Help with text - GoFuckYourself.com

harvey · 07-08-2003, 11:25 PM

I'm finishing this site and I need some help with the text, can be writing style, but mainly if there's any mistake. Everything such as links won't work, I just want help with this page

edited, thanx Chowda

chowda · 07-08-2003, 11:26 PM

rework ur url

chowda · 07-08-2003, 11:39 PM

ur service price plans faq buttons on top.. maybe u should drop the shadow. it looks blurry with them

harvey · 07-08-2003, 11:42 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by chowda
ur service price plans faq buttons on top.. maybe u should drop the shadow. it looks blurry with them

OK suggestion taken, thanx

but I'm more intrested in the text thingy right now

Kanoealoha · 07-08-2003, 11:47 PM

Introducing the most revolutionary concept for adult webmasters needs,

well if you keep the sentence like that you need to either change adult webmasters to adult webmaster's or
but i think for THE adult webmaster's needs...would be best, flows easier...i think...

could be wrong

edit:

We strive to give you the better possible price

i would think...

to give you the best possible price...

Bucho · 07-08-2003, 11:51 PM

look up michael - he will do txt for your whole site fast and very cheap: uin 84891270

Kanoealoha · 07-08-2003, 11:53 PM

Adult Worker, the creators of the Adult Outsourcing concept

maybe you should first point out your accomplishment...

From the creators of Adult Outsourcing comes Adult Worker...

I don't know, I don't know shit...

harvey · 07-08-2003, 11:58 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bucho
look up michael - he will do txt for your whole site fast and very cheap: uin 84891270

Thanx, will contact him

Kanoealoha: thanx a lot

Kanoealoha · 07-09-2003, 12:04 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by harvey

Thanx, will contact him

Kanoealoha: thanx a lot

Oh yeah, nothing like drunk proofreading

machineg · 07-09-2003, 12:21 AM

Something is a mess with the rollovers

eiht_98 · 07-09-2003, 01:14 AM

"Introducing the most revolutionary concept for adult webmasters needs, Adult Worker, the creators of the Adult Outsourcing concept now brings to you a suite of solutions that will cover almost every single aspect of your business! You just let us build your biz, and you keep in charge of counting the money! From design "

I don't like text to be so close to the border. 1 or 2 px from the left border would be better. Oh well, this is just my

07-08-2003, 11:25 PM	#1
harvey Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: 127.0.0.1 Posts: 9,266	Help with text I'm finishing this site and I need some help with the text, can be writing style, but mainly if there's any mistake. Everything such as links won't work, I just want help with this page edited, thanx Chowda __________________ This post is endorsed by CIA, KGB, MI6, the Mafia, Illuminati, Kim Jong Il, Worldwide Ninjas Association, Klingon Empire and lolcats. Don't mess around with it, just accept it and embrace the truth Last edited by harvey; 07-08-2003 at 11:30 PM..

07-08-2003, 11:26 PM	#2
chowda Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Gooch city Posts: 9,527	rework ur url __________________ Someone finds you... 2007 PS: Nationalnet is the best host I've ever had. And i tried alot of them.

07-08-2003, 11:39 PM	#3
chowda Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Gooch city Posts: 9,527	ur service price plans faq buttons on top.. maybe u should drop the shadow. it looks blurry with them __________________ Someone finds you... 2007 PS: Nationalnet is the best host I've ever had. And i tried alot of them.

07-08-2003, 11:47 PM	#5
Kanoealoha Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Happy Valley Posts: 1,261	Introducing the most revolutionary concept for adult webmasters needs, well if you keep the sentence like that you need to either change adult webmasters to adult webmaster's or but i think for THE adult webmaster's needs...would be best, flows easier...i think... could be wrong edit: We strive to give you the better possible price i would think... to give you the best possible price... Last edited by Kanoealoha; 07-08-2003 at 11:50 PM..

07-08-2003, 11:51 PM	#6
Bucho Confirmed User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 578	look up michael - he will do txt for your whole site fast and very cheap: uin 84891270 __________________ ICQ: 4646141

07-08-2003, 11:53 PM	#7
Kanoealoha Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Happy Valley Posts: 1,261	Adult Worker, the creators of the Adult Outsourcing concept maybe you should first point out your accomplishment... From the creators of Adult Outsourcing comes Adult Worker... I don't know, I don't know shit...

07-09-2003, 12:21 AM	#10
machineg Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 1,090	Something is a mess with the rollovers __________________ SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

07-09-2003, 01:14 AM	#11
eiht_98 Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: EU Posts: 6,103	"Introducing the most revolutionary concept for adult webmasters needs, Adult Worker, the creators of the Adult Outsourcing concept now brings to you a suite of solutions that will cover almost every single aspect of your business! You just let us build your biz, and you keep in charge of counting the money! From design " I don't like text to be so close to the border. 1 or 2 px from the left border would be better. Oh well, this is just my