Hello all, can I get some feedback on this trailer for ghettohoochies.com?
 

My initial plan was to give it a soft beginning with a strong ending leaving the viewer wanting to see more. I wanted to play more with the outside scene at the beginning but the hissing from the wind was to much so I substituted sound with text and non-audio video. I brought the sound of the original video back towards the end to lustfully play with the viewers lustful being then a solid STOP in action... In turn, making him wanting to see more...
Now, before anything. This trailer is "unofficial. Its not approved by the guys that run the site. I haven't shown em the trailer yet. I'll like to get feedback cuz I talked to them about some editing work...

The Trailer:
www.chicagofreaks.com/ghettohoochies.wmv

I like it ;)

ghetto is my middle name

haha i like it!

Awesome
 

Good work - effects, transitions, music, etc... Looks Great!

nice trailer :thumbsup

not bad... :thumbsup

Thnx all for their feedback... :winkwink:

wow nice job Deak!! :thumbsup

but um ya know i like the ones u star in better :D

looking good man, nice work!

Looks good! :thumbsup

Thnx all for feedback & compliments. I'm thankful... :pimp

Looks HOT

well, it's good, better than most.

but always remember the CONTENT of the trailer is king, not the visual gimmicks.

and you have a great story line, and some great little bits of interesting footage.

if you have to stay under 60 secs i think you are better off putting your logo on every frame (emboss lower right corner, rather that show a still frame leader front and back)---because you want to fill the time with hot content---if the content impresses they will come to the site---and if it does not they won't---and if the trailer is really hot, let people hotlink it like crazy (as long as your URL is on every frame)

just 2 secs of very hot image is better than a dissolve, fade, etc. for conversion purposes---that's what stays in the surfer's mind as he navigates towards your join page.

looks good to me dude

Looked pretty good to me.

Works for me..I'm liking it

Geat clip man.

that girl is fucking sexy as hell!

does master p care that you janked his shit?

that ttboy?

duke

Yup, that's TT. That is my http://www.ghettohoochies.com

Great work Deak!! Makes my trailers look like currrrap~! :thumbsup

Love it!

Thnx a milly Ganja... I'm gonna shoot you #2 either Wednesday or Thursday. :thumbsup

Thnx everyone for their feedback/compliments


@latinasojourn, I VERY well understand what you saying. Thats actually part of the plan.This is a rough draft. Gonna do a few more small tweaks and its a wrap for this... Thnx for the feed everyone! :)