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well, it's good, better than most.
but always remember the CONTENT of the trailer is king, not the visual gimmicks.
and you have a great story line, and some great little bits of interesting footage.
if you have to stay under 60 secs i think you are better off putting your logo on every frame (emboss lower right corner, rather that show a still frame leader front and back)---because you want to fill the time with hot content---if the content impresses they will come to the site---and if it does not they won't---and if the trailer is really hot, let people hotlink it like crazy (as long as your URL is on every frame)
just 2 secs of very hot image is better than a dissolve, fade, etc. for conversion purposes---that's what stays in the surfer's mind as he navigates towards your join page.
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