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drewcow · 09-07-2002, 05:09 PM

Hey, I'm new to making paysites and would like some feedback.

I'm looking to come off amateurish, and have decent tease pics and text to lure surfers to join.

The thumbnail gallery I'm posting is http://blowjoblady.com/galleries/roxlisa.html

My sign ups are not too good 0:6052!! What am I doing wrong? Thanks!

Drew

XXXPaysiteDesign · 09-07-2002, 05:12 PM

You're trying to sell a blowjob site on a gallery with no blowjob content.

DrewKole · 09-07-2002, 05:13 PM

Your first mistake was using having the same name as me.

Furthermore, right now... I see some mature ladies, by themselves nude.

What in the flying crap rat out of hell does that have to do with being a blowjob lady?

Hell, you could call a fat man in a little coat a blowjob lady and send them to your site, and you have the same odds of getting a sale.

USE RELEVANT PICS... and for the love of god, increase your "text" links on that gallery, use juicier text, and cut all that jibber jabbish outta there...

With that promotion, it musta taken you 2 months of daily posting to get that many people to your site?

Brown Bear · 09-07-2002, 05:14 PM

My first thought is that the site is too amateurish. People don't trust you with their credit card if you have a site that looks like it is run by a 12 year old in his parents basement.

For an example of good amateurish look, I suggest you check out sites like www.sweetcuties.com or www.dormangels.com

They look amateurish, yet somewhat professional.

I suggest you get a better logo and better design.

SR · 09-07-2002, 05:16 PM

Brown Bear · 09-07-2002, 05:17 PM

Also, you're sites tour is crap. It looks like you have about 6 content sets and thats all.

Brown Bear · 09-07-2002, 05:31 PM

Also, why does the logo in the second series of pics on your gallery say gimmechicken.com?

Like this one:

Rex · 09-07-2002, 05:44 PM

"is a sweet lady who works as a welder"

Ummmmm....this doesn't exactly scream damn I want to see this old bitch to suck dick

Your chicks have potential I will give you that, but yeah if I joined I would expect to see some serious BJ videos from those bitches! The design needs a little help, take that back, the design needs a lot of help!

If you need affordable design help, and I mean I will cut you a good deal, then ICQ me 41687856

09-07-2002, 05:09 PM	#1
drewcow Registered User Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 1	new site review please Hey, I'm new to making paysites and would like some feedback. I'm looking to come off amateurish, and have decent tease pics and text to lure surfers to join. The thumbnail gallery I'm posting is http://blowjoblady.com/galleries/roxlisa.html My sign ups are not too good 0:6052!! What am I doing wrong? Thanks! Drew

09-07-2002, 05:12 PM	#2
XXXPaysiteDesign Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Everett, WA Posts: 2,201	You're trying to sell a blowjob site on a gallery with no blowjob content. __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

09-07-2002, 05:14 PM	#4
Brown Bear Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 4,982	My first thought is that the site is too amateurish. People don't trust you with their credit card if you have a site that looks like it is run by a 12 year old in his parents basement. For an example of good amateurish look, I suggest you check out sites like www.sweetcuties.com or www.dormangels.com They look amateurish, yet somewhat professional. I suggest you get a better logo and better design. __________________ Surrender all your independent thinking and Click Here for re-programming.

09-07-2002, 05:16 PM	#5
SR Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 2,239	hehe

09-07-2002, 05:17 PM	#6
Brown Bear Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 4,982	Also, you're sites tour is crap. It looks like you have about 6 content sets and thats all. __________________ Surrender all your independent thinking and Click Here for re-programming.

09-07-2002, 05:13 PM	#3
DrewKole Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 5,193	Your first mistake was using having the same name as me. Furthermore, right now... I see some mature ladies, by themselves nude. What in the flying crap rat out of hell does that have to do with being a blowjob lady? Hell, you could call a fat man in a little coat a blowjob lady and send them to your site, and you have the same odds of getting a sale. USE RELEVANT PICS... and for the love of god, increase your "text" links on that gallery, use juicier text, and cut all that jibber jabbish outta there... With that promotion, it musta taken you 2 months of daily posting to get that many people to your site?

09-07-2002, 05:31 PM	#7
Brown Bear Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 4,982	Also, why does the logo in the second series of pics on your gallery say gimmechicken.com? Like this one: __________________ Surrender all your independent thinking and Click Here for re-programming.

09-07-2002, 05:44 PM	#8
Rex Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Location: ohio Posts: 2,241	"is a sweet lady who works as a welder" Ummmmm....this doesn't exactly scream damn I want to see this old bitch to suck dick Your chicks have potential I will give you that, but yeah if I joined I would expect to see some serious BJ videos from those bitches! The design needs a little help, take that back, the design needs a lot of help! If you need affordable design help, and I mean I will cut you a good deal, then ICQ me 41687856 __________________ I don't own RexMag anymore.