new site review please
 

Hey, I'm new to making paysites and would like some feedback.

I'm looking to come off amateurish, and have decent tease pics and text to lure surfers to join.

The thumbnail gallery I'm posting is http://blowjoblady.com/galleries/roxlisa.html

My sign ups are not too good 0:6052!! What am I doing wrong? Thanks!

Drew

You're trying to sell a blowjob site on a gallery with no blowjob content.

Your first mistake was using having the same name as me.

Furthermore, right now... I see some mature ladies, by themselves nude.

What in the flying crap rat out of hell does that have to do with being a blowjob lady?

Hell, you could call a fat man in a little coat a blowjob lady and send them to your site, and you have the same odds of getting a sale.

USE RELEVANT PICS... and for the love of god, increase your "text" links on that gallery, use juicier text, and cut all that jibber jabbish outta there...

With that promotion, it musta taken you 2 months of daily posting to get that many people to your site?

My first thought is that the site is too amateurish. People don't trust you with their credit card if you have a site that looks like it is run by a 12 year old in his parents basement.

For an example of good amateurish look, I suggest you check out sites like www.sweetcuties.com or www.dormangels.com

They look amateurish, yet somewhat professional.

I suggest you get a better logo and better design.

hehe

Also, you're sites tour is crap. It looks like you have about 6 content sets and thats all.

Also, why does the logo in the second series of pics on your gallery say gimmechicken.com?

Like this one:

http://blowjoblady.com/galleries/lisa0152.jpg

"is a sweet lady who works as a welder"


Ummmmm....this doesn't exactly scream damn I want to see this old bitch to suck dick

Your chicks have potential I will give you that, but yeah if I joined I would expect to see some serious BJ videos from those bitches! The design needs a little help, take that back, the design needs a lot of help!


If you need affordable design help, and I mean I will cut you a good deal, then ICQ me 41687856