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TaDoW · 12-05-2004, 06:09 PM

http://www.dormangels.com/devel/brand_spankin_new/

Why didn't this tour work???

tear that fuckin thing apart, i want to know why that tour didn't work but all my other ones DO :-P

Libertine · 12-05-2004, 06:13 PM

The layout at the top draws attention away from the girls and to messy text that just screams "Ad!". I would have closed this before I had even thought about what it actually was if it came up on my screen while I was surfing porn.

Babagirls · 12-05-2004, 06:15 PM

the yellow background & red text.

then the white text on light pink and then the pink on a yellow background.

soooo...i'd say the colors. and they're too hard on the eyes.

TaDoW · 12-05-2004, 06:15 PM

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Originally posted by punkworld
The layout at the top draws attention away from the girls and to messy text that just screams "Ad!". I would have closed this before I had even thought about what it actually was if it came up on my screen while I was surfing porn.

okay ... then why do these tours:

www.midwestmandy.com/mm_tour.php?c=1
www.redhotlauren.com/rl_tour.php?c=1

convert at under 1:300 off of tgp traffic?

TaDoW · 12-05-2004, 06:17 PM

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Originally posted by Babagirls
the yellow background & red text.

then the white text on light pink and then the pink on a yellow background.

soooo...i'd say the colors. and they're too hard on the eyes.

definitely a possibility ... haven't considered that until now - although our old old old tours used to have similar color clashes without too many problems...

Babagirls · 12-05-2004, 06:17 PM

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Originally posted by TaDoW
okay ... then why do these tours:

www.midwestmandy.com/mm_tour.php?c=1
www.redhotlauren.com/rl_tour.php?c=1

convert at under 1:300 off of tgp traffic?

because THOSE color schemes WORK!

TaDoW · 12-05-2004, 06:19 PM

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Originally posted by Babagirls
because THOSE color schemes WORK!

gotcha

can you make any recommendations for what to change the Dormangels color scheme to? I remember making an alternate with a pink backgrond rather than yellow ... or do you think i should even waste my time trying that one out?

MikeVega · 12-05-2004, 06:25 PM

i don't like the colors .... and i hate the green text and the plain fonts .... but i don't design sites ..... so pay more attention to the designers ....

Babagirls · 12-05-2004, 06:25 PM

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Originally posted by TaDoW
gotcha

can you make any recommendations for what to change the Dormangels color scheme to? I remember making an alternate with a pink backgrond rather than yellow ... or do you think i should even waste my time trying that one out?

something like this...

TaDoW · 12-05-2004, 06:29 PM

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Originally posted by Babagirls
something like this...

nice =) i'll mess around with the colors bit and try making one closer to that scheme

Libertine · 12-05-2004, 06:35 PM

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Originally posted by TaDoW
okay ... then why do these tours:

www.midwestmandy.com/mm_tour.php?c=1
www.redhotlauren.com/rl_tour.php?c=1

convert at under 1:300 off of tgp traffic?

Those draw attention to the girls first, and only after that do you realize that it's an ad.

Pete · 12-05-2004, 06:41 PM

I can honestly say that tour looks great and I would think it would convert well. I would question the traffic you send it.

TaDoW · 12-05-2004, 06:44 PM

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Originally posted by Pete
I can honestly say that tour looks great and I would think it would convert well. I would question the traffic you send it.

heh - that's what we thought too :-/ maybe it was just a bum few days ... might be worth trying it again

ztik · 12-05-2004, 07:00 PM

I tried to click on the pics to view the girls bio's. It took me a join page.

I clicked on preview, it took me a join page.

That white text on the top does not catch my eye. Inface, it was hard to pay attention to it.

ztik · 12-05-2004, 07:01 PM

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Originally posted by Pete
I can honestly say that tour looks great and I would think it would convert well. I would question the traffic you send it.

It may "look" great but that generally has little to nothing to do with adult conversions

Its the functionality and the content

QualityMpegs · 12-05-2004, 08:12 PM

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Originally posted by ztik
I tried to click on the pics to view the girls bio's. It took me a join page.

I clicked on preview, it took me a join page.

That white text on the top does not catch my eye. Inface, it was hard to pay attention to it.

ditto on everything he said...plus the yellow kinda hurts

TaDoW · 12-05-2004, 08:24 PM

excellent, keep it coming =)

forward · 12-05-2004, 08:39 PM

when did you guys start converting?

kowntafit · 12-05-2004, 11:08 PM

The color scheme definately doesn't do it for me, it stands out heaps but if that is what you want that may be okay. The layout looks okay.

iwantchixx · 12-05-2004, 11:09 PM

lose the bottom half your header. most people wouldn't go much past that as it takes up most of the screen

TaDoW · 12-06-2004, 11:11 AM

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Originally posted by forward
when did you guys start converting?

hey fuckstick, why don't you quit being a PUSSY and start posting under your real account?

Penrod · 12-06-2004, 11:15 AM

Your 2257 link is linked with http://www.dormangels.com/devel/brand_spankin_new/

just my

DesignWise · 12-06-2004, 11:25 AM

rounded corner is like drawn with a pencil tool (photoshop), the color combination is okay, nice layout... logo is i guess needs to be emphasized .. last thing.. the slogan saying "real college girls caught on" i think is misplaced since its a slogan i think it should be complete...

over all nice color and great layout...

TaDoW · 12-06-2004, 12:07 PM

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Originally posted by Penrod
Your 2257 link is linked with http://www.dormangels.com/devel/brand_spankin_new/

just my

hehe ... it's actually just linked to "#" ... but should spawn a new window it would work if it were located at /

12-05-2004, 06:09 PM	#1
TaDoW Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: Where It Rains Posts: 3,875	Okay Smartass, Let's See What you Got! http://www.dormangels.com/devel/brand_spankin_new/ Why didn't this tour work??? tear that fuckin thing apart, i want to know why that tour didn't work but all my other ones DO :-P __________________ -TaDoW I've Upped My Standards, Up Yours!

12-05-2004, 06:13 PM	#2
Libertine sex dwarf Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 17,860	The layout at the top draws attention away from the girls and to messy text that just screams "Ad!". I would have closed this before I had even thought about what it actually was if it came up on my screen while I was surfing porn. __________________ /(bb\|[^b]{2})/

12-05-2004, 06:15 PM	#3
Babagirls Text Writer Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 18,812	the yellow background & red text. then the white text on light pink and then the pink on a yellow background. soooo...i'd say the colors. and they're too hard on the eyes. __________________ Need a Text Writer? Blogs\|Reviews\|Descriptions\|Paysites\|TGP's\|Stories ICQ: 397892500

12-05-2004, 06:25 PM	#8
MikeVega Porntrepreneur Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: New York Posts: 12,788	i don't like the colors .... and i hate the green text and the plain fonts .... but i don't design sites ..... so pay more attention to the designers .... __________________ Mike Vega-ICQ:253868499-AIM:mikeydicevega

12-05-2004, 06:41 PM	#12
Pete Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Mr. Rogers Neighborhood Posts: 6,617	I can honestly say that tour looks great and I would think it would convert well. I would question the traffic you send it. __________________ Evoke Electronics

12-05-2004, 07:00 PM	#14
ztik Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: Nomad Posts: 5,196	I tried to click on the pics to view the girls bio's. It took me a join page. I clicked on preview, it took me a join page. That white text on the top does not catch my eye. Inface, it was hard to pay attention to it.

12-05-2004, 08:24 PM	#17
TaDoW Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: Where It Rains Posts: 3,875	excellent, keep it coming =) __________________ -TaDoW I've Upped My Standards, Up Yours!

12-05-2004, 08:39 PM	#18
forward Registered User Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: seattle, wa Posts: 74	when did you guys start converting?

12-05-2004, 11:08 PM	#19
kowntafit Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Australia Posts: 4,667	The color scheme definately doesn't do it for me, it stands out heaps but if that is what you want that may be okay. The layout looks okay. __________________ This is where my next million is coming from!

12-05-2004, 11:09 PM	#20
iwantchixx Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: The Boonies Posts: 12,860	lose the bottom half your header. most people wouldn't go much past that as it takes up most of the screen

12-06-2004, 11:15 AM	#22
Penrod Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 3,579	Your 2257 link is linked with http://www.dormangels.com/devel/brand_spankin_new/ just my

12-06-2004, 11:25 AM	#23
DesignWise Confirmed User Join Date: May 2004 Location: Center of the Sun Posts: 3,575	rounded corner is like drawn with a pencil tool (photoshop), the color combination is okay, nice layout... logo is i guess needs to be emphasized .. last thing.. the slogan saying "real college girls caught on" i think is misplaced since its a slogan i think it should be complete... over all nice color and great layout... __________________ www.highendcreatives.com Galleries that sells.. . ICQ: 294696371