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JayAllan 02-04-2009 01:32 AM

New Tour Design << HD GLAMOUR GIRLS >> What do you think...
 
I am thinking about developing this site. What do you think about the first page design?

http://www.hdglamourgirls.com

And here is one of my pics for the surfers. :pimp

http://www.jayscans.com/image/gfy/tits01.jpg

Let me know what you think :thumbsup

mikesinner 02-04-2009 01:34 AM

Looks pretty good

JD 02-04-2009 01:38 AM

not a fan honestly. Looks like something out of the 90's... and what's with the one big image for the tour? Should definitely be sliced

JayAllan 02-04-2009 01:39 AM

I started it last year and I kinda left it. I am thinking of getting back on it though.

JayAllan 02-04-2009 01:42 AM

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Originally Posted by JD (Post 15435659)
not a fan honestly. Looks like something out of the 90's... and what's with the one big image for the tour? Should definitely be sliced

JD

Thanks for the comment! I suck at html :thumbsup

And maybe I am stuck in the 90s? That's why I ask. :)

HOWEVER I think almost all the adult websites I look at totally suck design wise.

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-04-2009 01:46 AM

Why dont ya hit me up Jay:)
I would love to make a tour for you or improve on that one.

I'll give ya a good deal!

JayAllan 02-04-2009 01:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AlienQ (Post 15435690)
Why dont ya hit me up Jay:)
I would love to make a tour for you or improve on that one.

I'll give ya a good deal!

The LEGENDARY AlienQ ! :winkwink:

I like your work man. I will definitely do a major overhaul of any site design that I do. I just want to get them up and making money first. Magazine sales are way down and I am not making the coin that I used to. So I want to get in with a simple design, and let my images and video speak for themselves to start with.


AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-04-2009 02:20 AM

Awright well I can help ya with that to and give ya some tips if ya want any:)
Just throwing it out to ya:) I got mad Respect for yer work!

Deej 02-04-2009 05:39 AM

yea, totally... if youre rocking the hd glamour niche then you need a more schnazzy design

some cool examples

http://www.jessecapelli.com
http://www.glamourmodelsgonebad.com

I'm not saying yours cant pull the sales... but id suggest it as a better fit for your niche :2 cents:

pornguy 02-04-2009 05:50 AM

Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.

tranza 02-04-2009 06:07 AM

Looks very nice...you should try it!

JayAllan 02-04-2009 02:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Deej (Post 15436202)
yea, totally... if youre rocking the hd glamour niche then you need a more schnazzy design

some cool examples

http://www.jessecapelli.com
http://www.glamourmodelsgonebad.com

I'm not saying yours cant pull the sales... but id suggest it as a better fit for your niche :2 cents:

Thanks Deej. Those sites are "too porny" for me. They look good, but my style is way more unique. My content stands out as different (good or bad) so I want my website to do the same. :thumbsup

Quote:

Originally Posted by pornguy (Post 15436255)
Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.


There is definitely something to be said about it looking different. I want it to not look at all like any of the other sites out there. :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by tranza (Post 15436334)
Looks very nice...you should try it!

Right on man thanks :thumbsup

Deej 02-04-2009 02:46 PM

Well Ive always liked your work... you know what youre doing with the lens :thumbsup

Try it out as is... if you feel you want a different approach... just make an alternate tour or site... keep all sources open :2 cents:

alexchechs 02-04-2009 02:46 PM

It does seem a little dated with the "cyber font" you are using. I think it needs to be updated a bit and i think there might be just a little too much "empty" space

spideriux 02-04-2009 02:49 PM

looks really good for me

JayAllan 02-04-2009 03:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by alexchechs (Post 15439003)
It does seem a little dated with the "cyber font" you are using. I think it needs to be updated a bit and i think there might be just a little too much "empty" space

Yeah, I am pretty attached to that font :1orglaugh. Maybe I am a little dated too. Is TRON still cool? :)

Thanks for the input. I have learned long ago that what I like is not usually (ever?) what the customer likes. :upsidedow

_Richard_ 02-04-2009 04:05 PM

first pic is a great one

JamesK 02-04-2009 04:09 PM

Looks old-skool.

DVTimes 02-04-2009 04:11 PM

hot babes

JamesK 02-04-2009 04:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JayAllan (Post 15438982)
Thanks Deej. Those sites are "too porny" for me. They look good, but my style is way more unique. My content stands out as different (good or bad) so I want my website to do the same. :thumbsup

You can always hire a designer and tell him to make it different. Most designers have portfolios full of sites looking like that because that's what their clients want.

Your content looks great, wish I could say the same about that design :1orglaugh

Khulan 02-04-2009 04:31 PM

Looks fucking hot!

Verbal 02-04-2009 06:04 PM

Hi JayAllen,

Here's my 2 cents

Try to lay off the numerous types of fonts on the same page. I wouldn't go with more than 3 types of font. Also, just because you CAN use the text styles, doesn't mean you have to. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but an inner shadow along with a drop shadow and a hint of bevel just is a bit overkill imho and takes away from what the text is saying.

I can appreciate simple and it's a good start, but with all due respect, your content deserves better ... it (the content) and the sales pitch get lost in the inconsistencies of the design.

Good luck man!

Elli 02-04-2009 06:14 PM

I actually like the use of white space.

JayAllan 02-04-2009 07:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Verbal (Post 15439986)
Hi JayAllan,

Here's my 2 cents

Try to lay off the numerous types of fonts on the same page. I wouldn't go with more than 3 types of font. Also, just because you CAN use the text styles, doesn't mean you have to. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but an inner shadow along with a drop shadow and a hint of bevel just is a bit overkill imho and takes away from what the text is saying.

I can appreciate simple and it's a good start, but with all due respect, your content deserves better ... it (the content) and the sales pitch get lost in the inconsistencies of the design.

Good luck man!

Thank you for the very informative criticism. I have heard that more than 3 fonts is bad in design. I tend to overbuild things. I think I will simplify it for sure. :thumbsup

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elli (Post 15440031)
I actually like the use of white space.

I do too and will maintain that :)
Thank You.

devine 02-04-2009 08:31 PM

Don't take this the wrong way, but it just looks like you put a Pinto engine on a Ferrari. Your content is amazing, but the tour transmit a message like if you didn't care much about it. Not saying you don't care, just the feel it gives. When you say HD you expect HD, not bad quality. You expect crisp, clear images instead of blurred stuff. I understand you're looking for a simple look, just don't confuse simple with ugly, which is a common mistake in adult biz. And btw, not a single link works.

Again, don't take it the bad way, I'm saying this in a constructive way.

digifan 02-04-2009 08:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pornguy (Post 15436255)
Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.

.. and it can be a plus.

mikesinner 02-04-2009 09:22 PM

So how many fhg's do you guys have together?

JayAllan 02-04-2009 09:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mikesinner (Post 15440553)
So how many fhg's do you guys have together?

None Mike! This is only day 3 for this project. The site is not built yet. Just working on the tour design
and scanning and retouching my sets. :thumbsup

Once I have the basic site together we will put together some kick ass marketing materials. :)

tony286 02-04-2009 10:09 PM

i like it, would have a little longer tour but i like it

bobby666 02-05-2009 03:05 AM

my eyes really like what they see

MrDeiz 02-05-2009 03:08 AM

awesome tour

ExLust 02-05-2009 04:19 AM

Very hot pics.

nAtuRaLbEautY 02-05-2009 06:56 AM

Looks cool for me. Give it a try and let's see the results.
get more sales. :)

Chicks Delivery 02-05-2009 06:57 AM

Seams very nice! Beautiful PIC!

DutchTeenCash 02-05-2009 07:01 AM

horrible

everything that can be wrong is wrong, no seo text weird spelling small pics way way too small splash page

spend some $ for a good design that does your pics justice

candyflip 02-05-2009 07:07 AM

Do yourself a favor and spend a few dollars letting a real designer handle the job.

Just "getting something up" doesn't work.

$tandaman 02-05-2009 07:09 AM

http://www.hdbeauties.com/main.html Jay check out this, i'd think it's more suitable :)

it's for sale

JayAllan 02-05-2009 03:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bobby666 (Post 15441191)
my eyes really like what they see

Quote:

Originally Posted by daizzzy (Post 15441199)
awesome tour

Quote:

Originally Posted by ExLust (Post 15441358)
Very hot pics.

Quote:

Originally Posted by nAtuRaLbEautY (Post 15441739)
Looks cool for me. Give it a try and let's see the results.
get more sales. :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chicks Delivery (Post 15441745)
Seams very nice! Beautiful PIC!

Thanks a lot guys. It is just the beginning but I am glad to see people respond positively :thumbsup

JayAllan 02-05-2009 03:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DutchTeenCash (Post 15441757)
horrible

everything that can be wrong is wrong, no seo text weird spelling small pics way way too small splash page

spend some $ for a good design that does your pics justice

Thanks DutchTeenCash. I have not gotten into the seo, hell I have not even cut up the images. I will have to look at the spelling. Not sure what you mean by too small a splash page? Should it scroll more?

Quote:

Originally Posted by candyflip (Post 15441760)
Do yourself a favor and spend a few dollars letting a real designer handle the job.

Just "getting something up" doesn't work.

Margins are much slimmer now so I need to have a money maker before I can put $$ into a designer. Eventually I would love to have it redesigned by a pro.

Quote:

Originally Posted by $tandaman (Post 15441766)
http://www.hdbeauties.com/main.html Jay check out this, i'd think it's more suitable :)

it's for sale

That's very interesting. I don't love the design, but it is definitely more professional than mine by a long shot. I will check it out further. Thanks :thumbsup

Art Room 02-05-2009 05:37 PM

The design doesnt really match the concept you are going for, an example would be the fonts used. Maybe some more fluid fonts and add some color to glam it up some. Grey and white doesnt really pop.

Just my two cents

HouseHead 02-05-2009 05:38 PM

possibly a little to WHITE

JayAllan 02-05-2009 08:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Art Room (Post 15444577)
The design doesnt really match the concept you are going for, an example would be the fonts used. Maybe some more fluid fonts and add some color to glam it up some. Grey and white doesnt really pop.

Just my two cents


Yes, I think I will go with a more "elegant" font and use less typefaces overall.


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