My FiRsT GAlLErY!!!
 

here's my very first gallery, tell me where i screwed up!

http://www.revsharexxx.com/rev3540/gallery/1/index.htm

she's got nice boobs. :)

I think that is rather good...maybe more text to sell the sponsor...actually you need some text before you can add and have more!!...people click on text more than banners.

Wow.. theres actually nothing wrong with that gallery.. I would list it.

I was expecting a pop up hell... or thumbs linking to dialers.. or a bunch of russian text.. or something..

Welcome and :321GFY

yeah i was trying to think of some text but everything i thought of seemed lame..

Great gallery, not enough ads. One banner at the top will get you listed everywhere no problem, but won't make sales in my opinion. Add the text, no matter how lame it is. Face it, the people who are surfing this are horny as hell, they're whipping it out in front of these pics. Bet your text doesn't seem that lame anymore...

WG

Don't give advice dude.

thats very nice for a first try.. I was expecting some lame crap design.. but this is OK :-)

Looks nice, better than the crap I usually throw together.

Does need more sales text though.

I like it, but Id change the colors, and add more sell text as mentioned.

Hey, great first try and welcome to gallery making. Girl is decent looking, so good job on that. There are some areas that you may want to look into:

Gallery seems to load slow.

No "call to action" text--what exactly do you want the surfer to do? What's in it for them? How is this site different?

No personalization -- who is this girl? why should the surfer find her any more appealing than the thousands of other TGP models out there?

Very nice who did that for you?

Welcome and Go fuck yourself

You definitely need some text. I will let you in on a little secret. Be amusing or somewhat witty. The "Cum see my hot, wet pussy now. CLICK HERE" shit doesn't work anymore. I have good luck with lines like "Click here to see the rest of me for less than the price of an extra value meal".

Its rare that a gallery is built so clean that people are concerned you don't have enough links back to your sponsor.

Try adding text like "Enter Here" or "Click Here" on the girls Pompoms at the bottom.

Or add a little sentence below the thumbs.
Its a great gallery.

thanks for the advice everyone. Here's my second gallery and no i didn't pay anyone to make it.

http://www.revsharesex.com/rev3540/1/index.htm

now i need to start submitting them, what are the top traffic tgp's you guys submit to?

still loads slow

I fucked her

No, no, no, no..... This is what is all wrong with Cheerleader porn. You do not, can not, and will not post pictures of 23 year old women and call them a cheerleader. It doesn't work.

Fuck - This is why I got into porn in the first place. No one can make real looking fucking cheerleader pictures.

I hope I don't piss everyone off by spamming my own program here, but if your gonna push cheerleaders at least post some pictures of a cheerleader - 18 or 19 years old, and not a day older.

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Your gallery, however, rocks. Great for a first try.

Here's our latest edition: Alliah. Tell me she doesn't look like a cheerleader.

http://www.lightspeedcash.com/rock/alliah.jpg

Second gallery big no-no... thumbs at the bottom linked to sponsor.
Why did you make the text a graphic? Speed the gallery up by leaving text as *text*.
Other than that, they look great layout-wise and design-wise. Good thing they're on free hosting, otherwise those 70k big pics would kill you on bandwidth.

RocHard your girl definitely looks like a cheerleader. Saw you guys walking down the street getting ready to go to the go-kart racing in FL when the girls had just changed into their cheerleading outfits. Looked like a bonafide cheer team bouncing down the street. Surprised you didn't cause any fender-benders from all of the ogling. :eyecrazy

There are 22yr old cheerleaders in college, and 30yr old cheerleaders in the NFL, you know...
And you can't tell me the Dallas Cowboy Cheerleaders don't have guys who go home after the game and yank that thing till it's bleeding thinking of those women. :Graucho

you fucked up by using ARS as a sponsor..

On the first gallery I would add some text at the bottom like...
"Click my poom pooms to see me live" or something..the red poom pooms are a good eye catcher for sure.

You have good choice of boobs.

1st gallery... I see that set every day at least once, wouldn't list it anymore
2nd gallery... blind thumbs

but layout is way cool