Another tour page critique for ArikaAmes.com.
 

So we took all of your suggestions in mind and changed some stuff up on the scrolling style tour page for Arika's site. Akthough we are not completely done, we would like some more of your input to judge if we are on the right track. Since this is very personal to us, it is hard sometimes to put ourselves in the mind of the surfer (modesty is a bitch), so we welcome and respect all the constructive critisism we recieve from you guys/gals!

Newer concept...
http://www.arikaames.com/tour2.html

compared to the one we were working on a few days ago...
http://www.arikaames.com/tour1.html

No opto yet, and the text needs a lot of work. Basically we are looking for layout cues here.

Thanks again everyone!

Bill and Arika

PS - We'll be in and out all night, so we'll check in as much as possible! :)

It's very slow loading and some of the slices (50%) time out for me. :(

Your camcorders are a little transparent.
The webcam in blur mode looks alot off.
The flowers look out of place to me.
To much variety of color in the various text fonts.

Hmmmm, that's odd, everything looks fine here and at the office.

They are there only as a place holder to fill up the page, currently @ 60% opacity. As soon as I figure out what to put there or if we're going to keep the media players in those position I wanted to fill up the dead space.

What's "blur" mode?

Yeah, I think I need a lot more or a lot less. I really wanted to incorporate some little floweres into the theme of the site, but maybe I'll try some stars or something instead.

Which fonts? there are only 4 colors used i think. Red, black, white, and that pinkinsh purple down at the bottom.

Thanks again,
Us

loads fast for me

I like the new version better. :2 cents:

loads plenty fast for me... looks great too :thumbsup