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money3xx · 02-17-2003, 09:40 PM

Hi guys , a week ago my site came out and many of you told me that the design was shitty.I changed all of it with a brand new tour.Check it out and let me know what you think.Remember to click refresh if you visited it recently.
http://www.carribeanpussy.com

pr0 · 02-17-2003, 09:46 PM

looks good to me bro

[Labret] · 02-17-2003, 09:49 PM

Unleash_Hell · 02-17-2003, 09:52 PM

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Originally posted by money3xx
Check it out and let me know what you think.URL]

fuckin' bad spelling in there man.

money3xx · 02-17-2003, 09:55 PM

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Originally posted by Unleash_Hell

fuckin' bad spelling in there man.

Well, english is not my first language.If you want you can help...

pine · 02-17-2003, 09:59 PM

Love the girls.

The design, well...not so much. Don't give me a pop-up on the very first page. Two "warning" pages is one...maybe two...warning pages too many.

Have someone proof read and correct spelling and grammar before you export from photoshop.

But don't let any of that discourage you. What is your first language?

money3xx · 02-17-2003, 10:07 PM

I am from Italy, but I live in Miami and Jamaica.
Thank you for your advises, they are very welcome.Keep reviewing it so I can adjust it.By the way, where would you advertise it?

Tipsy · 02-17-2003, 10:08 PM

Nice looking girls and a better design although the warning page is odd as a second page and doesn't fit in.

However...after clicking on the sample vids I wouldn't join your site were I a surfer. Very badly lit, badly over-compressed small vids just wouldn't make me part with hard earned cash.

Unleash_Hell · 02-17-2003, 10:12 PM

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Originally posted by Tipsy
Very badly lit, badly over-compressed small vids

Gotta get that video quality better.
It will be the most important thing you do.

bhutocracy · 02-17-2003, 10:15 PM

your images should be a little more than half the size they are..
>optimize

money3xx · 02-17-2003, 10:18 PM

I know about the movies, we didn't have professional material because we didn't plan to do porno movies.Next month we are going to Puerto Rico with all the right stuff.I like this job and I want to do it full time.We gonna go all over the islands and video everywhere.Soon we gonna be big!I hope so......

gigi · 02-17-2003, 10:25 PM

The tour looks nice.

Here are some of the spelling/grammatical corrections I found:

"He met Alicia on the beach and FELL in love right away. [period] She was so sexy, [comma] he couldn't let her GO."

"....by the way, Rocco was JEALOUS and [had plans for Frank.] Will Rocco's plan succeed?"

" As soon as he arrived he found Tanisha on his BED."

Those are the more 'glaring' errors....other than that, I think it looks good.

money3xx · 02-17-2003, 10:30 PM

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Originally posted by gigi
The tour looks nice.

Here are some of the spelling/grammatical corrections I found:

"He met Alicia on the beach and FELL in love right away. [period] She was so sexy, [comma] he couldn't let her GO."

"....by the way, Rocco was JEALOUS and [had plans for Frank.] Will Rocco's plan succeed?"

" As soon as he arrived he found Tanisha on his BED."

Those are the more 'glaring' errors....other than that, I think it looks good.

Thank you, if I don't fall asleep on my computer I will correct it tonight.

chodadog · 02-17-2003, 10:51 PM

That is a hell of a lot better than the original.

money3xx · 02-17-2003, 10:57 PM

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Originally posted by chodadog
That is a hell of a lot better than the original.

Thank you, a night without sleep then was well worth.Other adjustments are coming by tomorrow night.

02-17-2003, 09:40 PM	#1
money3xx Registered User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: miami Posts: 73	you bashed me, now what? Hi guys , a week ago my site came out and many of you told me that the design was shitty.I changed all of it with a brand new tour.Check it out and let me know what you think.Remember to click refresh if you visited it recently. http://www.carribeanpussy.com __________________ Check out my original site: www.carribeanpussy.com ICQ# 207152971

02-17-2003, 09:46 PM	#2
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02-17-2003, 09:59 PM	#6
pine Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: The Falls, eh Posts: 1,373	Love the girls. The design, well...not so much. Don't give me a pop-up on the very first page. Two "warning" pages is one...maybe two...warning pages too many. Have someone proof read and correct spelling and grammar before you export from photoshop. But don't let any of that discourage you. What is your first language? Last edited by pine; 02-17-2003 at 10:02 PM..

02-17-2003, 10:07 PM	#7
money3xx Registered User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: miami Posts: 73	I am from Italy, but I live in Miami and Jamaica. Thank you for your advises, they are very welcome.Keep reviewing it so I can adjust it.By the way, where would you advertise it? __________________ Check out my original site: www.carribeanpussy.com ICQ# 207152971

02-17-2003, 10:08 PM	#8
Tipsy Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: See sig Posts: 6,989	Nice looking girls and a better design although the warning page is odd as a second page and doesn't fit in. However...after clicking on the sample vids I wouldn't join your site were I a surfer. Very badly lit, badly over-compressed small vids just wouldn't make me part with hard earned cash. Last edited by Tipsy; 02-17-2003 at 10:10 PM..

02-17-2003, 09:49 PM	#3
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02-17-2003, 10:15 PM	#10
bhutocracy Not making A Comeback Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 10,218	your images should be a little more than half the size they are.. >optimize

02-17-2003, 10:18 PM	#11
money3xx Registered User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: miami Posts: 73	I know about the movies, we didn't have professional material because we didn't plan to do porno movies.Next month we are going to Puerto Rico with all the right stuff.I like this job and I want to do it full time.We gonna go all over the islands and video everywhere.Soon we gonna be big!I hope so...... __________________ Check out my original site: www.carribeanpussy.com ICQ# 207152971

02-17-2003, 10:25 PM	#12
gigi Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada Posts: 691	The tour looks nice. Here are some of the spelling/grammatical corrections I found: "He met Alicia on the beach and FELL in love right away. [period] She was so sexy, [comma] he couldn't let her GO." "....by the way, Rocco was JEALOUS and [had plans for Frank.] Will Rocco's plan succeed?" " As soon as he arrived he found Tanisha on his BED." Those are the more 'glaring' errors....other than that, I think it looks good. __________________ eMail ICQ: 32862272

02-17-2003, 10:51 PM	#14
chodadog Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 9,736	That is a hell of a lot better than the original. __________________ 26 + 6 = 1