Another tour page critique for ArikaAmes.com. - GoFuckYourself.com

newbreed · 05-08-2004, 04:38 PM

So we took all of your suggestions in mind and changed some stuff up on the scrolling style tour page for Arika's site. Akthough we are not completely done, we would like some more of your input to judge if we are on the right track. Since this is very personal to us, it is hard sometimes to put ourselves in the mind of the surfer (modesty is a bitch), so we welcome and respect all the constructive critisism we recieve from you guys/gals!

Newer concept...
http://www.arikaames.com/tour2.html

compared to the one we were working on a few days ago...
http://www.arikaames.com/tour1.html

No opto yet, and the text needs a lot of work. Basically we are looking for layout cues here.

Thanks again everyone!

Bill and Arika

PS - We'll be in and out all night, so we'll check in as much as possible!

gwilkins · 05-08-2004, 05:38 PM

It's very slow loading and some of the slices (50%) time out for me.

freeadultcontent · 05-08-2004, 06:03 PM

Your camcorders are a little transparent.
The webcam in blur mode looks alot off.
The flowers look out of place to me.
To much variety of color in the various text fonts.

newbreed · 05-08-2004, 07:28 PM

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Originally posted by gwilkins
It's very slow loading and some of the slices (50%) time out for me.

Hmmmm, that's odd, everything looks fine here and at the office.

newbreed · 05-08-2004, 07:35 PM

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Originally posted by freeadultcontent
Your camcorders are a little transparent.

They are there only as a place holder to fill up the page, currently @ 60% opacity. As soon as I figure out what to put there or if we're going to keep the media players in those position I wanted to fill up the dead space.

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Originally posted by freeadultcontent
The webcam in blur mode looks alot off.

What's "blur" mode?

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Originally posted by freeadultcontent
The flowers look out of place to me.

Yeah, I think I need a lot more or a lot less. I really wanted to incorporate some little floweres into the theme of the site, but maybe I'll try some stars or something instead.

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Originally posted by freeadultcontent
To much variety of color in the various text fonts.

Which fonts? there are only 4 colors used i think. Red, black, white, and that pinkinsh purple down at the bottom.

Thanks again,
Us

fiftyfingers · 05-08-2004, 08:00 PM

loads fast for me

EviLGuY · 05-08-2004, 09:20 PM

I like the new version better.

Illicit · 05-08-2004, 09:23 PM

loads plenty fast for me... looks great too

05-08-2004, 04:38 PM	#1
newbreed Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: ThatOneProgram.com Posts: 9,898	Another tour page critique for ArikaAmes.com. So we took all of your suggestions in mind and changed some stuff up on the scrolling style tour page for Arika's site. Akthough we are not completely done, we would like some more of your input to judge if we are on the right track. Since this is very personal to us, it is hard sometimes to put ourselves in the mind of the surfer (modesty is a bitch), so we welcome and respect all the constructive critisism we recieve from you guys/gals! Newer concept... http://www.arikaames.com/tour2.html compared to the one we were working on a few days ago... http://www.arikaames.com/tour1.html No opto yet, and the text needs a lot of work. Basically we are looking for layout cues here. Thanks again everyone! Bill and Arika PS - We'll be in and out all night, so we'll check in as much as possible! __________________ Want to promote SUCCUBUS? Click HERE!!!! \| Want to buy SUCCUBUS? Click HERE!!!! Yeah, yeah, you know, That One Program! \| Want to trade links with StompBunny.com? Loryn ‎(3:16 PM): I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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05-08-2004, 08:00 PM	#6
fiftyfingers Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 582	loads fast for me __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60. Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

05-08-2004, 09:23 PM	#8
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05-08-2004, 05:38 PM	#2
gwilkins Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 744	It's very slow loading and some of the slices (50%) time out for me.

05-08-2004, 09:20 PM	#7
EviLGuY So Fucking Banned Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: malta Posts: 12,745	I like the new version better.