Help with text
 

I'm finishing this site and I need some help with the text, can be writing style, but mainly if there's any mistake. Everything such as links won't work, I just want help with this page :thumbsup


edited, thanx Chowda

rework ur url

ur service price plans faq buttons on top.. maybe u should drop the shadow. it looks blurry with them

OK suggestion taken, thanx :thumbsup but I'm more intrested in the text thingy right now :)

Introducing the most revolutionary concept for adult webmasters needs,

well if you keep the sentence like that you need to either change adult webmasters to adult webmaster's or
but i think for THE adult webmaster's needs...would be best, flows easier...i think...

could be wrong :)

edit:

We strive to give you the better possible price

i would think...

to give you the best possible price...

look up michael - he will do txt for your whole site fast and very cheap: uin 84891270

Adult Worker, the creators of the Adult Outsourcing concept

maybe you should first point out your accomplishment...

From the creators of Adult Outsourcing comes Adult Worker...


I don't know, I don't know shit...:glugglug

Thanx, will contact him

Kanoealoha: thanx a lot :winkwink:

Oh yeah, nothing like drunk proofreading :1orglaugh :1orglaugh :1orglaugh :glugglug

Something is a mess with the rollovers

"Introducing the most revolutionary concept for adult webmasters needs, Adult Worker, the creators of the Adult Outsourcing concept now brings to you a suite of solutions that will cover almost every single aspect of your business! You just let us build your biz, and you keep in charge of counting the money! From design "

I don't like text to be so close to the border. 1 or 2 px from the left border would be better. Oh well, this is just my :2 cents: