Originally Posted by Verbal

Hi JayAllan,

Here's my 2 cents

Try to lay off the numerous types of fonts on the same page. I wouldn't go with more than 3 types of font. Also, just because you CAN use the text styles, doesn't mean you have to. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but an inner shadow along with a drop shadow and a hint of bevel just is a bit overkill imho and takes away from what the text is saying.

I can appreciate simple and it's a good start, but with all due respect, your content deserves better ... it (the content) and the sales pitch get lost in the inconsistencies of the design.

Good luck man!

Originally Posted by Elli

I actually like the use of white space.