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02-14-2005, 02:44 PM
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Hello all, can I get some feedback on this trailer for ghettohoochies.com?
My initial plan was to give it a soft beginning with a strong ending leaving the viewer wanting to see more. I wanted to play more with the outside scene at the beginning but the hissing from the wind was to much so I substituted sound with text and non-audio video. I brought the sound of the original video back towards the end to lustfully play with the viewers lustful being then a solid STOP in action... In turn, making him wanting to see more...
Now, before anything. This trailer is "unofficial. Its not approved by the guys that run the site. I haven't shown em the trailer yet. I'll like to get feedback cuz I talked to them about some editing work... The Trailer: www.chicagofreaks.com/ghettohoochies.wmv |
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02-14-2005, 03:02 PM
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I like it ;)
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02-14-2005, 03:03 PM
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Triple OG nigga on GFY
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ghetto is my middle name
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02-14-2005, 03:15 PM
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haha i like it!
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02-14-2005, 03:20 PM
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Awesome
Good work - effects, transitions, music, etc... Looks Great!
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02-14-2005, 03:23 PM
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nice trailer
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02-14-2005, 04:04 PM
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not bad...
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02-14-2005, 05:36 PM
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Thnx all for their feedback...
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02-14-2005, 06:01 PM
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wow nice job Deak!!
but um ya know i like the ones u star in better :D |
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02-14-2005, 06:25 PM
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looking good man, nice work!
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02-14-2005, 06:25 PM
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Looks good!
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02-14-2005, 08:11 PM
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Thnx all for feedback & compliments. I'm thankful...
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02-14-2005, 08:55 PM
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Looks HOT
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02-14-2005, 09:23 PM
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well, it's good, better than most.
but always remember the CONTENT of the trailer is king, not the visual gimmicks. and you have a great story line, and some great little bits of interesting footage. if you have to stay under 60 secs i think you are better off putting your logo on every frame (emboss lower right corner, rather that show a still frame leader front and back)---because you want to fill the time with hot content---if the content impresses they will come to the site---and if it does not they won't---and if the trailer is really hot, let people hotlink it like crazy (as long as your URL is on every frame) just 2 secs of very hot image is better than a dissolve, fade, etc. for conversion purposes---that's what stays in the surfer's mind as he navigates towards your join page. |
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02-14-2005, 09:26 PM
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I can change this!!!!!
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looks good to me dude
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02-14-2005, 09:29 PM
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Looked pretty good to me.
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02-14-2005, 09:35 PM
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I need a beer
 
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Works for me..I'm liking it
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02-14-2005, 10:24 PM
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Geat clip man.
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02-14-2005, 10:29 PM
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holla
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02-14-2005, 10:43 PM
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that ttboy?
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02-15-2005, 09:05 PM
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Yup, that's TT. That is my http://www.ghettohoochies.com Great work Deak!! Makes my trailers look like currrrap~! |
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02-15-2005, 09:08 PM
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Love it!
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02-15-2005, 09:22 PM
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Thnx everyone for their feedback/compliments @latinasojourn, I VERY well understand what you saying. Thats actually part of the plan.This is a rough draft. Gonna do a few more small tweaks and its a wrap for this... Thnx for the feed everyone!  |
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