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untitled · 09-01-2002, 12:28 AM

here's my very first gallery, tell me where i screwed up!

http://www.revsharexxx.com/rev3540/gallery/1/index.htm

421Fill · 09-01-2002, 12:31 AM

she's got nice boobs.

Krome · 09-01-2002, 12:35 AM

I think that is rather good...maybe more text to sell the sponsor...actually you need some text before you can add and have more!!...people click on text more than banners.

klik · 09-01-2002, 12:36 AM

Wow.. theres actually nothing wrong with that gallery.. I would list it.

I was expecting a pop up hell... or thumbs linking to dialers.. or a bunch of russian text.. or something..

Satan · 09-01-2002, 12:36 AM

Welcome and

untitled · 09-01-2002, 12:36 AM

yeah i was trying to think of some text but everything i thought of seemed lame..

WiredGuy · 09-01-2002, 12:58 AM

Great gallery, not enough ads. One banner at the top will get you listed everywhere no problem, but won't make sales in my opinion. Add the text, no matter how lame it is. Face it, the people who are surfing this are horny as hell, they're whipping it out in front of these pics. Bet your text doesn't seem that lame anymore...

WG

Mikeee · 09-01-2002, 01:02 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by WiredGuy
Great gallery, not enough ads. One banner at the top will get you listed everywhere no problem, but won't make sales in my opinion. Add the text, no matter how lame it is. Face it, the people who are surfing this are horny as hell, they're whipping it out in front of these pics. Bet your text doesn't seem that lame anymore...

WG

Don't give advice dude.

Jizar II · 09-01-2002, 05:48 AM

thats very nice for a first try.. I was expecting some lame crap design.. but this is OK :-)

HeadPimp · 09-01-2002, 09:14 AM

Looks nice, better than the crap I usually throw together.

Does need more sales text though.

Fletch XXX · 09-01-2002, 09:16 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by untitled
yeah i was trying to think of some text but everything i thought of seemed lame..

I like it, but Id change the colors, and add more sell text as mentioned.

Frank W · 09-01-2002, 09:39 AM

Hey, great first try and welcome to gallery making. Girl is decent looking, so good job on that. There are some areas that you may want to look into:

Gallery seems to load slow.

No "call to action" text--what exactly do you want the surfer to do? What's in it for them? How is this site different?

No personalization -- who is this girl? why should the surfer find her any more appealing than the thousands of other TGP models out there?

dirtyone · 09-01-2002, 09:41 AM

Very nice who did that for you?

Welcome and Go fuck yourself

Babaganoosh · 09-01-2002, 10:32 AM

You definitely need some text. I will let you in on a little secret. Be amusing or somewhat witty. The "Cum see my hot, wet pussy now. CLICK HERE" shit doesn't work anymore. I have good luck with lines like "Click here to see the rest of me for less than the price of an extra value meal".

.:Frog:. · 09-01-2002, 10:42 AM

Its rare that a gallery is built so clean that people are concerned you don't have enough links back to your sponsor.

Try adding text like "Enter Here" or "Click Here" on the girls Pompoms at the bottom.

Or add a little sentence below the thumbs.
Its a great gallery.

untitled · 09-02-2002, 12:42 AM

thanks for the advice everyone. Here's my second gallery and no i didn't pay anyone to make it.

http://www.revsharesex.com/rev3540/1/index.htm

now i need to start submitting them, what are the top traffic tgp's you guys submit to?

kmanrox · 09-02-2002, 12:54 AM

still loads slow

redshift · 09-02-2002, 01:03 AM

I fucked her

Rochard · 09-02-2002, 01:04 AM

No, no, no, no..... This is what is all wrong with Cheerleader porn. You do not, can not, and will not post pictures of 23 year old women and call them a cheerleader. It doesn't work.

Fuck - This is why I got into porn in the first place. No one can make real looking fucking cheerleader pictures.

I hope I don't piss everyone off by spamming my own program here, but if your gonna push cheerleaders at least post some pictures of a cheerleader - 18 or 19 years old, and not a day older.

You can find more information about us at Lightspeed Cash

Your gallery, however, rocks. Great for a first try.

Here's our latest edition: Alliah. Tell me she doesn't look like a cheerleader.

Carrie · 09-02-2002, 02:06 AM

Second gallery big no-no... thumbs at the bottom linked to sponsor.
Why did you make the text a graphic? Speed the gallery up by leaving text as *text*.
Other than that, they look great layout-wise and design-wise. Good thing they're on free hosting, otherwise those 70k big pics would kill you on bandwidth.

RocHard your girl definitely looks like a cheerleader. Saw you guys walking down the street getting ready to go to the go-kart racing in FL when the girls had just changed into their cheerleading outfits. Looked like a bonafide cheer team bouncing down the street. Surprised you didn't cause any fender-benders from all of the ogling.

Carrie · 09-02-2002, 02:08 AM

There are 22yr old cheerleaders in college, and 30yr old cheerleaders in the NFL, you know...
And you can't tell me the Dallas Cowboy Cheerleaders don't have guys who go home after the game and yank that thing till it's bleeding thinking of those women.

Jon · 09-02-2002, 03:26 AM

you fucked up by using ARS as a sponsor..

CumSensei · 09-02-2002, 04:25 AM

On the first gallery I would add some text at the bottom like...
"Click my poom pooms to see me live" or something..the red poom pooms are a good eye catcher for sure.

PhilipX · 09-02-2002, 04:58 AM

You have good choice of boobs.

Easy · 09-02-2002, 07:07 AM

1st gallery... I see that set every day at least once, wouldn't list it anymore
2nd gallery... blind thumbs

but layout is way cool

09-01-2002, 12:28 AM	#1
untitled Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 352	My FiRsT GAlLErY!!! here's my very first gallery, tell me where i screwed up! http://www.revsharexxx.com/rev3540/gallery/1/index.htm

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421Fill Super Mario Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Swenson's Avatar Posts: 19,416	she's got nice boobs. __________________ RELEASE THE EPSTEIN FILES!!!

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09-01-2002, 12:58 AM	#7
WiredGuy Pounding Googlebot Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Canada Posts: 34,483	Great gallery, not enough ads. One banner at the top will get you listed everywhere no problem, but won't make sales in my opinion. Add the text, no matter how lame it is. Face it, the people who are surfing this are horny as hell, they're whipping it out in front of these pics. Bet your text doesn't seem that lame anymore... WG __________________ I play with Google.

09-01-2002, 09:39 AM	#12
Frank W Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: California Posts: 889	Hey, great first try and welcome to gallery making. Girl is decent looking, so good job on that. There are some areas that you may want to look into: Gallery seems to load slow. No "call to action" text--what exactly do you want the surfer to do? What's in it for them? How is this site different? No personalization -- who is this girl? why should the surfer find her any more appealing than the thousands of other TGP models out there? __________________ "If you hate a person, you hate something in him that is part of yourself. What isn't part of ourselves doesn't disturb us." -- Herman Hesse

09-01-2002, 12:35 AM	#3
Krome Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: London - UK Posts: 2,851	I think that is rather good...maybe more text to sell the sponsor...actually you need some text before you can add and have more!!...people click on text more than banners.

09-01-2002, 12:36 AM	#4
klik Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: san diego Posts: 5,092	Wow.. theres actually nothing wrong with that gallery.. I would list it. I was expecting a pop up hell... or thumbs linking to dialers.. or a bunch of russian text.. or something..

09-01-2002, 05:48 AM	#9
Jizar II Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2001 Location: LLL© Posts: 1,425	thats very nice for a first try.. I was expecting some lame crap design.. but this is OK :-)

09-01-2002, 09:14 AM	#10
HeadPimp Bad Mo-Fo Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 2,772	Looks nice, better than the crap I usually throw together. Does need more sales text though.

09-01-2002, 09:41 AM	#13
dirtyone Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: God's Country (Georgia) Posts: 3,706	Very nice who did that for you? Welcome and Go fuck yourself

09-01-2002, 10:32 AM	#14
Babaganoosh ♥♥♥ Likes Hugs ♥♥♥ Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: /home Posts: 15,841	You definitely need some text. I will let you in on a little secret. Be amusing or somewhat witty. The "Cum see my hot, wet pussy now. CLICK HERE" shit doesn't work anymore. I have good luck with lines like "Click here to see the rest of me for less than the price of an extra value meal". __________________ I like pie.

09-01-2002, 10:42 AM	#15
.:Frog:. Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: ~ C A N A D A ~ Posts: 2,123	Its rare that a gallery is built so clean that people are concerned you don't have enough links back to your sponsor. Try adding text like "Enter Here" or "Click Here" on the girls Pompoms at the bottom. Or add a little sentence below the thumbs. Its a great gallery. __________________ <a href="http://www.pornopayouts.com/?rid=pp3076">PornoPayouts</a> Tons of Hosted Galleries.

09-02-2002, 12:42 AM	#16
untitled Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 352	thanks for the advice everyone. Here's my second gallery and no i didn't pay anyone to make it. http://www.revsharesex.com/rev3540/1/index.htm now i need to start submitting them, what are the top traffic tgp's you guys submit to?

09-02-2002, 12:54 AM	#17
kmanrox aka K-Man Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: The Gutter Posts: 29,292	still loads slow __________________ Crypto HODLr Crypto mining Angel investor

09-02-2002, 01:03 AM	#18
redshift Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: anus fuckin' yo mama Posts: 1,044	I fucked her

09-02-2002, 01:04 AM	#19
Rochard Jägermeister Test Pilot Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: NORCAL Posts: 74,050	No, no, no, no..... This is what is all wrong with Cheerleader porn. You do not, can not, and will not post pictures of 23 year old women and call them a cheerleader. It doesn't work. Fuck - This is why I got into porn in the first place. No one can make real looking fucking cheerleader pictures. I hope I don't piss everyone off by spamming my own program here, but if your gonna push cheerleaders at least post some pictures of a cheerleader - 18 or 19 years old, and not a day older. You can find more information about us at Lightspeed Cash Your gallery, however, rocks. Great for a first try. Here's our latest edition: Alliah. Tell me she doesn't look like a cheerleader. __________________ “The choice is no longer between right or left. The choice is between normal and crazy.” - Sarah Huckabee Sanders YNOT MAIL \| THE BEST ADULT MAILING SOLUTION Last edited by Rochard; 09-02-2002 at 01:06 AM..

09-02-2002, 02:06 AM	#20
Carrie Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Virgin - nee Posts: 3,162	Second gallery big no-no... thumbs at the bottom linked to sponsor. Why did you make the text a graphic? Speed the gallery up by leaving text as text. Other than that, they look great layout-wise and design-wise. Good thing they're on free hosting, otherwise those 70k big pics would kill you on bandwidth. RocHard your girl definitely looks like a cheerleader. Saw you guys walking down the street getting ready to go to the go-kart racing in FL when the girls had just changed into their cheerleading outfits. Looked like a bonafide cheer team bouncing down the street. Surprised you didn't cause any fender-benders from all of the ogling.

09-02-2002, 02:08 AM	#21
Carrie Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Virgin - nee Posts: 3,162	There are 22yr old cheerleaders in college, and 30yr old cheerleaders in the NFL, you know... And you can't tell me the Dallas Cowboy Cheerleaders don't have guys who go home after the game and yank that thing till it's bleeding thinking of those women.

09-02-2002, 03:26 AM	#22
Jon Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: New York City Posts: 2,578	you fucked up by using ARS as a sponsor.. __________________ WickedFire.com - Stay here. We don't need more of you. Not unless you have money, then, fine...

09-02-2002, 04:25 AM	#23
CumSensei Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Sweden Posts: 3,986	On the first gallery I would add some text at the bottom like... "Click my poom pooms to see me live" or something..the red poom pooms are a good eye catcher for sure. __________________ CumSensei say: SEO traffic makes big boom boom.

09-02-2002, 04:58 AM	#24
PhilipX Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 200	You have good choice of boobs.

09-02-2002, 07:07 AM	#25
Easy Registered User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Backyard Posts: 79	1st gallery... I see that set every day at least once, wouldn't list it anymore 2nd gallery... blind thumbs but layout is way cool