Anybody wanna critique my web page?
 

http://www.apornhost.com/pornopro/index.htm

Hi there, this is my first gallery for TGP. I really want some
feedback. Be as mean as you want I don't care, just let me know where I can make improvements.

Thanks!

:glugglug

Looks good so far.

Looks good, I would bring the pic count up to 10...some of the tgp's have a 10 pic min. to accept. Layout is good. Otherwise :thumbsup

Its to big. Some people still use 800 x 600 resolutions.

Sorry but I would reject that and probably ban you if you submitted that.I don't like scrolling to the right and I hate free host banners both up top and the bottom. Also if you were submitting, that probably would be rejected due to the excessive links :2 cents:

too many links out :2 cents:

Hi, all of your advice was helpful, so thank you so much.

Can someone tell me the maximum links out one should use?

thanks



:Graucho

I don't like the color in the font, very distracting. Is it a gradient or something, or are my eyes decieving me.

What is the maximum amount of inks out I should use?

2-3 is generally what the tgps list (that's only if you plan to submit to them)

3 links is enough and you better buy hosting.

check your tags, if your gonna create any page you mine as well make it search engine 'friendly'

http://www.apornhost.com/pornopro/index2.htm

K, this is a newer one,

hmmmm... tags eh.. didn't tackle that subject yet!

Does anybody know of a website or semething that I can learn
how to do this??

I made the website smaller so people with small monitors don't have to scroll right, but is there a way to make it centered on the screen regardless of the size of the viewers monitor?

Much better!
just search on google for an html tutorial...

Still loads way too slowly and the freehosting sucks, get a cheap host. :2 cents:

Looking good...

< center > ... < /center >

or

table align="center"


http://www.w3schools.com/html

http://www.davesite.com/webstation/html

theres alot of dead space right in the middle...maybe bring the title and pics up a little

I don't get ANY of the images. Mozilla in the deep south usa. :arcadefre

less is more, specially with links.