plus.

mikesinner · 02-04-2009, 09:22 PM

So how many fhg's do you guys have together?

JayAllan · 02-04-2009, 09:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mikesinner

So how many fhg's do you guys have together?

None Mike! This is only day 3 for this project. The site is not built yet. Just working on the tour design
and scanning and retouching my sets.

Once I have the basic site together we will put together some kick ass marketing materials.

tony286 · 02-04-2009, 10:09 PM

i like it, would have a little longer tour but i like it

bobby666 · 02-05-2009, 03:05 AM

my eyes really like what they see

MrDeiz · 02-05-2009, 03:08 AM

awesome tour

ExLust · 02-05-2009, 04:19 AM

Very hot pics.

nAtuRaLbEautY · 02-05-2009, 06:56 AM

Looks cool for me. Give it a try and let's see the results.
get more sales.

Chicks Delivery · 02-05-2009, 06:57 AM

Seams very nice! Beautiful PIC!

DutchTeenCash · 02-05-2009, 07:01 AM

horrible

everything that can be wrong is wrong, no seo text weird spelling small pics way way too small splash page

spend some $ for a good design that does your pics justice

candyflip · 02-05-2009, 07:07 AM

Do yourself a favor and spend a few dollars letting a real designer handle the job.

Just "getting something up" doesn't work.

$tandaman · 02-05-2009, 07:09 AM

http://www.hdbeauties.com/main.html Jay check out this, i'd think it's more suitable

it's for sale

JayAllan · 02-05-2009, 03:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bobby666

my eyes really like what they see

Quote:

Originally Posted by daizzzy

awesome tour

Quote:

Originally Posted by ExLust

Very hot pics.

Quote:

Originally Posted by nAtuRaLbEautY

Looks cool for me. Give it a try and let's see the results.
get more sales.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chicks Delivery

Seams very nice! Beautiful PIC!

Thanks a lot guys. It is just the beginning but I am glad to see people respond positively

JayAllan · 02-05-2009, 03:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DutchTeenCash

horrible

everything that can be wrong is wrong, no seo text weird spelling small pics way way too small splash page

spend some $ for a good design that does your pics justice

Thanks DutchTeenCash. I have not gotten into the seo, hell I have not even cut up the images. I will have to look at the spelling. Not sure what you mean by too small a splash page? Should it scroll more?

Quote:

Originally Posted by candyflip

Do yourself a favor and spend a few dollars letting a real designer handle the job.

Just "getting something up" doesn't work.

Margins are much slimmer now so I need to have a money maker before I can put $$ into a designer. Eventually I would love to have it redesigned by a pro.

Quote:

Originally Posted by $tandaman

http://www.hdbeauties.com/main.html Jay check out this, i'd think it's more suitable

it's for sale

That's very interesting. I don't love the design, but it is definitely more professional than mine by a long shot. I will check it out further. Thanks

Art Room · 02-05-2009, 05:37 PM

The design doesnt really match the concept you are going for, an example would be the fonts used. Maybe some more fluid fonts and add some color to glam it up some. Grey and white doesnt really pop.

Just my two cents

HouseHead · 02-05-2009, 05:38 PM

possibly a little to WHITE

JayAllan · 02-05-2009, 08:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Art Room

The design doesnt really match the concept you are going for, an example would be the fonts used. Maybe some more fluid fonts and add some color to glam it up some. Grey and white doesnt really pop.

Just my two cents

Yes, I think I will go with a more "elegant" font and use less typefaces overall.

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Deej I make pixels work Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I live here... Posts: 24,386	yea, totally... if youre rocking the hd glamour niche then you need a more schnazzy design some cool examples http://www.jessecapelli.com http://www.glamourmodelsgonebad.com I'm not saying yours cant pull the sales... but id suggest it as a better fit for your niche __________________ Deej's Designs n' What Not Hit me up for Design, CSS & Photo Retouching Icq#30096880

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JD Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 22,651	not a fan honestly. Looks like something out of the 90's... and what's with the one big image for the tour? Should definitely be sliced

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Verbal Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 3,420	Hi JayAllen, Here's my 2 cents Try to lay off the numerous types of fonts on the same page. I wouldn't go with more than 3 types of font. Also, just because you CAN use the text styles, doesn't mean you have to. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but an inner shadow along with a drop shadow and a hint of bevel just is a bit overkill imho and takes away from what the text is saying. I can appreciate simple and it's a good start, but with all due respect, your content deserves better ... it (the content) and the sales pitch get lost in the inconsistencies of the design. Good luck man!

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