Anybody wanna critique my web page? - GoFuckYourself.com

madstories · 01-14-2004, 08:40 PM

http://www.apornhost.com/pornopro/index.htm

Hi there, this is my first gallery for TGP. I really want some
feedback. Be as mean as you want I don't care, just let me know where I can make improvements.

Thanks!

GonePhishing · 01-14-2004, 09:25 PM

Looks good so far.

LittleMack · 01-14-2004, 09:33 PM

Looks good, I would bring the pic count up to 10...some of the tgp's have a 10 pic min. to accept. Layout is good. Otherwise

mastamindz · 01-14-2004, 09:36 PM

Its to big. Some people still use 800 x 600 resolutions.

Spunky · 01-14-2004, 09:38 PM

Sorry but I would reject that and probably ban you if you submitted that.I don't like scrolling to the right and I hate free host banners both up top and the bottom. Also if you were submitting, that probably would be rejected due to the excessive links

Ash@phpFX · 01-14-2004, 09:46 PM

too many links out

madstories · 01-15-2004, 12:51 PM

Hi, all of your advice was helpful, so thank you so much.

Can someone tell me the maximum links out one should use?

thanks

Mateo1721 · 01-15-2004, 12:54 PM

I don't like the color in the font, very distracting. Is it a gradient or something, or are my eyes decieving me.

madstories · 01-15-2004, 01:18 PM

What is the maximum amount of inks out I should use?

Vitasoy · 01-15-2004, 01:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by madstories
What is the maximum amount of inks out I should use?

2-3 is generally what the tgps list (that's only if you plan to submit to them)

Sp1nal · 01-15-2004, 02:05 PM

3 links is enough and you better buy hosting.

msboyfetish · 01-15-2004, 02:09 PM

check your tags, if your gonna create any page you mine as well make it search engine 'friendly'

madstories · 01-15-2004, 03:19 PM

http://www.apornhost.com/pornopro/index2.htm

K, this is a newer one,

hmmmm... tags eh.. didn't tackle that subject yet!

Does anybody know of a website or semething that I can learn
how to do this??

I made the website smaller so people with small monitors don't have to scroll right, but is there a way to make it centered on the screen regardless of the size of the viewers monitor?

gornyhuy · 01-15-2004, 03:26 PM

Much better!
just search on google for an html tutorial...

Still loads way too slowly and the freehosting sucks, get a cheap host.

PlayGirl · 01-15-2004, 03:28 PM

Looking good...

< center > ... < /center >

or

table align="center"

http://www.w3schools.com/html

http://www.davesite.com/webstation/html

myjah · 01-15-2004, 06:25 PM

theres alot of dead space right in the middle...maybe bring the title and pics up a little

dirtysouth · 01-15-2004, 06:28 PM

I don't get ANY of the images. Mozilla in the deep south usa.

Rankings · 01-15-2004, 06:30 PM

less is more, specially with links.

01-14-2004, 08:40 PM	#1
madstories Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 45	Anybody wanna critique my web page? http://www.apornhost.com/pornopro/index.htm Hi there, this is my first gallery for TGP. I really want some feedback. Be as mean as you want I don't care, just let me know where I can make improvements. Thanks!

01-14-2004, 09:25 PM	#2
GonePhishing Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Blah Posts: 2,474	Looks good so far. __________________ If Biff Fucks My Mom... I Might Never Be Born...

01-14-2004, 09:33 PM	#3
LittleMack www.pornkings.com Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Florida Baby!! Posts: 4,645	Looks good, I would bring the pic count up to 10...some of the tgp's have a 10 pic min. to accept. Layout is good. Otherwise __________________ [email protected]

01-14-2004, 09:36 PM	#4
mastamindz Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Canada Posts: 3,547	Its to big. Some people still use 800 x 600 resolutions. __________________ If you click here, you will make money.

01-14-2004, 09:38 PM	#5
Spunky I need a beer Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: ♠ Toiletville ♠ Posts: 133,944	Sorry but I would reject that and probably ban you if you submitted that.I don't like scrolling to the right and I hate free host banners both up top and the bottom. Also if you were submitting, that probably would be rejected due to the excessive links __________________ *YOUR INFORMATION HERE*

01-14-2004, 09:46 PM	#6
Ash@phpFX Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 4,292	too many links out

01-15-2004, 12:51 PM	#7
madstories Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 45	Hi, all of your advice was helpful, so thank you so much. Can someone tell me the maximum links out one should use? thanks

01-15-2004, 12:54 PM	#8
Mateo1721 Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 626	I don't like the color in the font, very distracting. Is it a gradient or something, or are my eyes decieving me.

01-15-2004, 01:18 PM	#9
madstories Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 45	What is the maximum amount of inks out I should use?

01-15-2004, 02:05 PM	#11
Sp1nal Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 425	3 links is enough and you better buy hosting. __________________ <br>

01-15-2004, 02:09 PM	#12
msboyfetish Registered User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: PA Posts: 42	check your tags, if your gonna create any page you mine as well make it search engine 'friendly' __________________ "i've never seen anybody as shit all stupid as you"

01-15-2004, 03:19 PM	#13
madstories Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 45	http://www.apornhost.com/pornopro/index2.htm K, this is a newer one, hmmmm... tags eh.. didn't tackle that subject yet! Does anybody know of a website or semething that I can learn how to do this?? I made the website smaller so people with small monitors don't have to scroll right, but is there a way to make it centered on the screen regardless of the size of the viewers monitor?

01-15-2004, 03:26 PM	#14
gornyhuy Chafed. Join Date: May 2002 Location: Face Down in Pussy Posts: 18,041	Much better! just search on google for an html tutorial... Still loads way too slowly and the freehosting sucks, get a cheap host. __________________ icq:159548293

01-15-2004, 03:28 PM	#15
PlayGirl Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Sin City Posts: 1,062	Looking good... < center > ... < /center > or table align="center" http://www.w3schools.com/html http://www.davesite.com/webstation/html

01-15-2004, 06:25 PM	#16
myjah Back in the harbor Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 11,482	theres alot of dead space right in the middle...maybe bring the title and pics up a little __________________ VP of Marketing AVN Media Network Skype: AVNJill [email protected]

01-15-2004, 06:28 PM	#17
dirtysouth Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Mobtown Posts: 2,613	I don't get ANY of the images. Mozilla in the deep south usa. __________________ no sig

01-15-2004, 06:30 PM	#18
Rankings Adult SEO Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: A cat with three legs cannot bury shit in a frozen pond. In addition to that, can you cry underwater? Posts: 10,633	less is more, specially with links.