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Okay Smartass, Let's See What you Got!
http://www.dormangels.com/devel/brand_spankin_new/
Why didn't this tour work??? tear that fuckin thing apart, i want to know why that tour didn't work but all my other ones DO :-P |
The layout at the top draws attention away from the girls and to messy text that just screams "Ad!". I would have closed this before I had even thought about what it actually was if it came up on my screen while I was surfing porn.
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the yellow background & red text.
then the white text on light pink and then the pink on a yellow background. soooo...i'd say the colors. and they're too hard on the eyes. |
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www.midwestmandy.com/mm_tour.php?c=1 www.redhotlauren.com/rl_tour.php?c=1 convert at under 1:300 off of tgp traffic? |
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can you make any recommendations for what to change the Dormangels color scheme to? I remember making an alternate with a pink backgrond rather than yellow ... or do you think i should even waste my time trying that one out? |
i don't like the colors .... and i hate the green text and the plain fonts .... but i don't design sites ..... so pay more attention to the designers .... :2 cents:
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something like this... http://www.babagirl.com/sample.jpg |
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I can honestly say that tour looks great and I would think it would convert well. I would question the traffic you send it. :2 cents:
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I tried to click on the pics to view the girls bio's. It took me a join page.
I clicked on preview, it took me a join page. That white text on the top does not catch my eye. Inface, it was hard to pay attention to it. :2 cents: |
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Its the functionality and the content |
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excellent, keep it coming =)
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when did you guys start converting?
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The color scheme definately doesn't do it for me, it stands out heaps but if that is what you want that may be okay. The layout looks okay.
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lose the bottom half your header. most people wouldn't go much past that as it takes up most of the screen
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rounded corner is like drawn with a pencil tool (photoshop), the color combination is okay, nice layout... logo is i guess needs to be emphasized .. last thing.. the slogan saying "real college girls caught on" i think is misplaced since its a slogan i think it should be complete...
over all nice color and great layout... :thumbsup |
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