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FireFoz · 07-10-2002, 07:14 AM

www.teenchase.com

my first and new pay site

converting 1:700 from pretty quality traffic, up for 2 days. i dont think its good enough!

I personal think the tour is not good enough... i'll have to redo it or let somebody do it for me. Or should i just get rid of the tour and stick with the clickable "thumbs"?

I know the design looks ok, so please dont reply with "it looks good", i want to hear some comments whats not good or how to make it better instead!

I cant make it better with "it looks good", so start bitching!

nocostporn · 07-10-2002, 07:18 AM

hmm I like the idea you're going with... I would suggest making each scene have it's own tour of 3 new pics of that specific girl.. I like the idea though... and you might want to offer a trial signup instead of having "24.95" in big bold letters above the billing options...

Tipsy · 07-10-2002, 07:18 AM

Put something in the tour that'd make the surfer actually want to join. Use hardcore pics with pixellated/fuzzed/whatever genitals for example. Maybe have just a few clickable thumbs to larger picks. Experiment to see what works for you BUT give the surfer something to make them want to join.

A few unerotic clothed and topless shots will not make people flash the plastic.

nocostporn · 07-10-2002, 07:19 AM

also the splash page looks too galleryish... surfers have seen thousands of galleries and they don't expect much from them...

Living For Today · 07-10-2002, 07:23 AM

Thanks for the advice guys. Been helpful so far

Keep it comin

BJ · 07-10-2002, 07:32 AM

take the american express logo off the join page.

woops, thats glo-bills page... thought amex wasnt allowed for adult sites... news to me

TheApostate · 07-10-2002, 07:37 AM

the .gifs seem to flash really fast, but that might not necessarily be bad.
good work firefoz

FireFoz · 07-10-2002, 07:48 AM

okay, after i've done this banner i'll redo the tour with some more hardcore pics and more flesh

And indeed, maybe its not so good to have the price in bold on top of the sign up page :p

thanks, keep it coming ppl

UnseenWorld · 07-10-2002, 08:00 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Tipsy
Put something in the tour that'd make the surfer actually want to join. Use hardcore pics with pixellated/fuzzed/whatever genitals for example. Maybe have just a few clickable thumbs to larger picks. Experiment to see what works for you BUT give the surfer something to make them want to join.

A few unerotic clothed and topless shots will not make people flash the plastic.

Not every guy wants to see a dick in a photo. Lots of guys, believe it or not, just want to see naked chicks without having to look at some dude at the same time.

Wizzo · 07-10-2002, 08:00 AM

I think it just needs a little more spice! DO I get Videos? How many pics? Live Chat? Updates? Those are the type of questions that surfers need answered, however the trick is to anwer those type of questions, while stimulating interest and excitement at the same time. It's kinda like gallery posting you need to make the surfer want to click!

UnseenWorld · 07-10-2002, 08:00 AM

I notice you're using GloBill. You got the right billing company, anyway.

tayloryum · 07-10-2002, 08:16 AM

also, on your first tour page, you spelled "naughty" without the "t".

playa · 07-10-2002, 08:30 AM

try to change your join page,,, add more teasing text,,,

this new style of paysite is very good,,

could you please tell me what script you use for that site?

i need something similar to my site

JOP · 07-10-2002, 08:33 AM

The site is very slow for me. Could be me... but I think

you should check on this. It´s a signup killer...

UnseenWorld · 07-10-2002, 08:36 AM

BTW, you wouldn't happen to need any photos for that site, would you?

dgdesigns · 07-10-2002, 08:44 AM

hey bud.

I like the site idea: combination of gallery and tour pages. I think there needs to be more of a tease element. You say what you offer, but you don't tease the surfer.

Every site says 50, 000 images, but it takes a bit more effort to say:

These girls will make your cock dance out of your pants and stiffen up, as you get ready to dip it into their wet hot pussies.

You don't care about the guys dick, but you care about his wallet. The thing is if you get a guys cock, the wallet seems to follow.

Anyways, I am looking to expand my portfolio. So if you are looking for design help, hit me up for a great price.

Thanks,
DG

Living For Today · 07-10-2002, 08:48 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by UnseenWorld
BTW, you wouldn't happen to need any photos for that site, would you?

Possibly. ICQ me 126366401

FireFoz · 07-10-2002, 08:50 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by playa
try to change your join page,,, add more teasing text,,,

this new style of paysite is very good,,

could you please tell me what script you use for that site?

i need something similar to my site

I made it myself, hit me up on icq for more info #6981021

Quote:

Originally posted by JOP
The site is very slow for me. Could be me... but I think

you should check on this. It´s a signup killer...

It loads fine here... how does it load with the rest of you guys?

Quote:

Originally posted by UnseenWorld
BTW, you wouldn't happen to need any photos for that site, would you?

Contact Dave at 126366401, he'll have a chat with ya ;)

Thanks for the feedback guys, i'll use some more dirty words and pics in the tour... anything else?

Tipsy · 07-10-2002, 09:09 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by UnseenWorld

Not every guy wants to see a dick in a photo. Lots of guys, believe it or not, just want to see naked chicks without having to look at some dude at the same time.

Who said anything about a dick? There's not even any pussy shots or hints of a pussy. Just about every guy enjoys seeing a pussy or 3. Then there's lesbian shots, dildo shots etc etc. No need for a dick and I wasn't trying to suggest that.

Tipsy · 07-10-2002, 09:11 AM

Loads fine for me but then I got a good connection when the ISP isn't fucking around.

FireFoz · 07-10-2002, 09:11 AM

there are not a lot of dicks inside...just a couple of hardcore sets, but the main niche is softcore/lesbians/toys and stuff like that. some movies too.

However i think it would be good to add some more pussy and tits and dirty words in the tour

gothweb · 07-10-2002, 09:32 AM

If you are looking for more content for the site, check out my content page in my sig. My stuff is mostly goth, but there is a lot of variety so it may not be what you expect.

meRx · 07-10-2002, 09:53 AM

Some Idiotic Surfers might think you are a secret scam about to charge them $24,095 per sign up due to that nasty comma between 24 and 95
put a period , it might work better

FireFoz · 07-10-2002, 06:30 PM

alright, i re-built the tour

www.teenchase.com/tour.php
and also the sign-up page
www.teenchase.com/join.php

anything else I could improve now? I think im gonna make the text on the main page a bit more explicit, i'll do that tomorrow its 3:30 am now

i was thinking about putting up trials too but i just noticed that globill takes extremely high

"Note: The standard commission rates apply to prices set from $8.95 to $59.99. Webmasters are allowed to set lower prices from $5.95 to $8.94, for a non-standard commission of 60%, between $3.95 to $5.94 for a non-standard commission of 40% and between $1.95-$3.94 for a non-standard commission of 7%."

thats retarded ...
i might make a $8.95 trial though, but its actually too high :/

Hypo · 07-10-2002, 08:10 PM

The older versions had text that was too bland, that was one of the main problems. Otherwise it might have been a beter converting tour than the new one.

The newer version is a little empty. The flashing gif stays invisible too long, maybe change its color instead of having it disappear and appear. Have the text in different colors like red instead of white with black. That long box of text is too big and grouped for anyone to read and the font is boring on that.
Maybe add the thumb tours below the new splash design?

Fletch XXX · 07-10-2002, 08:18 PM

color?

Just the Village Idiot · 07-10-2002, 08:37 PM

Hmmm --

I didn't find a price on the new tour (but it's getting late and I'm drunk

)

There's no want I'd even sign up for a site with no idea what is going to show up on the card.

Paul Markham · 07-10-2002, 11:11 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by UnseenWorld

Not every guy wants to see a dick in a photo. Lots of guys, believe it or not, just want to see naked chicks without having to look at some dude at the same time.

Yes agreed but solo teen girl is done to death on the net, solo teen has to be VERY good to succeed. To succeed today you have to look at the market and go where fewer sites go.

More guys want to see these girls being butt fucked than want to see them solo and fewer sites offer that material. So drawer your own conclusions.

I'm biased because we do shoot <A HREF="http://www.paulmarkham.com/category.php?userlogin=sharepix&userpassword=share pix&set_id=1090&visit=1090" target="_blank">Teen Hardcore.</A>

Good site but watch the girls with too much "professional" make up. It tends to add the years and not a good seller for the teen market.

But it could do with something a bit extra to pull the plastic.

Master_Yoba · 07-12-2002, 11:15 AM

maybe discuss some of my sites too... I think about open a board where we will fucking around new sites design only

mr pink · 07-13-2002, 07:07 AM

It is good to see this style and it works, however it would not sign me up, as I would need a bit more in the offer department. A lot of the other comments are really true "get the surfer really hot". But, really pile on the preview material, get the guy horney and his brain will drop out of gear and the wallet will follow. Would be nice to see video clips as well.

Keep up the good work
Mr Pink

07-10-2002, 07:14 AM	#1
FireFoz Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 480	look at my site and start bitching! www.teenchase.com my first and new pay site converting 1:700 from pretty quality traffic, up for 2 days. i dont think its good enough! I personal think the tour is not good enough... i'll have to redo it or let somebody do it for me. Or should i just get rid of the tour and stick with the clickable "thumbs"? I know the design looks ok, so please dont reply with "it looks good", i want to hear some comments whats not good or how to make it better instead! I cant make it better with "it looks good", so start bitching!

07-10-2002, 07:18 AM	#2
nocostporn Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Maryland Posts: 5,228	hmm I like the idea you're going with... I would suggest making each scene have it's own tour of 3 new pics of that specific girl.. I like the idea though... and you might want to offer a trial signup instead of having "24.95" in big bold letters above the billing options... __________________ CashTheChecks.com -coming soon- "Exclusive sites for Exclusive Webmasters" ICQ-119966868,add me first don't message

07-10-2002, 07:18 AM	#3
Tipsy Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: See sig Posts: 6,989	Put something in the tour that'd make the surfer actually want to join. Use hardcore pics with pixellated/fuzzed/whatever genitals for example. Maybe have just a few clickable thumbs to larger picks. Experiment to see what works for you BUT give the surfer something to make them want to join. A few unerotic clothed and topless shots will not make people flash the plastic. __________________ Ignorance is never bliss.

07-10-2002, 07:19 AM	#4
nocostporn Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Maryland Posts: 5,228	also the splash page looks too galleryish... surfers have seen thousands of galleries and they don't expect much from them... __________________ CashTheChecks.com -coming soon- "Exclusive sites for Exclusive Webmasters" ICQ-119966868,add me first don't message

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Wizzo 2011 GFY Hall of Fame! Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: Back in Texas! Posts: 15,224	I think it just needs a little more spice! DO I get Videos? How many pics? Live Chat? Updates? Those are the type of questions that surfers need answered, however the trick is to anwer those type of questions, while stimulating interest and excitement at the same time. It's kinda like gallery posting you need to make the surfer want to click! __________________ Looking for Opportunity!

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Living For Today Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 3,970	Thanks for the advice guys. Been helpful so far Keep it comin

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BJ Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: asia Posts: 5,590	take the american express logo off the join page. woops, thats glo-bills page... thought amex wasnt allowed for adult sites... news to me Last edited by BJ; 07-10-2002 at 07:33 AM..

07-10-2002, 07:37 AM	#7
TheApostate Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Southern California Posts: 589	the .gifs seem to flash really fast, but that might not necessarily be bad. good work firefoz

07-10-2002, 07:48 AM	#8
FireFoz Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 480	okay, after i've done this banner i'll redo the tour with some more hardcore pics and more flesh And indeed, maybe its not so good to have the price in bold on top of the sign up page :p thanks, keep it coming ppl

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UnseenWorld Confirmed User Join Date: May 2001 Location: Portland, OR, USA Posts: 5,279	I notice you're using GloBill. You got the right billing company, anyway. __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

07-10-2002, 08:16 AM	#12
tayloryum Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Chicago, IL, USA Posts: 423	also, on your first tour page, you spelled "naughty" without the "t".

07-10-2002, 08:30 AM	#13
playa Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: atlanta, GA Posts: 6,432	try to change your join page,,, add more teasing text,,, this new style of paysite is very good,, could you please tell me what script you use for that site? i need something similar to my site

07-10-2002, 08:33 AM	#14
JOP Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Europe Posts: 931	The site is very slow for me. Could be me... but I think you should check on this. It´s a signup killer... __________________ JOP

07-10-2002, 08:36 AM	#15
UnseenWorld Confirmed User Join Date: May 2001 Location: Portland, OR, USA Posts: 5,279	BTW, you wouldn't happen to need any photos for that site, would you? __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

07-10-2002, 08:44 AM	#16
dgdesigns Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 174	hey bud. I like the site idea: combination of gallery and tour pages. I think there needs to be more of a tease element. You say what you offer, but you don't tease the surfer. Every site says 50, 000 images, but it takes a bit more effort to say: These girls will make your cock dance out of your pants and stiffen up, as you get ready to dip it into their wet hot pussies. You don't care about the guys dick, but you care about his wallet. The thing is if you get a guys cock, the wallet seems to follow. Anyways, I am looking to expand my portfolio. So if you are looking for design help, hit me up for a great price. Thanks, DG

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Tipsy Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: See sig Posts: 6,989	Loads fine for me but then I got a good connection when the ISP isn't fucking around. __________________ Ignorance is never bliss.

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07-10-2002, 06:30 PM	#24
FireFoz Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 480	alright, i re-built the tour www.teenchase.com/tour.php and also the sign-up page www.teenchase.com/join.php anything else I could improve now? I think im gonna make the text on the main page a bit more explicit, i'll do that tomorrow its 3:30 am now i was thinking about putting up trials too but i just noticed that globill takes extremely high "Note: The standard commission rates apply to prices set from $8.95 to $59.99. Webmasters are allowed to set lower prices from $5.95 to $8.94, for a non-standard commission of 60%, between $3.95 to $5.94 for a non-standard commission of 40% and between $1.95-$3.94 for a non-standard commission of 7%." thats retarded ... i might make a $8.95 trial though, but its actually too high :/

07-10-2002, 08:10 PM	#25
Hypo So Fucking Banned Join Date: Feb 2001 Posts: 1,104	The older versions had text that was too bland, that was one of the main problems. Otherwise it might have been a beter converting tour than the new one. The newer version is a little empty. The flashing gif stays invisible too long, maybe change its color instead of having it disappear and appear. Have the text in different colors like red instead of white with black. That long box of text is too big and grouped for anyone to read and the font is boring on that. Maybe add the thumb tours below the new splash design?

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Just the Village Idiot Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Earth Posts: 581	Hmmm -- I didn't find a price on the new tour (but it's getting late and I'm drunk ) There's no want I'd even sign up for a site with no idea what is going to show up on the card.

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07-13-2002, 07:07 AM	#30
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