Gallery Critique - GoFuckYourself.com

jMEGA · 11-18-2005, 01:32 AM

I made my first gallery in Photoshop. I would like to get some options on it. The good, bad and ugly.

http://www.barelysafeforwork.com/hg/sng/redtop/

Thanks peeps!

ffmihai · 11-18-2005, 01:46 AM

looks fine....its pretty simple.. i like it

phogirl69 · 11-18-2005, 01:47 AM

edited edited oops

LiveDose · 11-18-2005, 01:55 AM

Nice & clean now turn it into a sales page,,,

Mefo · 11-18-2005, 01:59 AM

you have to many outside links

I also wouldn't make the girl clickable but just add some more text links

marttali · 11-18-2005, 01:59 AM

at least make that "click here ... " stand out more or are you trying just to give out more free porn ?

$5 submissions · 11-18-2005, 02:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jMEGA

I made my first gallery in Photoshop. I would like to get some options on it. The good, bad and ugly.

http://www.barelysafeforwork.com/hg/sng/redtop/

Thanks peeps!

Looks good but you need to CONNECT the viewer of this gallery to the WEBSITE YOU ARE PUSHING. Good galleries act as "sample tastes" of what the site has. Also, content selection is key, if you're pushing a site that focuses on NICHE A, then have pics that show NICHE A material. Also, build up the NICHE PAIRING dynamic I mentioned above by putting in a mini bio or some text that DEMONSTRATES your knowledge of the particular niche. There should be some keywords in your text that tips off the consumer re a) how to react b) you know the niche you are pushing c) the niche material is in the site you're pushing.

Best of luck and keep experimenting, finetuning, and elevating your game!

Ace_luffy · 11-18-2005, 03:47 AM

nice one... ;)

Broda · 11-18-2005, 05:21 AM

Bad composition. Too few pictures to get listed anywhere - since you're asking advice I assume you have zero partner accounts and as such don't waste your time submitting galleries with merely 14 pics. Use 15 at least - 16 is probably better.
NO blindlinking at all; never link a picture to the sponsor like you do here with the big background pic. Never.
Use only 2 outside links excluding recips, MAX, + 1 optional 2257 link; in that case, use max 3 recips where none of them have double-links in them.

The girl is sellable but why are you focussing on having all the clickable sales texts on top? They scroll out of the viewing area real quick and are not positioned where you'd assume the surfer puts his mousecursor.

Good luck

Violetta · 11-18-2005, 05:34 AM

looks good!

jMEGA · 11-19-2005, 08:36 PM

Thanks for the comments and suggestions

mailman · 11-19-2005, 08:37 PM

you're about 6 pics short of a gallery.

Sebastian Sands · 11-19-2005, 10:44 PM

center the puppy

11-18-2005, 01:32 AM	#1
jMEGA Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: St. Louis, MO Posts: 671	Gallery Critique I made my first gallery in Photoshop. I would like to get some options on it. The good, bad and ugly. http://www.barelysafeforwork.com/hg/sng/redtop/ Thanks peeps!

11-18-2005, 01:46 AM	#2
ffmihai keep walking... Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 7,177	looks fine....its pretty simple.. i like it __________________

11-18-2005, 01:55 AM	#4
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11-18-2005, 01:59 AM	#5
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11-18-2005, 03:47 AM	#8
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11-18-2005, 01:47 AM	#3
phogirl69 Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 3,330	edited edited oops

11-18-2005, 01:59 AM	#6
marttali Confirmed User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 265	at least make that "click here ... " stand out more or are you trying just to give out more free porn ?

11-18-2005, 05:21 AM	#9
Broda Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: CheapAssDesigns.com Posts: 1,874	Bad composition. Too few pictures to get listed anywhere - since you're asking advice I assume you have zero partner accounts and as such don't waste your time submitting galleries with merely 14 pics. Use 15 at least - 16 is probably better. NO blindlinking at all; never link a picture to the sponsor like you do here with the big background pic. Never. Use only 2 outside links excluding recips, MAX, + 1 optional 2257 link; in that case, use max 3 recips where none of them have double-links in them. The girl is sellable but why are you focussing on having all the clickable sales texts on top? They scroll out of the viewing area real quick and are not positioned where you'd assume the surfer puts his mousecursor. Good luck __________________ CheapAssDesigns.com - when you need quality designs at affordable prices. icq: 230-729-205 info \|at\| cheap ass designs dot com

11-18-2005, 05:34 AM	#10
Violetta Affiliate Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 28,735	looks good! __________________ M&A Queen

11-19-2005, 08:36 PM	#11
jMEGA Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: St. Louis, MO Posts: 671	Thanks for the comments and suggestions

11-19-2005, 08:37 PM	#12
mailman Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 6,311	you're about 6 pics short of a gallery.

11-19-2005, 10:44 PM	#13
Sebastian Sands Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: ICQ: 211-417-740 Posts: 5,223	center the puppy