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Originally posted by gigi
The tour looks nice. 
Here are some of the spelling/grammatical corrections I found:
"He met Alicia on the beach and FELL in love right away. [period] She was so sexy, [comma] he couldn't let her GO."
"....by the way, Rocco was JEALOUS and [had plans for Frank.] Will Rocco's plan succeed?"
" As soon as he arrived he found Tanisha on his BED."
Those are the more 'glaring' errors....other than that, I think it looks good. 
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Thank you, if I don't fall asleep on my computer I will correct it tonight.