Bad composition. Too few pictures to get listed anywhere - since you're asking advice I assume you have zero partner accounts and as such don't waste your time submitting galleries with merely 14 pics. Use 15 at least - 16 is probably better.
NO blindlinking at all; never link a picture to the sponsor like you do here with the big background pic. Never.
Use only 2 outside links excluding recips, MAX, + 1 optional 2257 link; in that case, use max 3 recips where none of them have double-links in them.
The girl is sellable but why are you focussing on having all the clickable sales texts on top? They scroll out of the viewing area real quick and are not positioned where you'd assume the surfer puts his mousecursor.
Good luck
