you bashed me, now what?
 

Hi guys , a week ago my site came out and many of you told me that the design was shitty.I changed all of it with a brand new tour.Check it out and let me know what you think.Remember to click refresh if you visited it recently.
http://www.carribeanpussy.com

looks good to me bro :thumbsup

fuckin' bad spelling in there man.

Well, english is not my first language.If you want you can help...

Love the girls.

The design, well...not so much. Don't give me a pop-up on the very first page. Two "warning" pages is one...maybe two...warning pages too many.

Have someone proof read and correct spelling and grammar before you export from photoshop.

But don't let any of that discourage you. What is your first language?

I am from Italy, but I live in Miami and Jamaica.
Thank you for your advises, they are very welcome.Keep reviewing it so I can adjust it.By the way, where would you advertise it?

Nice looking girls and a better design although the warning page is odd as a second page and doesn't fit in.

However...after clicking on the sample vids I wouldn't join your site were I a surfer. Very badly lit, badly over-compressed small vids just wouldn't make me part with hard earned cash.

Gotta get that video quality better.
It will be the most important thing you do.

:2 cents:

your images should be a little more than half the size they are..
>optimize

I know about the movies, we didn't have professional material because we didn't plan to do porno movies.Next month we are going to Puerto Rico with all the right stuff.I like this job and I want to do it full time.We gonna go all over the islands and video everywhere.Soon we gonna be big!I hope so......

The tour looks nice. :)

Here are some of the spelling/grammatical corrections I found:

"He met Alicia on the beach and FELL in love right away. [period] She was so sexy, [comma] he couldn't let her GO."


"....by the way, Rocco was JEALOUS and [had plans for Frank.] Will Rocco's plan succeed?"

" As soon as he arrived he found Tanisha on his BED."

Those are the more 'glaring' errors....other than that, I think it looks good. :thumbsup

Thank you, if I don't fall asleep on my computer I will correct it tonight.

That is a hell of a lot better than the original.

Thank you, a night without sleep then was well worth.Other adjustments are coming by tomorrow night.