I Need Some Feedback on my newest Mainstream Site. - GoFuckYourself.com

Rob · 08-20-2004, 07:57 AM

I'm just about finished with it and would like some of my friends on GFY to give me some feedback on it. It's not one of my adult sites but eventually it will allow me to get out of the adult industry and into mainstream.

24hourprinter.com

Any ideas, suggestions, criticism would be greatly appreciated.

Doctor Dre · 08-20-2004, 08:09 AM

Looks way better then acid does

chodadog · 08-20-2004, 08:14 AM

In the header, i think you should move the logo to the extreme left and use the remaining space for a banner for specials (like the 250 free business cards banner on the right, sort of thing). I think that would look better.

The top bit just looks too empty at the moment.

McKracken · 08-20-2004, 08:15 AM

mate as always you rock

my opinion:
http://www.24hourprinter.com/site/products.html

keep the jump down menu box but ad some kind or "thumb" for different kind of products and perhaps special deals...will also make the surfer be more open to impulse buys like... hmmm i can see he is having a 20% off on biz cards perhaps i should order them together with my flyers...

will also give more life to the site instead of the white area.

^^ Brilliant!

McKracken · 08-20-2004, 08:19 AM

also
http://www.24hourprinter.com/site/de...6c88 7dc79e4a

needs somekind of kickas graphic like a toon or something...

Rob · 08-20-2004, 08:28 AM

Thanks for the comments so far guys! It really helps to have fellow webmasters critique your work.

I still have to plug in a lot of graphics especially on the products pages. I'm also going to mess around with the header, it's off to me for some reason. Maybe it's all the blank space that was pointed out.

McKracken · 08-20-2004, 10:52 AM

yeah but it looks promising!

08-20-2004, 07:57 AM	#1
Rob I'm a great bowler. Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Right Outside of Normal. Posts: 13,309	I Need Some Feedback on my newest Mainstream Site. I'm just about finished with it and would like some of my friends on GFY to give me some feedback on it. It's not one of my adult sites but eventually it will allow me to get out of the adult industry and into mainstream. 24hourprinter.com Any ideas, suggestions, criticism would be greatly appreciated. __________________

08-20-2004, 08:14 AM	#3
chodadog Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 9,736	In the header, i think you should move the logo to the extreme left and use the remaining space for a banner for specials (like the 250 free business cards banner on the right, sort of thing). I think that would look better. The top bit just looks too empty at the moment. __________________ 26 + 6 = 1

08-20-2004, 08:15 AM	#4
McKracken Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Drunkville Posts: 703	mate as always you rock my opinion: http://www.24hourprinter.com/site/products.html keep the jump down menu box but ad some kind or "thumb" for different kind of products and perhaps special deals...will also make the surfer be more open to impulse buys like... hmmm i can see he is having a 20% off on biz cards perhaps i should order them together with my flyers... will also give more life to the site instead of the white area. ^^ Brilliant! __________________ MAKE BIG $$$ - NEW MANINSTREAM SITE BETA LAUNCHES SEPTEMBER! * e-mail for more info [email protected] * Last edited by McKracken; 08-20-2004 at 08:18 AM..

08-20-2004, 08:28 AM	#6
Rob I'm a great bowler. Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Right Outside of Normal. Posts: 13,309	Thanks for the comments so far guys! It really helps to have fellow webmasters critique your work. I still have to plug in a lot of graphics especially on the products pages. I'm also going to mess around with the header, it's off to me for some reason. Maybe it's all the blank space that was pointed out. __________________

08-20-2004, 10:52 AM	#7
McKracken Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Drunkville Posts: 703	yeah but it looks promising! __________________ MAKE BIG $$$ - NEW MANINSTREAM SITE BETA LAUNCHES SEPTEMBER! * e-mail for more info [email protected] *

08-20-2004, 08:19 AM	#5
McKracken Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Drunkville Posts: 703	also http://www.24hourprinter.com/site/de...6c88 7dc79e4a needs somekind of kickas graphic like a toon or something...