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version5 · 11-11-2008, 10:29 AM

Hi Guys,

Just done a wordpress inspired design. I wanted to get peoples general opinions on it so I can make changes to it.

http://adultmonkeys.com/examples/sample1.jpg

Check it out and let me know what you think, and if you dont like it tell me why so I can continue to improve.

Thank you.

Fletch XXX · 11-11-2008, 10:31 AM

looks great!

alexchechs · 11-11-2008, 10:33 AM

Looks pretty good. I would make the header graphic (the cartoon of the girl) fill out the top space more. Maybe even have her head pop out the top. This would just ground the page more...

Iron Fist · 11-11-2008, 10:44 AM

looks fine..

MsNikkiNefarious · 11-11-2008, 10:45 AM

I like it

DutchTeenCash · 11-11-2008, 10:49 AM

looks good

nice bright colors easy to navigate and read, Id change the font though

tony286 · 11-11-2008, 10:51 AM

i like it,looks colorful and clean.

Zuzana Designs · 11-11-2008, 11:45 AM

looks great, nice work ..

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 11-11-2008, 12:04 PM

Its annoying to the eye.

I do not like the candy lines behind text. It distracts me and urges me to get a fork and scrape an eye out from its socket then throw it on the floor and run over it with the wheel of my desk chair.

The cartoon in the corner is badly drawn, its a bad pose, why is she wearing clothes? Wait scratch that. If the illustrator is gonna draw like that I rather not see a nude illustration attempt.

Sorry just being honest.

Pleasurepays · 11-11-2008, 12:06 PM

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Originally Posted by AlienQ

Its annoying to the eye.

I do not like the candy lines behind text. It distracts me and urges me to get a fork and scrape an eye out from its socket then throw it on the floor and run over it with the wheel of my desk chair.

listen to this guy... he invented scraping eyes out of their sockets with a fork!

Dirty Lord · 11-11-2008, 12:07 PM

looks very nice

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 11-11-2008, 12:09 PM

OH yeah and where is the fucking monkey?

mrwilson · 11-11-2008, 12:12 PM

I would consider loosing the scan lines.

I would also round the edges of the boxes aswell, as the header is rounded.

Other then that, good job

version5 · 11-11-2008, 12:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AlienQ

OH yeah and where is the fucking monkey?

I've seen a lot of posts by you and you never really can just say something simple can you?
Quite frankly I ask for feedback and it'd be nice for it to be given in a constructive format such as:

"I dont like the lines on the headers just draws attention away from the text and I dont like the illustration, seems badly drawn to me"

Once you learn how to actually be polite I'll take notice. Also in response to the quoted question I used Adult Monkeys as a sample header its not what the site will have at the end.

chuvii · 11-11-2008, 12:13 PM

man, thats sux
don't listen all these above
girl too small and looks shity, background on titles needs to be more clean (without black lines), thumbs so small ... bigger and bigger all

version5 · 11-11-2008, 12:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chuvii

man, thats sux
don't listen all these above
girl too small and looks shity, background on titles needs to be more clean (without black lines), thumbs so small ... bigger and bigger all

Thanks, I shall be removing the lines and considering playing with the header. In terms of thumbnails its all basic filler content so it can be as big as needed once actually made into a site.

I love it how you also say that sucks but dont go on to tell me that the design is bad other than for a couple of minor tweaks.

Thanks for your advice, and everyone elses shall be taken into account!

AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE · 11-11-2008, 12:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by version5

I've seen a lot of posts by you and you never really can just say something simple can you?
Quite frankly I ask for feedback and it'd be nice for it to be given in a constructive format such as:

"I dont like the lines on the headers just draws attention away from the text and I dont like the illustration, seems badly drawn to me"

Once you learn how to actually be polite I'll take notice. Also in response to the quoted question I used Adult Monkeys as a sample header its not what the site will have at the end.

Shut up stop crying its GFY.
I gave you my opinion.

You owe me an eye ball fucker.

Deej · 11-11-2008, 12:22 PM

Fill the header - All blue dosnt sell - either change your color scheme or add some contrast.

version5 · 11-11-2008, 12:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AlienQ

Shut up stop crying its GFY.
I gave you my opinion.

You owe me an eye ball fucker.

Tough, I'll put another image up in a minute so you can lose the other one.

Deej · 11-11-2008, 12:24 PM

and again...

Where are the monkeys?

version5 · 11-11-2008, 12:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Deej

and again...
Where are the monkeys?

I've answered that once already, but the answer is its just sample text, like the whole design is made up of samples images and text.

TubeSubmitters · 11-11-2008, 12:33 PM

Where the monkey at?

11-11-2008, 10:29 AM	#1
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alexchechs Confirmed User Join Date: May 2008 Location: BROOKLYN!!! Posts: 3,474	Looks pretty good. I would make the header graphic (the cartoon of the girl) fill out the top space more. Maybe even have her head pop out the top. This would just ground the page more... __________________ Alex Chechs http://thefawnconspiracy.com

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AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE best designer on GFY Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: IALIEN.COM - High Definition Video and Photographic Productions -ICQ 78943384 Posts: 30,307	Its annoying to the eye. I do not like the candy lines behind text. It distracts me and urges me to get a fork and scrape an eye out from its socket then throw it on the floor and run over it with the wheel of my desk chair. The cartoon in the corner is badly drawn, its a bad pose, why is she wearing clothes? Wait scratch that. If the illustrator is gonna draw like that I rather not see a nude illustration attempt. Sorry just being honest. __________________ NAKED HOSTING FTW!11 I'm On The INSANE PLAN $9.95/mo! \| The Alien Blog Adult News Worth Reading Updated Daily \| Content For Sale! 641 PICS 216 MINUTES OF VIDEO $350.00 \|ICQ: 78943384 \| Last edited by AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE; 11-11-2008 at 12:08 PM..

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11-11-2008, 12:09 PM	#12
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11-11-2008, 12:12 PM	#13
mrwilson mrwilson 2.0 Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ICQ: 465406783 Posts: 5,122	I would consider loosing the scan lines. I would also round the edges of the boxes aswell, as the header is rounded. Other then that, good job

11-11-2008, 12:13 PM	#15
chuvii Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 691	man, thats sux don't listen all these above girl too small and looks shity, background on titles needs to be more clean (without black lines), thumbs so small ... bigger and bigger all __________________ Mainstream and Adult Design

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