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Penthouse_mike · 10-13-2003, 03:10 AM

Neriah,

It is no disrespect to your current designer, but I do agree you should start again. Take a look at the portfolios and prices of the designers below.
The added expense is worth it in better conversion rates.

Designers
www.aaaadultdesign.com
www.webinc.com
www.bluedesignstudio.com
www.dickmansdesign.com
www.WyldeSites.com

uhmmm... ps. cinquante!

Tylo · 10-13-2003, 03:16 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Amputate Your Head
sorry to be the bringer of bad news, but the composition of that site is horrible. There are so many things wrong with it, I don't even know where to begin.... but let's try

1. It doesn't entice me to do anything except close the window. Without that, nothing else listed below matters, because no one will get that far.

2. Would definately check into the legality of using Playboy's gear. And if you do have the okay, I'm sure it probably doesn't include the mangled display of their emblem.

3. the code is sloppy and your exits don't work.

4. the site warning down at the bottom (that is copied directly from adult.com sites btw... ) is missing the 18 U.S.C. 2257 statement

5. the graphic work... the cutouts, the comp, the text work, the navigation, all of it... is just completely lacking any semblance of what would be considered "good" work.

6. the images in the thumbs on the tour pages are positively atrocious.

My recommendation is, start completely over.

AMP we haven't ever agreed on much but i'm going to agree with you on this one bro

BTW do you need any "Streaming" applications if so check sig

Sausage · 10-13-2003, 03:19 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Amputate Your Head
sorry to be the bringer of bad news, but the composition of that site is horrible. There are so many things wrong with it, I don't even know where to begin.... but let's try

1. It doesn't entice me to do anything except close the window. Without that, nothing else listed below matters, because no one will get that far.

2. Would definately check into the legality of using Playboy's gear. And if you do have the okay, I'm sure it probably doesn't include the mangled display of their emblem.

3. the code is sloppy and your exits don't work.

4. the site warning down at the bottom (that is copied directly from adult.com sites btw... ) is missing the 18 U.S.C. 2257 statement

5. the graphic work... the cutouts, the comp, the text work, the navigation, all of it... is just completely lacking any semblance of what would be considered "good" work.

6. the images in the thumbs on the tour pages are positively atrocious.

My recommendation is, start completely over.

I agree.

Neriah this is good advice, while AMP is not the best designer out there, he is very good and getting better and he definitely knows his stuff. I am really impressed he would take the time to give you some pointers !

BlueDesignStudios · 10-13-2003, 03:22 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Penthouse_mike

www.aaaadultdesign.com
www.webinc.com
www.bluedesignstudio.com
www.dickmansdesign.com
www.WyldeSites.com

Thanks Mike!

Neriah: We'd be happy to rebuild your tour, check out our portfolio: http://www.bluedesignstudios.com and send me an email if you like what you see

Neriah Davis · 10-13-2003, 03:27 AM

Okay, I appreciate your candor!
This is my 4th tour this year...struggling with it....I will probably be in touch with some of you very soon.
Like I said, I do appreciate your honest advice. That is the only way to get a better product out there and make us all more $$!!

myjah · 10-13-2003, 07:45 AM

you go girl...you're HOT! Would be nice to see a little more than just free head shots...people need to be enticed to pay.

RedShoe · 10-13-2003, 09:56 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Sausage

I agree.

Neriah this is good advice, while AMP is not the best designer out there...

I was thinking the same thing. Who the fuck does he think he is offering advice? BWAHAHAHAHAHAAAA. Maybe if he pulled his head out of his ass long enough, he might be able to learn a few things about design.

EZRhino · 10-13-2003, 11:53 AM

Looks nice just needs better design and better flow.

Hank_Heartland · 10-13-2003, 03:13 PM

I have to agree with AMP on this one...Too much to fix start over with one of the recommended design firms

EvilDan · 10-13-2003, 03:56 PM

Gday all

I think some of you are being waaaaay to critical of this tour IMO.

I have over 450 front ends, and some of the most bullshit damn awful ones convert like the bejesus

And with sites we spent days in developing, conversion suck like a 2 bit whore

The question is "how can you get more traffic across your site, and worry less about the design aspects".

Too many people these days get hung up on design, and never get their product out there

One of the biggest names in the industry tought me that lesson, when I spent tens of thousands of $$$ and months of work designing Adults.com. At the end of the day, all that mattered was traffic, and not the design.

Another good lesson is Sex.com

Sex.com is a mighty site on a mighty URL designed to do mighty things. But people keep telling me it made more money when it was a banner farm under Cohens skullduggery

Concentrate on what you do best. Get webmasters to see you have the right product, and get them to give you their traffic. Turn on your charms babe ;-)

An old lesson from an old dog downunder

PS - Hank old mate, I cant wait to have a Jack Daniels or 15 with ya in Vancouver next week

Amputate Your Head · 10-13-2003, 04:08 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by EvilDan
Gday all

I think some of you are being waaaaay to critical of this tour IMO.

I have over 450 front ends, and some of the most bullshit damn awful ones convert like the bejesus

And with sites we spent days in developing, conversion suck like a 2 bit whore

The question is "how can you get more traffic across your site, and worry less about the design aspects".

Too many people these days get hung up on design, and never get their product out there

One of the biggest names in the industry tought me that lesson, when I spent tens of thousands of $$$ and months of work designing Adults.com. At the end of the day, all that mattered was traffic, and not the design.

Another good lesson is Sex.com

Sex.com is a mighty site on a mighty URL designed to do mighty things. But people keep telling me it made more money when it was a banner farm under Cohens skullduggery

Concentrate on what you do best. Get webmasters to see you have the right product, and get them to give you their traffic. Turn on your charms babe ;-)

An old lesson from an old dog downunder

PS - Hank old mate, I cant wait to have a Jack Daniels or 15 with ya in Vancouver next week

throwing more traffic at something that's broken is not a solution. It's a bandaid. Neither does "turning on the charm" and seducing webmasters to push it take the place of good form.
She asked for a critique and she got it. "Bullshit awful" tours (as you put it) have their place, but a Playmate's site is not it. Certain things need to be presented in certain ways. You wouldn't advertise the Sunday Monster Truck Rally in the style of a feminine hygiene product spot and then argue that it just needs more viewers to be successful would you? Of course not.

AMp

sheldonjuan · 10-13-2003, 04:09 PM

your image is cut out isnt very nice, it could use some touching up

Abyss_Vee · 10-13-2003, 04:10 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Neriah Davis
Okay, I appreciate your candor!
This is my 4th tour this year...struggling with it....I will probably be in touch with some of you very soon.
Like I said, I do appreciate your honest advice. That is the only way to get a better product out there and make us all more $$!!

icq me if u need any help with the design

x-vision · 10-13-2003, 04:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by RockDaddy
On page two, every thumb is linked to your join page. I have not yet decided to join but am still looking to see what all I will get inside (as a surfer). Link the thumbs to a larger pic and tell me what I'm going to find of that girl after joining.

Nice design, work more on the salesmanship.

right on

Hardcore J · 10-13-2003, 04:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Amputate Your Head
i don't really recommend designers anymore... there are alot of really good ones, and I've chosen not to favor any of them in particular over another. Someone always ends up getting pissed off at me.

http://www.wyldesites.com/

TheFLY · 10-13-2003, 04:14 PM

i'm not reading all this crap ICQ me if you want a real opinion

1622420

Neriah Davis · 10-13-2003, 05:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Amputate Your Head

throwing more traffic at something that's broken is not a solution. It's a bandaid. Neither does "turning on the charm" and seducing webmasters to push it take the place of good form.
She asked for a critique and she got it. "Bullshit awful" tours (as you put it) have their place, but a Playmate's site is not it. Certain things need to be presented in certain ways. You wouldn't advertise the Sunday Monster Truck Rally in the style of a feminine hygiene product spot and then argue that it just needs more viewers to be successful would you? Of course not.

AMp

Amp, I have to agree with you...I only want to really promote this once it is done right. I want to feel proud of my product.
I don't want to blow my chance with the webmaster's traffic. This new tour is actually converting way better than the last, but it's still not enough! What do you think about a contest here? Some cash, sweet prizes, etc. I know you won't refer me to anyone, but what do you think about that idea?

Lensman · 10-13-2003, 05:23 PM

1. What a babe

2. Who did those cutouts? Reminds me of a Brad Shaw site!

BradShaw · 10-13-2003, 06:00 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Lensman
1. What a babe

2. Who did those cutouts? Reminds me of a Brad Shaw site!

Cheap shot. Our sites are all designed by the leading designers in the business. I guess there are still people who like porn star content, look at vivid.

TheFLY · 10-13-2003, 07:01 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Equinox
You're a gorgous woman. I would really suggest that you find yourself a professional designer that can clean up the site and the webmaster area. Looks a little too amateurish for a professional playmate like you are.

Yum yum!

ya

tony286 · 10-13-2003, 07:04 PM

looks good

HEARTBREAKER · 10-13-2003, 07:21 PM

great!

sheldonjuan · 10-13-2003, 07:34 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Lensman
1. What a babe

2. Who did those cutouts? Reminds me of a Brad Shaw site!

I think I just said that

sheldonjuan · 10-13-2003, 07:38 PM

I need a pass to the members area, then I can give you further advice..

TheFLY · 10-13-2003, 08:09 PM

It's not really her. It's SLY from GFY -- same ICQ#

<img src="http://www.pottyguard.com/assets/images/hands.jpg">

BlueDesignStudios · 10-13-2003, 08:17 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by sheldonjuan
I need a pass to the members area, then I can give you further advice..

Neriah Davis · 10-13-2003, 09:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by TheFLY
It's not really her. It's SLY from GFY -- same ICQ#

<img src="http://www.pottyguard.com/assets/images/hands.jpg">

Sorry babe...you are wrong! Sly's ICQ # is 190099545
mine is # 190667858

But nice try sweetie!

Neriah Davis · 10-13-2003, 09:53 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BlueDesignStudios

Hey, I am open to options! ICQ me 190667858

SleazyDream · 10-13-2003, 10:06 PM

I'm sorry - but I have a hard time believing you're really Neriah Davis.

I think that if you are indeed Neriah you should post a pic of yourself proving such - holding a piece of paper with a marker that says 'GFY' on it or 'fuck you sleazydream'

I'm not talking nude or anything nauthty, just something to prove you are indeed who you say you are.

otherwise you're just some jackassed lame assed webmaster with a licence to promote Neriah's pics fucking with everyone here on GFY.

untill you post proof, as far as I'm concerned you're a FAKER.

Pad · 10-13-2003, 10:16 PM

I could tell you what to do to enhance your tour page, but all that sticks out in my narcotic coated memory is your sexi bodi half naked and being adorable. sorry to shower you with more compliments, but you should thank god you can live off your beauty... If I met you in real life I'd be speachless and probably have a panic attack, nice work

Neriah Davis · 10-13-2003, 10:26 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by SleazyDream
I'm sorry - but I have a hard time believing you're really Neriah Davis.

I think that if you are indeed Neriah you should post a pic of yourself proving such - holding a piece of paper with a marker that says 'GFY' on it or 'fuck you sleazydream'

I'm not talking nude or anything nauthty, just something to prove you are indeed who you say you are.

otherwise you're just some jackassed lame assed webmaster with a licence to promote Neriah's pics fucking with everyone here on GFY.

untill you post proof, as far as I'm concerned you're a FAKER.

Okay Mr. Smarty Pants....I mean Sleazy Dream!

p.s. it's all love! LOL

SleazyDream · 10-13-2003, 10:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Neriah Davis

Okay Mr. Smarty Pants....I mean Sleazy Dream!

p.s. it's all love! LOL

I'm a believer.

Thank you

Pad · 10-13-2003, 10:28 PM

don't h8 on her!
masturb8 on her!

KRL · 10-13-2003, 10:28 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by EvilDan
Gday all

I think some of you are being waaaaay to critical of this tour IMO.

I have over 450 front ends, and some of the most bullshit damn awful ones convert like the bejesus

And with sites we spent days in developing, conversion suck like a 2 bit whore

The question is "how can you get more traffic across your site, and worry less about the design aspects".

Too many people these days get hung up on design, and never get their product out there

One of the biggest names in the industry tought me that lesson, when I spent tens of thousands of $$$ and months of work designing Adults.com. At the end of the day, all that mattered was traffic, and not the design.

Another good lesson is Sex.com

Sex.com is a mighty site on a mighty URL designed to do mighty things. But people keep telling me it made more money when it was a banner farm under Cohens skullduggery

Concentrate on what you do best. Get webmasters to see you have the right product, and get them to give you their traffic. Turn on your charms babe ;-)

An old lesson from an old dog downunder

PS - Hank old mate, I cant wait to have a Jack Daniels or 15 with ya in Vancouver next week

EXACTLY! EXACTLY! EXACTLY!

Designs are just that designs. Nothing more.

If there is one thing I've learned in all my 20 years in the adult biz is the guys are buying the "turn on" connection they feel with the girl(s) whose images they see.

It doesn't matter what the setting is or any other design bs. If they fall in love with that girl the credit card is coming out.

Neriah, its all about you. They are buying YOU! The look in your eyes, the sensuality and sexuality radiating from your body and soul is what is closing the sale, nothing else.

They are buying because they want to see more pics of you. They could care less what the fucking graphics and buttons and surrounding color schemes look like on your site.

Place the focus on nailing that 1-on-1 connection with your potential customers. That's what will increase sales.

Neriah Davis · 10-13-2003, 10:35 PM

Wow!
Some good vibes at GFY! I never dreamed! LOL
Thanks guys, I appreciate the support

I also appreciate the criticism. We never grow if we aren't challenged. I am seriously considering a design contest though. Truth is, I need a revamp and soon! Look for a contest in the VERY near future! I'll be over here brewing up a sweet prize!

Hank_Heartland · 10-13-2003, 10:36 PM

EvilDan,

see you next week for 15 JD's

Sleazy, your starting to sound like Brad Shaw

Ms. Davis, listen to advise and FIX THE FUCKIN TOUR!!!

No matter how beautiful you are IT SUCKS

EvilDan · 10-13-2003, 11:10 PM

Neriah - Leave the tour - go for the business. You already said you have had 4 goes at it. The designers of this world will never be happy with any design - Ever!

KRL - Thanks mate - well said

Hank - It will be a pleasure to drink copious amounts of JD with ya mate. And for the record, I think parts of your site sucks, but how can you or anybody else argue with the highest celebrity conversions on the planet? MrSkin.com rocks for all the right reasons - content!

KRL · 10-13-2003, 11:23 PM

Neriah,

Not sure if you any of these already, but here are some enhanced features "marketing pitches" that will increase signups. Again, what you want to do is power max the connection and impression of 1-on-1 interactivity with the prospective member.

* * * * * * * * * *

"Members Get Me Up Close & Personal."

My Sexy Audio Fantasies Just For You!

As a Member, you'll get unlimited access to hear all my sexy audio fantasies. I'll even tell you how to send me your special fantasy requests you'd like to hear when I do my updated stories. My voice is soft and sultry and you'll get so turned on just listening to me talk sexy and nasty for you all night long.

The Secret Phone Number For My Members Only Home Answering Machine

As a Member, I'll give you my secret members only phone number so you can call me and record your sexy fantasies for me to hear.
And I might surprise you and call or e-mail you back if you get me all turned on too.

(Neriah, you can use a free online service like eFax that has voice mail built in for this feature by the way)

Take Me To Bed With You!

As a Member, you'll get access to lots of my sizzling Neriah playthings to order. Like my ultra hot naughty Neriah pillow case, that has a full head shot of me on one side and when you flip me over a full length body shot of me.

I've got lots of other goodies made just for you in my member's section, like posters, my calendar, and my very private home videos.

As a Member, you can enter all my contests to win lots of xtra hot goodies and special fun things.

Become a member right now and lets have some exciting fun together!

* * * * * * * * * *

sheldonjuan · 10-13-2003, 11:28 PM

sleazy- I'm impressed! way to use reverse pschycology to get her to show another pic

Lensman · 10-13-2003, 11:34 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by BradShaw

Cheap shot. Our sites are all designed by the leading designers in the business. I guess there are still people who like porn star content, look at vivid.

Very defensive!

EvilDan · 10-13-2003, 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by KRL
Neriah,

Not sure if you any of these already, but here are some enhanced features "marketing pitches" that will increase signups. Again, what you want to do is power max the connection and impression of 1-on-1 interactivity with the prospective member.

* * * * * * * * * *

"Members Get Me Up Close & Personal."

My Sexy Audio Fantasies Just For You!

As a Member, you'll get unlimited access to hear all my sexy audio fantasies. I'll even tell you how to send me your special fantasy requests you'd like to hear when I do my updated stories. My voice is soft and sultry and you'll get so turned on just listening to me talk sexy and nasty for you all night long.

The Secret Phone Number For My Members Only Home Answering Machine

As a Member, I'll give you my secret members only phone number so you can call me and record your sexy fantasies for me to hear.
And I might surprise you and call or e-mail you back if you get me all turned on too.

(Neriah, you can use a free online service like eFax that has voice mail built in for this feature by the way)

Take Me To Bed With You!

As a Member, you'll get access to lots of my sizzling Neriah playthings to order. Like my ultra hot naughty Neriah pillow case, that has a full head shot of me on one side and when you flip me over a full length body shot of me.

I've got lots of other goodies made just for you in my member's section, like posters, my calendar, and my very private home videos.

As a Member, you can enter all my contests to win lots of xtra hot goodies and special fun things.

Become a member right now and lets have some exciting fun together!

* * * * * * * * * *

This is "THE STUFF" you should be listening to, learning and absorbing

Neriah Davis · 10-13-2003, 11:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by EvilDan

This is "THE STUFF" you should be listening to, learning and absorbing

I have emailed him already...I want to pick his brain

jonesonyou · 10-14-2003, 12:06 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by RockDaddy
On page two, every thumb is linked to your join page. I have not yet decided to join but am still looking to see what all I will get inside (as a surfer). Link the thumbs to a larger pic and tell me what I'm going to find of that girl after joining.

Nice design, work more on the salesmanship.

I was also suprised to find no larger pics.

Micah - Drizunk · 10-14-2003, 12:12 AM

FUCK!

Im so single!!!!

Neriah Davis · 10-14-2003, 12:58 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by jonesonyou

I was also suprised to find no larger pics.

Yes, how many sample pics should we show....3?

FUCKuPAYme · 10-14-2003, 01:14 AM

Didn't you go out with Roger V from Pornkings.com?

FUCKuPAYme · 10-14-2003, 01:22 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by SleazyDream

I'm a believer.

Thank you

thats what I call OWNED

FUCKuPAYme · 10-14-2003, 01:31 AM

what you should do is get someone like adult.com, Pornkings.com, Hawgscash or someone who knows the biz and have them build your site and put it in there program. on top of having your own site. make the most you can.

that way you get instant traffic. what type of program do you have?

SLY1 · 10-14-2003, 02:32 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by jonesonyou

I was also suprised to find no larger pics.

LIKE THIS?

SLY1 · 10-14-2003, 03:22 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by FUCKuPAYme
what you should do is get someone like adult.com, Pornkings.com, Hawgscash or someone who knows the biz and have them build your site and put it in there program. on top of having your own site. make the most you can.

that way you get instant traffic. what type of program do you have?

Neriah would LOVE to be a part of the adult.com family!!

10-13-2003, 03:27 AM	#55
Neriah Davis Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Westsiiiiiiiide! Posts: 578	Okay, I appreciate your candor! This is my 4th tour this year...struggling with it....I will probably be in touch with some of you very soon. Like I said, I do appreciate your honest advice. That is the only way to get a better product out there and make us all more $$!! __________________ First Class Playmate Content! Watch my Video!

10-13-2003, 03:13 PM	#59
Hank_Heartland Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: chicago, il Posts: 3,987	I have to agree with AMP on this one...Too much to fix start over with one of the recommended design firms __________________ Icq = 459565429 AIM = butlerhankb http://stripperpins.com Twitter = @stripperpins Facebook = Stripperpins.com [email protected]

10-13-2003, 04:09 PM	#62
sheldonjuan Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 875	your image is cut out isnt very nice, it could use some touching up __________________ fuck it, I dont need a sig!

10-13-2003, 07:21 PM	#72
HEARTBREAKER Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 2,984	great! __________________ An Adult IT Staffing Solutions Company email: [email protected] icq: 418366319 Tel.#: 1-702-940-0789 (U.S. Toll Free)

10-13-2003, 07:38 PM	#74
sheldonjuan Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 875	I need a pass to the members area, then I can give you further advice.. __________________ fuck it, I dont need a sig!

10-13-2003, 03:10 AM	#51
Penthouse_mike Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Silicon Valley Posts: 317	Neriah, It is no disrespect to your current designer, but I do agree you should start again. Take a look at the portfolios and prices of the designers below. The added expense is worth it in better conversion rates. Designers www.aaaadultdesign.com www.webinc.com www.bluedesignstudio.com www.dickmansdesign.com www.WyldeSites.com uhmmm... ps. cinquante!

10-13-2003, 07:45 AM	#56
myjah Back in the harbor Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 11,482	you go girl...you're HOT! Would be nice to see a little more than just free head shots...people need to be enticed to pay.

10-13-2003, 11:53 AM	#58
EZRhino Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: couch Posts: 6,258	Looks nice just needs better design and better flow.

10-13-2003, 03:56 PM	#60
EvilDan So Fucking Banned Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: I like being Down Under Posts: 179	Gday all I think some of you are being waaaaay to critical of this tour IMO. I have over 450 front ends, and some of the most bullshit damn awful ones convert like the bejesus And with sites we spent days in developing, conversion suck like a 2 bit whore The question is "how can you get more traffic across your site, and worry less about the design aspects". Too many people these days get hung up on design, and never get their product out there One of the biggest names in the industry tought me that lesson, when I spent tens of thousands of $$$ and months of work designing Adults.com. At the end of the day, all that mattered was traffic, and not the design. Another good lesson is Sex.com Sex.com is a mighty site on a mighty URL designed to do mighty things. But people keep telling me it made more money when it was a banner farm under Cohens skullduggery Concentrate on what you do best. Get webmasters to see you have the right product, and get them to give you their traffic. Turn on your charms babe ;-) An old lesson from an old dog downunder PS - Hank old mate, I cant wait to have a Jack Daniels or 15 with ya in Vancouver next week

10-13-2003, 04:14 PM	#66
TheFLY So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: http://www.thefly.net/ --- Quit your job and live off steady traffic. Posts: 11,856	i'm not reading all this crap ICQ me if you want a real opinion 1622420

10-13-2003, 05:23 PM	#68
Lensman GFY Chaperone Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Adult.com Posts: 9,846	1. What a babe 2. Who did those cutouts? Reminds me of a Brad Shaw site!

10-13-2003, 07:04 PM	#71
tony286 lurker Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: atlanta Posts: 57,021	looks good

10-13-2003, 08:09 PM	#75
TheFLY So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: http://www.thefly.net/ --- Quit your job and live off steady traffic. Posts: 11,856	It's not really her. It's SLY from GFY -- same ICQ# <img src="http://www.pottyguard.com/assets/images/hands.jpg">

10-13-2003, 10:06 PM	#79
SleazyDream I'm here for SPORT Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Phone # (401) 285-0696 Posts: 41,470	I'm sorry - but I have a hard time believing you're really Neriah Davis. I think that if you are indeed Neriah you should post a pic of yourself proving such - holding a piece of paper with a marker that says 'GFY' on it or 'fuck you sleazydream' I'm not talking nude or anything nauthty, just something to prove you are indeed who you say you are. otherwise you're just some jackassed lame assed webmaster with a licence to promote Neriah's pics fucking with everyone here on GFY. untill you post proof, as far as I'm concerned you're a FAKER. __________________ This dog, is dog, a dog, good dog, way dog, to dog, keep dog, an dog, idiot dog, busy dog, for dog, 20 dog, seconds dog! Now read without the word dog.

10-13-2003, 10:16 PM	#80
Pad elephants dont swat flies Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,262	I could tell you what to do to enhance your tour page, but all that sticks out in my narcotic coated memory is your sexi bodi half naked and being adorable. sorry to shower you with more compliments, but you should thank god you can live off your beauty... If I met you in real life I'd be speachless and probably have a panic attack, nice work __________________

10-13-2003, 10:28 PM	#83
Pad elephants dont swat flies Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,262	don't h8 on her! masturb8 on her! __________________

10-13-2003, 10:35 PM	#85
Neriah Davis Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Westsiiiiiiiide! Posts: 578	Wow! Some good vibes at GFY! I never dreamed! LOL Thanks guys, I appreciate the support I also appreciate the criticism. We never grow if we aren't challenged. I am seriously considering a design contest though. Truth is, I need a revamp and soon! Look for a contest in the VERY near future! I'll be over here brewing up a sweet prize! __________________ First Class Playmate Content! Watch my Video!

10-13-2003, 10:36 PM	#86
Hank_Heartland Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: chicago, il Posts: 3,987	EvilDan, see you next week for 15 JD's Sleazy, your starting to sound like Brad Shaw Ms. Davis, listen to advise and FIX THE FUCKIN TOUR!!! No matter how beautiful you are IT SUCKS __________________ Icq = 459565429 AIM = butlerhankb http://stripperpins.com Twitter = @stripperpins Facebook = Stripperpins.com [email protected]

10-13-2003, 11:10 PM	#87
EvilDan So Fucking Banned Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: I like being Down Under Posts: 179	Neriah - Leave the tour - go for the business. You already said you have had 4 goes at it. The designers of this world will never be happy with any design - Ever! KRL - Thanks mate - well said Hank - It will be a pleasure to drink copious amounts of JD with ya mate. And for the record, I think parts of your site sucks, but how can you or anybody else argue with the highest celebrity conversions on the planet? MrSkin.com rocks for all the right reasons - content!

10-13-2003, 11:23 PM	#88
KRL Entrepreneur Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 31,429	Neriah, Not sure if you any of these already, but here are some enhanced features "marketing pitches" that will increase signups. Again, what you want to do is power max the connection and impression of 1-on-1 interactivity with the prospective member. * * * * * * * * * * "Members Get Me Up Close & Personal." My Sexy Audio Fantasies Just For You! As a Member, you'll get unlimited access to hear all my sexy audio fantasies. I'll even tell you how to send me your special fantasy requests you'd like to hear when I do my updated stories. My voice is soft and sultry and you'll get so turned on just listening to me talk sexy and nasty for you all night long. The Secret Phone Number For My Members Only Home Answering Machine As a Member, I'll give you my secret members only phone number so you can call me and record your sexy fantasies for me to hear. And I might surprise you and call or e-mail you back if you get me all turned on too. (Neriah, you can use a free online service like eFax that has voice mail built in for this feature by the way) Take Me To Bed With You! As a Member, you'll get access to lots of my sizzling Neriah playthings to order. Like my ultra hot naughty Neriah pillow case, that has a full head shot of me on one side and when you flip me over a full length body shot of me. I've got lots of other goodies made just for you in my member's section, like posters, my calendar, and my very private home videos. As a Member, you can enter all my contests to win lots of xtra hot goodies and special fun things. Become a member right now and lets have some exciting fun together! * * * * * * * * * * __________________ If you would like to develop your domains, you can lease inexpensive foreign labor from the leaders in the field at iWebmasters.com TO LOWER YOUR COSTS AND INCREASE YOUR PRODUCTION! * * * * * * * * * * * * Domains Adult News KRL's Newsletter Biz Tips Just Listed Domains

10-13-2003, 11:28 PM	#89
sheldonjuan Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 875	sleazy- I'm impressed! way to use reverse pschycology to get her to show another pic __________________ fuck it, I dont need a sig!

10-14-2003, 12:12 AM	#94
Micah - Drizunk Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 759	FUCK! Im so single!!!! __________________ Sig was always too big...

10-14-2003, 01:14 AM	#96
FUCKuPAYme Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: LA Posts: 1,023	Didn't you go out with Roger V from Pornkings.com? __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

10-14-2003, 01:31 AM	#98
FUCKuPAYme Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: LA Posts: 1,023	what you should do is get someone like adult.com, Pornkings.com, Hawgscash or someone who knows the biz and have them build your site and put it in there program. on top of having your own site. make the most you can. that way you get instant traffic. what type of program do you have? __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.