Another tour page critique for ArikaAmes.com.

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  • newbreed
    Confirmed User
    • Nov 2003
    • 9898
    #1

    Another tour page critique for ArikaAmes.com.

    So we took all of your suggestions in mind and changed some stuff up on the scrolling style tour page for Arika's site. Akthough we are not completely done, we would like some more of your input to judge if we are on the right track. Since this is very personal to us, it is hard sometimes to put ourselves in the mind of the surfer (modesty is a bitch), so we welcome and respect all the constructive critisism we recieve from you guys/gals!

    Newer concept...
    http://www.arikaames.com/tour2.html

    compared to the one we were working on a few days ago...
    http://www.arikaames.com/tour1.html

    No opto yet, and the text needs a lot of work. Basically we are looking for layout cues here.

    Thanks again everyone!

    Bill and Arika

    PS - We'll be in and out all night, so we'll check in as much as possible!

    Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
    I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
    fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before
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    • gwilkins
      Confirmed User
      • Feb 2004
      • 744
      #2
      It's very slow loading and some of the slices (50%) time out for me.

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        • freeadultcontent
          Confirmed User
          • Oct 2002
          • 9976
          #3
          Your camcorders are a little transparent.
          The webcam in blur mode looks alot off.
          The flowers look out of place to me.
          To much variety of color in the various text fonts.

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            • newbreed
              Confirmed User
              • Nov 2003
              • 9898
              #4
              Originally posted by gwilkins
              It's very slow loading and some of the slices (50%) time out for me.
              Hmmmm, that's odd, everything looks fine here and at the office.

              Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
              I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
              fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                • newbreed
                  Confirmed User
                  • Nov 2003
                  • 9898
                  #5
                  Originally posted by freeadultcontent
                  Your camcorders are a little transparent.
                  They are there only as a place holder to fill up the page, currently @ 60% opacity. As soon as I figure out what to put there or if we're going to keep the media players in those position I wanted to fill up the dead space.

                  Originally posted by freeadultcontent
                  The webcam in blur mode looks alot off.
                  What's "blur" mode?

                  Originally posted by freeadultcontent
                  The flowers look out of place to me.
                  Yeah, I think I need a lot more or a lot less. I really wanted to incorporate some little floweres into the theme of the site, but maybe I'll try some stars or something instead.

                  Originally posted by freeadultcontent
                  To much variety of color in the various text fonts.
                  Which fonts? there are only 4 colors used i think. Red, black, white, and that pinkinsh purple down at the bottom.

                  Thanks again,
                  Us

                  Loryn ‎(3:16 PM):
                  I love it, just as long as we keep the bedroom door closed from all ears then we can have throw down hard core sex that makes us money haha
                  fuck it we can have sex on money never did that before

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                    • fiftyfingers
                      Confirmed User
                      • Apr 2004
                      • 582
                      #6
                      loads fast for me
                      SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60. Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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                        • EviLGuY
                          So Fucking Banned
                          • Apr 2003
                          • 12745
                          #7
                          I like the new version better.

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                            • Illicit
                              wtf ?
                              • Dec 2003
                              • 11895
                              #8
                              loads plenty fast for me... looks great too
                              Insert Sig Here

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